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Ragnarok

11:04am Mar 15 2009

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These are a couple of stories I wrote for Blutytearz and Emeraldis, respectively. If anyone attempts to steal them I will wreak terrible, terrible vengeance. =3

Blutytearz's Story:

The atmosphere in the Graveyard was chill and clammy, with tendrils of mist that wove through the headstones and brushed up against skin and fur in a way that caused shivers up the spine. The wind whistled mournfully through the skeletal trees, creating a ghostly chorus of faint wails that could easily be the ghosts of dead creatu, sobbing. Ranks and ranks of gravestones stretched off into the mist, a name and two dates on every one, moss-grown and neglected. And it was very, very cold.

Spellfyre the black meragon had exactly no idea why she was there. It was something to do with the funny old Veram she’d met in Reiflempor Square. She didn’t like going there, but Bluty had asked her to pop into the bank, and she could hardly argue. And so she had determined to go as fast as possible, in and out before she could possibly be spotted by some terrible gang member. It wasn’t as though she couldn’t take care of herself…but still, best to be careful. Besides, incinerating people made an awful mess.

The old Veram, though, had been entirely unconcerned about the possibility of being mugged or indoctrinated into a gang. He had a pair of tiny spectacles on his nose and books under his arm and he was ambling along blithely in the muggy heat, mumbling to himself.

The only reason she had talked to him was because he had talked first.

“I say, young lady,” he had said, walking bold as brass up to her. “I don’t suppose you’d like an errand, hmm?”

“Uhm, I’m already on one-” she’d begun, and he’d waved his paw impatiently and begun to shuffle away. Suddenly intrigued, she’d run after him.

“What sort of an errand, sir?”

He’d peered at her over his spectacles and raised an eyebrow.

“Interested, are you? Of course.”

“I’ll have to come back later, though-”

“Well, of course, I’ll be here. I’ll tell you then. Goodbye, young lady.”

And without further ado he walked off, leaving Spellfyre feeling partly hurt, partly outraged, and mostly extremely curious.

So she’d gone back later on, and true to his word he was there, seated on a low wall like an old man enjoying the air. He’d smiled placidly as she cautiously approached; as though he’d known for absolute certain she’d turn up again.

“Hello there young lady. Want your errand?”

Stung by his certainty, she’d scowled.

“I might not do it,” she’d warned. He’d shrugged, unconcerned.

“Well, hmm, that doesn’t matter. But could you go to the Graveyard for me? There’ll be a young boy there. Persuade him to come back here, would you? There’s a good girl.”

She wasn’t quite sure, after being so offended by being called ‘good girl’, why she’d then done as he asked.

Now, shivering in the decidedly spooky atmosphere of the graveyard, she wished she hadn’t.

There should be a little boy around here somewhere, if the old Veram was to be believed…but what sort of little boy would hang around here? Maybe he’d got lost…

But as she inched her way around a half-dead tree she spotted a little figure ahead, seated on a gravestone; a skinny little figure, an Ahea by the looks of it, in a blue t-shirt.

She came up behind him and nervously cleared her throat. He spun around in surprise and scowled; his face was pinched and pale, and he began to cough before he spoke. It was a truly unhealthy-sounding cough.

“Who are you?” he demanded, once he’d recovered. “I’m busy.”

“You don’t look busy,” Spellfyre observed. “My name’s Spellfyre. What’s yours?”

“I /am/ busy. And my name’s Valeriy. Why are you here?”

“Uh…there was an old Veram in the marketplace who told me to come here and look for a little boy. And you’re the only little boy here…”

The Ahea paused, then put his fingers round his eyes like spectacles. “Tiny little specs? Stupid patronising attitude?”

“Yes, that’s him,” Spellfyre confirmed, putting her head on one side.

Valeriy scowled and folded his arms. “That’s Zinoviev then. He’s such an old idiot. Tell him I’m not coming.”

He turned away from her and resumed staring out at nothing. Spellfyre went round to the other side of the gravestone so he was facing her again; he looked a little startled at that.

