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1:51am Jul 3 2013
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It crept up on me.I could feel it's breath on my neck.I just stood there, standing as still as a stone.As I began to slowly turn around,I heard it begin to growl.I moved my hand down to my waist and tried to pull out my dagger.The creature stopped growling,stared at my hand and began to sniff me.What was I to do?With my back still turned to the beast,I reached me arm behind me to feel it.My eyes were clamped shut.I felt something moist and bumpy.It feels like a dog's nose.Maybe its a.....................................................................................
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1:51pm Sep 28 2013
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It's purtty good. Although, you used the word I a little bit to much. And, of you could feel its breath on your neck, then why was the animal at your waist?
I\'m The Slenderman\'s wifey <3 Batman\'s our kid <33
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1:54pm Sep 28 2013
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Oh, and ya mind checking out my story? :)
I\'m The Slenderman\'s wifey <3 Batman\'s our kid <33
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6:55pm Sep 28 2013
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nice story impressive
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6:56pm Sep 28 2013
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7:08pm Sep 28 2013
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11:55pm Sep 28 2013
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I\'m The Slenderman\'s wifey <3 Batman\'s our kid <33
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4:31am Dec 12 2013
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Could be animal standing on back legs or could be bending down to sniff!!!
I hatch spoilt eggs! Send those spoilt eggs you do not want!
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12:06pm Dec 15 2013
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Locked for necro posting.
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