Yes, I'm doing a story on how the Cheshire cat came to be, Starting with Him as a kitten. I'd like some honest opinions of my first Chapter, It's a little short ,but There'll be more in furute chapters.

A Small silver kitten Sat under a little Shelter made of thick Cardboard. It's eyes glowed an odd Blue-green and In the pale moonlight, It's fur gleamed With odd blue stripes. This Kitten's name, was Cheshie. Cheshie lived in that little shelter with his mother, Ceila, His Brother, seth, And his Sister, Jess. The kitten gave a tiny sigh and turned, trotting back to his family inside. Seth was playing with A small mouse toy while Jess took a nap next to Ceila. Ceila Was curled up In a little blanket that the family called their bed. In the corner was a dish with rainwater collected in it, Beside it was a small pile of food, Dry and meat. Another corner, Next to Seth, Sat three toys. One for each family memeber. There were only three be because seth had his own at the moment. Cheshie walked over to Jess and Took a seat near herm Beginning to groom himself. Soon, Ceila announced that she would go looking for food. Jess went with, Leaving Seth and Cheshie alone. "Want to explore?" Seth Broke the Silence. "W-What? Mom said to stay put!" Cheshie cried in alarm. "She won't even know we left!" Seth Declared, "Come on!" Cheshie looked terrified, but didn't want to be left alone. "... Okay..." And So, The Cheshire cat's story began.