“I don’t think he’ll be very happy about that.”

“He’s never happy about anything. He wants to give me lessons. I /hate/ his lessons.”

“Oh, come now, you’ve gotta have lessons. How else will you learn anything?”

“He’s boring,” Valeriy said flatly, and began to cough again. Spellfyre stood awkwardly, wondering if she should help as he choked and spluttered, but he recovered quickly and wiped his eyes, resuming talking. “I’d rather have lessons with Ioha.”

“He better at it then?” Spellfyre enquired, putting her paws in her pockets and hunching her shoulders against the clinging mist. Valeriy picked at the moss on the gravestone he was seated on, and kicked his heels against it petulantly.

“Yeah. But he only teaches me psychology and Rag says I have to learn other stuff as well and the only other person who can teach me is stupid Zinoviev.”

Musing on this, Spellfyre regarded his sulkily defiant face in some amusement. It was obvious that this was just a kid who didn’t want to go to school; typical little-boy behaviour, in her experience. And there she had been thinking the old Veram had wanted her to do something mysterious and dangerous.

She was rather wondering about the cough, though. It seemed painful and almost life-threatening and brought all her maternal instincts to the fore.

“Come on,” she said, holding out her paw to him. “You can’t stay sitting here forever. It’s spooky out here.”

He hesitated, looking at her mistrustfully, and then shrugged and took her paw. His pale skin was as cold as ice.

“Awright. He’d only come and get me if I stayed out here much longer. The only reason he sent you first was ‘cause he doesn’t like it here, it gives him the creeps.”

This was said with a certain satisfaction. Spellfyre grinned at him as he hopped down off his slightly macabre perch; he returned the grin and bobbed his head.

“Was nice to meet you, I guess,” he said conscientiously, evidently remembering his manners. “Even if you were sent by stupid Zinoviev!”

“No worries, Valeriy. Maybe I’ll see you later.”

“Sure, maybe,” he said with a shrug. “I’ll be about I guess.”

He grinned again, gave her a thumbs-up, and then scurried away into the mists. Spellfyre watched him go, amused and pleased by her meeting, listening to the sound of his cough fade away into the distance.

It was only then she glanced at the gravestone he had been sitting on, and saw the name.

It gave her chills. All manner of chills.

Because the name chipped into the stone was ‘Valeriy’.

Emeraldis' Story:

It was a hot day on Scria, and the five pets tramping along the high road weighed down with backpacks were definitely feeling it.

“How much longer?” Will the Intes whined. “My paws really hurt and the road’s getting steeper!”

“Don’t /whimper/ so much,” his brother DeathFly snapped; he was getting tired of the constant complaining. “Of course the road’s getting steeper; we’re going up a mountain!”

“Look at it this way,” Lorescent the Uilus interrupted, before things could get heated. “Once we get to the top of the mountain, you won’t care if your paws are sore!”

“Why, because we’ll all get eaten?” Will said sourly. Lorescent shrugged.

“I was actually thinking of the view, but whatever.”

Up at the front of the group, striding out and ignoring the bickering that had broken out behind him, was a black Intes who customarily went by the name of StormShadowz. He was the leader of the group, and the one who had proposed this outing in the first place. He looked a fine figure, with his sword and his upright, noble stance that just screamed ‘brave warrior’.

This was somewhat spoiled, though, when the fifth and final figure tapped him on the shoulder and dryly pointed out that his sword had got tangled up in his belt and was jerking in a ridiculous manner with every step.

“Thank you for pointing it out, Groubermyster,” StormShadowz replied rather stiffly, a little offended that his brother had allowed him to walk for probably quite a long time looking like an idiot. The Jaaku smiled enigmatically and shrugged.

And so they all walked on.

Eventually, they came to a stop. There was something in their way.

It was a mountain.

“Okay, we’re here,” StormShadowz announced, dumping his backpack on the ground and dusting off his paws. Will looked up at the mountain and swallowed.

“Does it live here?” he enquired, in a very small voice. StormShadowz shrugged and grinned.

“As far as I can make out. And it is traditional, after all. Okay, it looks like there’s a trail that goes up it; we’ll follow that until we find its lair. Does everyone remember what I told them before we left?”

“I do,” Lorescent said chirpily, putting up her paw. “We mustn’t make any noise unless told to, we must try not to hurt it, we-”

“-must all avoid getting eaten-”

“-must be very careful not to make it too angry.”

StormShadowz shot an evil look at Will, who looked back sulkily.

“Thank you Lorescent, I’m glad someone was paying attention. Onwards and upwards everybody!”

And with that, he grabbed his backpack and surged on up the track. The others trailed after him with varying degrees of enthusiasm.

“Fool’s errand,” DeathFly mumbled, not quite under his breath. “Ridiculous.”

Lorescent was humming as she bounded up the track, trying to catch up with StormShadowz. Will was walking very very slowly, as though he hoped that if he walked slowly enough all the excitement would be passed by the time he got there.

Groubermyster just walked. No-one could ever figure out what he was thinking. They couldn’t even figure out why he’d bothered to come in the first place.

The trail was much steeper than the road had been, and they were all puffing gently by the time it wound itself out on a wide plateau about half-way up. Assembling at the edge, all eyes were immediately drawn by the huge, gaping cave mouth that dominated the whole area.

“It must be in there,” StormShadowz whispered. “Let’s go.”

He began to make his way stealthily towards the cave. Lorescent padded after him without hesitation, and so did Groubermyster; Will and DeathFly hung back a little.

“Do you think it’s…in?” Will enquired in a strangled whisper. DeathFly shrugged.

“I expect so. I don’t hear any distant screams.”

He trotted forwards resignedly; Will, after dithering for a moment, dashed after.

They gathered again just inside the cave, which went back for a long way.

“I’ll go in first, and see about the situation,” StormShadowz declared. “Then I’ll call the rest of you. Wouldn’t want to see you needlessly hurt,” he added magnanimously, and with what he reckoned was admirable bravery and modesty.

The others looked at each other and nodded, although Lorescent did open her mouth to say something before DeathFly trod on her paw.

And so the black Intes set off, further down into the cave.

The rock floor and walls were scored with deep scratches that looked like some vast beast had clawed at them, and there was a thin patina of soot over everything. It got darker and darker as he ventured further, and the atmosphere seemed chill and threatening. And then, down the far end of the corridor, a faint glow became visible, getting marginally brighter as he hurried towards it.

It turned out to be a gathering of dragon eggs, arranged in a natural shallow basin in the rock, each glowing gently with a different shade of light. Entranced StormShadowz ventured closer and reached out to touch the nearest, which pulsed a warm azure, like a tropical sea.

And then a gust of hot charcoal-scented air washed over him, and a rumbling voice that raised echoes in the space said, “What are you doing?”

StormShadowz nearly swallowed his tongue.

Just in time he remembered he was brave, and slowly turned around. Facing him with an ex
pression of mild interest was a huge reptilian head, bright green eyes trained on him. A dragon. The dragon. The thing they had come to find.

The dragon flared its wings, and a thick tail shifted across the rock floor with a soft grating noise.

“Are these yours?” it asked, poking forwards the other four. Lorescent gave him an embarrassed wave. “I found them lurking by my front door.”

“Uh, yes,” StormShadowz replied, and then remembered that this was a dragon he was talking to. “They’re my family! You mustn’t eat them! I’ll fight you if you do!”

There was a faint whimper from Will. The dragon tilted its head, and then opened its mouth to display a fearsome set of pointed teeth…and laughed. It was unmistakably a laugh.

“Eat them? Lord no. They stick in my teeth. Why would I eat them?”

There was a sudden sense of derailment.

“Be…cause…you’re…a…dragon?” StormShadowz stuttered, before clearing his throat. “Because you’re a dragon and you’ve been flying over Scria terrifying people!”

The dragon scratched at the floor with a talon, and gave a snaky shrug. “Oh, well, yeah, I have been doing a bit of that. It’s kind of expected of you when you’re a dragon. You know…collect treasure…fly about and incinerate stuff…roar a bit. It’s the look of the thing.”

“It’s a bit inconvenient,” Groubermyster observed, startling his companions. “For the people you’re terrifying and incinerating.”

Looking slightly embarrassed, the dragon shrugged again.

“I try not to incinerate /people/, per se…”

“It’s still not very nice,” chimed in Lorescent. “I mean, you could burn down their houses and leave them with nowhere to live.”

The dragon sat back on its hind legs, towering over them, and scratched its chin with a noise like someone trying to grate marble.

“What are you suggesting?” it enquired a little suspiciously. “That I ought to stop doing it?”

“Well…it’d be nice if you would,” StormShadowz said, slightly inadequately.

The dragon thumped back onto all fours and scratched vigorously behind its head; Will and DeathFly had to hurriedly scramble out of the way to avoid being squashed.

“Well. Okay. If you put it like that. Only…” It gave StormShadowz a sheepish look, “…I see you’ve got a sword, yeah? Could you…uh…put it about that you beat me in single combat? And that’s why I’m not flying around any more? I mean, that may be not great for my rep but it’s better than ‘I was asked nicely and said okay’…if you know what I mean?”

StormShadowz dared to reach out and pat the great foreleg.

“I reckon I do,” he said gravely, and the dragon gave him a grateful grin that showed rather too many teeth for comfort.

“Oh, oh, so it looks like you got some treasure, you wanna take an egg each, all of you? I got more than my fair share here.”

“You mean it? They’re so shiny!” Lorescent squealed, bounding over to the glowing clutch. “Can I have this silvery one?”

The dragon waved a paw, nearly decapitating DeathFly.

“Sure, sure, whichever.”

One by one they all selected the egg they wanted; Lorescent claimed her silver one, StormShadowz the glowing azure, DeathFly one that pulsed a deep purple, Will hastily grabbed a grass-green one, and Groubermyster took some time before gravely selecting, to everyone’s surprise, a soft rose-pink one.

The dragon also allowed StormShadowz to cut into the soft underside of its front paw in order to have some dragon blood to show off. The only trouble was that it began to eat away at the metal.

And then they all trooped out into the hot sunshine again.

“I never want to go in there again,” Will stated, hugging himself and shivering. Lorescent grinned.

“I think that dragon was really nice. We should come and see her again!”

“Yeah, maybe we can,” StormShadowz said cheerfully, tucking his egg away in his backpack. “Although maybe we shouldn’t stay for tea…”

 

I put these up mainly as examples of my writing, because I'm willing to write short stories like these for you lot. =3

For however much tu you happen to think them worth.

Only one at a time though please...it takes me a little while and I don't like to be pressured. D=




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Ragnarok

3:27pm Mar 16 2009

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This is PAJAMASAM's story. For the sole exclusive use of PajamaSam. If I find anyone else using it, there will be BEEEG trubble. =3

 

“Come on you stupid horse, move! Move it! MOVE!”

The horse turned its head and gave its rider, a natural Myotis, a decidedly chilly look. It was a look which indicated, in no uncertain terms, that this horse was not going to go anywhere, especially not if it was being shouted at.

The Myotis, who went by the name of Captain Myo, scowled and dismounted. He strode round to stand in front of his mount and eyeballed it.

The horse eyeballed back.

They engaged in a staring match for several minutes until finally Captain Myo sighed and gave in.

“Look,” he appealed, spreading his paws. “I have to get somewhere fast. Really fast. My arch-nemesis, Furioth, has kidnapped my girlfriend. Again.”

The horse gave him another Look. This one indicated its opinion of people who would use the word ‘arch-nemesis’ in cold blood. Then it sighed and scraped at the ground with a hoof.

“Does that mean you’ll go?” Captain Myo said hopefully. The horse shook its mane and looked resigned; he took this as a yes.

And so they ambled on (despite Captain Myo’s best efforts an amble was all he was given) through the plains, heading towards the lair of Furioth.

This was not the first time the Myotis had made the journey, although it was the first time he’d made it on such a stubborn horse.

Sometimes it seemed like the black Berrok kidnapped Phoenix Angel every other week. Of course, it was definitely accepted behaviour for an arch-nemesis; every hero knew that his significant other was a definite weak point, liable to be captured, kidnapped, hung from bridges or chopped up and stuffed in the fridge.

Phoenix, though, probably should not be getting kidnapped quite as often as she did. Last time her boyfriend had looked she was an expert in at least three martial arts and could open bottles with her teeth. This wasn’t much of a feat for an Otachie, really, but it was nevertheless impressive and quite instilled the fear of Phoenix in anyone watching.

Captain Myo had a dark suspicion that she only allowed herself to be kidnapped to give him some exercise.

It began to get dark. The horse deigned to speed up to a jolting trot that was amazingly uncomfortable, and seemed determined to trip over every stone and small clump of grass that got in its way.

Eventually they made camp. Captain Myo woke up at four in the morning to find a horse in his face. It smelled of damp carpets.

They rode on. Eventually, after several hours during which Captain Myo’s backside was reduced to a porridge-like consistently, they reached the mountain that had been dominating the horizon for days.

This was Furioth’s hideout.

Nothing said ego quite like having a hideout that was visible for miles. If he’d got any more obvious about it he’d have invested in a neon sign.

Dismounting awkwardly, Captain Myo limped over to the rock face and spent a little time feeling about in the cracks and lumps, poking and prodding apparently at random.

Eventually he hit gold and the doorbell rang.

The fact that there was a doorbell to the lair of a mountain supervillain bothered the Myotis far less than the fact that it played, with utterly horrible tunelessness, one of his favourite pieces of music. He was sure Furioth had done it just to annoy him.

The door, cunningly concealed by a big sign saying ‘This is not a door’, creaked open with an appropriately doomladen groaning. With a faint, resigned sigh, Captain Myo entered the lair of his arch-nemesis, the terrible black Berrok Furioth, scourge of millions and worshipper of the Dark God.

He remembered to wipe his feet this time.

After a little way down the menacing corridor he realised his horse was following him. There didn’t seem to be anything he could do about this, so he kept going.

The corridor eventually opened up into a vast cavern; the entire centre of the mountain was hollow. It was a breathtaking sight, but slightly ruined by the fact that most of it was cluttered with half-finished and broken doomsday machines and wallpapered in a frankly tasteless purple and orange stripe.

“Aha!” boomed a menacing, malicious voice. “So, Captain, I see you have returned to save your beautiful woman from my clutches. But this time you won’t succeed!”

Captain Myo whirled around, pulling his sword from its sheath, to face a looming black shape.

“Furioth!” he cried, in a loud and noble voice. “It is you who will not succeed!”

He brandished his sword a bit, then lowered it and said in a normal voice, “Don’t you get tired of kidnapping her all the time?”

Furioth made a face and shrugged.

“I do a bit. I mean, I’ve got lots of things I’d better be doing with my time. But…she kind of insists…”

“I knew it! She wants me to get exercise, right?”

“And get out and meet people, apparently. I think she considers it sort of the equivalent of a bowling night. Nice horse, by the way.”

“You wouldn’t say that if you’d ridden here on it,” Captain Myo said with a grimace. The horse tried to bite him.

Someone cleared their throat from the direction of the wall. Phoenix was there, chained up and scowling.

“You’re supposed to be fighting over me,” she pointed out. “Would you mind starting up? Please?”

“Yes Phoenix, of course,” Captain Myo said contritely, with the face of one who has been caught out in a terrible impoliteness. He raised his sword again; Furioth drew his and struck a pose.

“I’ve been trying out a new battle cry,” he said. “Mind giving me your opinion?”

“Sure.”

Furioth, looking a little embarrassed, cleared his throat and waved his sword in the air.

“I bring your DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!” he howled, and attacked. Captain Myo parried, and they exchanged a flurry of blows.

“Nice battle cry,” the Myotis observed, aiming a thrust as his opponent’s head. The Berrok blocked and smiled sheepishly.

“You really think so?” he asked, following up with a jab to the stomach. Captain Myo deflected and turned the movement into a smooth slice at the upper thigh.

“Oh yes. It’s got doom, it’s got threat, it’s perfect.”

Furioth grunted as the Myotis drew blood. “Thanks! I’ve been working on it for ages. I thought my last one lacked a little something.”

Captain Myo paused, and got a slice on his cheek for his trouble. Swiftly he jabbed again at Furioth’s head. “What, ‘Fight me and your death will be assured’? I liked that one.”

“You did?” his opponent said, with a slight frown, parrying the jab. “Maybe I’ll put them on a rota or something.”

“That sounds like a good idea. Have at you!”

They exchanged another wild flurry of lightning-fast blows, but eventually Furioth was forced back and fell. Captain Myo put his foot on his opponent’s chest and his sword at his throat.

“Do you yield?” he asked formally. Furioth put up a paw.

“I yield.”

“Great. Good fight, that one,” the Myotis said cheerfully, taking the paw and helping his arch-nemesis to his feet. Furioth grinned.

“I know. Really had the sparkle that time. Well, take her and go. I’ll see you-”

“Next Friday,” Phoenix called from the wall. “I’ll call you. Come on Myo, unshackle me already. My arms are starting to ache.”

Rolling his eyes, Captain Myo obediently went and undid the chains holding his girlfriend to the wall. She fell into his arms and batted her eyelashes at him.

“That was a great fight,” she purred. “Let’s go home, huh?”

She gave him an arch look and batted her eyelashes again. Captain Myo grinned.

“Let’s go home,” he agreed, and turned to look for the horse.

He found it next to Furioth, ferreting in the big Berrok’s pockets for food while he stroked its neck.

“Like the horse, do you Furioth?”

Furioth looked a little embarrassed.

“Uh, yeah. I’ve always got on with horses, to tell you the truth…uh…could I have him?”

Captain Myo’s grin grew wider. This was turning out to be a far better day than he had hoped.

“Trust me,” he said. “You can have the horse."




Before insulting someone, walk a mile in their shoes.
That way, when you do insult them, you'll be a mile away, and you'll have their shoes.

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PajamaSam

11:33am Mar 17 2009

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OMG thnx for the story rag, it WAS actually the BEST (and funniest) story I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love the ending! lol "you can have the horse" lol!!!!!!Laughingtle="Laughing" />
Ragnarok

11:53am Mar 17 2009

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Absolutely no problem whatsoever. =P I always say that a story's no good if the author ain't enjoying it, and I enjoyed writing that one a lot. x3



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Ragnarok

2:50pm Mar 18 2009

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This is SADRAIN'S story. ONLY FOR SADRAIN. GRR STEALERS.

It was a wonderful sight. A sight to stir your heart and make you wish to be a better person. A sight that would make young maidens swoon and young men clench their fists. A black Meragon, in a breastplate so shiny you could see your face in it as clear as day and a dashing helmet with red plumes, galloping over the plains astride a majestic chestnut warhorse wearing a bridle inlaid with gold. It was undoubtedly…unmistakeably…a wonderful sight.

From a distance, anyway.

Once you got close up, the picture got a little…tarnished.

The breastplate was indeed polished to a high sheen, but it was also hopelessly out-of-date and rather too small. The helmet’s dashing red plumes were as dashing as anything, but the helmet was a little too big and kept slipping over the meragon’s eyes; he had evidently given up pushing it back up long ago. He also sat like someone unused to riding, and his magnificent horse (upon which he sat like an afterthought), knew this.

It was, in fact, running away with him.

“Stop, you wretched mare!” the meragon almost wailed, tugging on the reins. “Come on, slow down already! You can’t keep running forever!”

The mare kept running, with the air of one who could and would run forever if it meant just that little bit more annoyance for her rider. The meragon tugged ineffectually at the reins once again. Nothing happened.

Eventually he gave up. The horse had a smooth, comfortable gallop and would have to stop sometime. Surely. And it wasn’t as though he had anywhere special to go…

Because Capricorn was a Knight Errant.

A Knight who wandered the world doing great deeds, saving maidens, slaying dragons. Proving himself. Saving the weak and helping the helpless. It was a glittering, noble career for the right person.

Capricorn was having gloomy suspicions that he was not the right person at all.

He didn’t have shining armour. He’d done his best, but picking your equipment up from Dungeon Jack’s Bargain Root Vegetable and Armour Shed was never the best way to begin. The helmet still smelled of turnips. He couldn’t really ride properly; he’d bought the mare at a bargain price and thought himself very lucky for it. Now he thought he knew exactly /why/ the mare had been such a bargain, and why the horse dealer had looked so amused as he counted his money. He hated sleeping on the ground. The last maiden he’d tried to save had laughed at him. And he didn’t have a sword. What kind of Knight Errant didn’t have a huge shiny broadsword?

He had had a shiny broadsword once. Dungeon Jack’s again; another unexpected bargain. Unfortunately, when he then tried to use it against a moderately sized chimera he’d found out that it had been so generously priced because the shiny was paint and Dungeon Jack had been using the actual blade for chopping six potatoes at once.

It had snapped in half.

He’d briefly looked on the bright side and tried claiming that it was an heirloom and he was looking for the other half. That was how heroes of old always seemed to do it; he suspected half of them were embroidering the truth a bit. Swords didn’t snap that easily, unless they’d been used as a vegetable chopper for twenty years. So he’d thought he could make a go of it. Give himself a bit of pathos.

That had been a large part of why the only maiden he’d attempted to save to date had laughed so hard at him. He’d thrown away the sword after that.

As he galloped along he mused that if this stupid horse carried him into mortal danger he’d have to defend himself with his fists and a stick he’d picked up for no real reason.

This was not a particularly enticing idea, for some reason.

Not for the first time he wondered why he didn’t all pack it in and go home. He had nothing going for him. Ill-fitting armour, no weapons, an extremely recalcitrant horse…best to just give it up now.

…But he’d wanted to be a Knight since he was tiny. He KNEW he could make it. He was handsome enough; black meragons didn’t have to try very hard. He’d practiced sword drill until he could beat his reflection in a mirror nine times out of ten. He’d beaten countless dragons and chimeras and basilisks in his imagination. He could ride the old farm horse over jumps and not fall off, mostly. Sometimes.

He could make it. He just needed to beat one monster. Just one. Then he’d know he was really a Knight Errant.

It began to get dark. The horse found out she couldn’t gallop forever after all, and slowed to a trot, then a walk; Capricorn risked dismounting, and she didn’t even try to bite him or step on his foot as she’d done every single time before.

“You must be tired,” he said, and gave her a nosebag. She gave him an unreadable and vaguely threatening look in return.

After spending a deeply uncomfortable night, during which every stone on the plains migrated to position itself under Capricorn’s head, the meragon woke up just as dawn poked her rosy fingers over the horizon. The morning star was still just about visible, blinking in the remains of the night-time; it seemed to be duller this morning, somehow, as though a little of its sparkle had disappeared.

The horse, although he had hobbled her securely, had wandered off quite a long way and was standing there, daring him to come and get her. He sighed and ignored her, starting to pack up his camp and stamp out the ashes of his fire. He knew from past experience that trying to catch her was entirely impossible; luckily, she appeared to realise that trying to live wild on the plains was the worse option, and would follow him if he walked off.

So he did, and after a while she did as well. He waited until he felt a velvet nose nudge at his shoulder, and then whirled and grabbed for the bridle before she could back away.

“Hah!” he said triumphantly. “I win!”

She rolled her eyes at him and trod on his foot. This didn’t work, as he kept firm hold of the reins while he hopped around on one leg and swore volubly.

He managed to mount on the second go, which was promising. The mare didn’t run away with him for quite some time either. This, he thought, as she finally bunched her muscles and leapt from trot into gallop, was a good start to the day.

At about half-past two in the afternoon, after they had taken a break for lunch (the mare understood the need for lunch. How else would she get the fuel she needed to gallop away over the horizon in the afternoon?) and started out again at the standard impossibly fast and entirely uncontrollable gallop, they came to a ravine.

Capricorn only knew about it because the mare screeched to a sudden halt and he was somersaulted over her head onto the ground, and it was sheer luck that he wasn’t catapulted over her head into the ravine and a rather messy death.

Once he had got over his attack of Dear-Lord-I-Nearly-Died induced vertigo, the meragon peeped over the rim with some curiosity. The ravine was very sudden, as though a giant had randomly decided to drive a wedge into the ground and split it open, and fairly deep. Most of what was at the bottom was rocks, with the occasional rock and once or twice a rock-but there was also a maiden.

Capricorn could see this clearly.

There was a maiden, and she was being menaced by a monster. It looked like an ogre; a great hulking furry thing with claws and fangs. Definitely menacing, and definitely menacing the maiden.

Scrambling hastily onto the mare’s back, he gave her a boot in the ribs.

“We’ve gotta go save the maiden! There’s a way into the ravine over there!”

The mare looked at the way down, which was steep, and then turned her head and looked at her rider, who was practically panting with enthusiasm.

She didn’t move.

Capricorn tried kicking her a few more times, which did slightly less than nothing, and then slid off.

“Fine! I’ll go and rescue the maiden myself! And see if you get any of the glory!”

The horse regarded him. She didn’t appear to care all that much about glory. Capricorn stuck his tongue out at her and dashed towards the trail that led down into the ravine.

He was finally going to save a maiden!

He could feel it this time. He knew that this would be the day he finally proved himself as a Knight. He would rescue the maiden. And maybe…just maybe…the maiden would be grateful…

He felt himself blush at the thought, missed his footing on the path and slid the rest of the way in a rattling shower of stones, eventually fetching up against a rock.

Both the maiden and the ogre turned to look at this unexpected and noisy arrival. Capricorn, feeling bruised, beamed at the maiden; his helmet, which had fallen off, skittered down the path and bounced off his head.

“Ow,” he said, and then remembered himself and snatched it up, ramming it back on and scrambling to his feet.

“Don’t worry, I’ll save you!”

It was a very pretty maiden he was going to be saving, he noted. A Kioka, her hair was the colour of sunsets, tumbling in a shining waterfall down her back. Her amber eyes had a glow about them, as though they shone from the inside, and her lips were cherry-red. She was wearing very little, a wrap more than anything, made from some gauzy material that fell about her body in soft folds. Her skin was an azure blue, smooth and flawless, and her body looked tiny and almost fragile.

He began to blush violently again. She gave him a funny look.

“What on earth are you doing?”

“Uh,” he said, profoundly, unprepared for such a direct question. “Saving you? From the ogre?”

He indicated the hairy beast, which was still staring at him. Ogres’ thoughts didn’t move very fast.

The maiden laughed. It was a surprisingly coarse laugh for someone so delicate.

“I don’t need /saving/,” she said. “What a stupid idea!”

Capricorn’s blush turned into embarrassment. He scowled resentfully. It was the first maiden all over again, he knew it was. She’d laugh at him, and explain the ogre was her pet or something…

“Well, I’m sorry,” he said huffily. “I apologise for wanting to rescue someone from a terrible monster. It was a very selfish want, I’m sure.”

The ogre, apparently feeling ignored, roared a bit. The maiden gave it a cursory glance.

“Oh, right, that, yeah. Well…”

She looked him up and down, and smiled. It was a frankly vulgar smile.

“You can rescue me from him if you want,” she said magnanimously. “If you think you ought to.”

“Really?” he asked hopefully, seeing a spark of hope after all. It definitely counted if a maiden asked him to rescue her, even if it was phrased more as a concession. He cleared his throat and attempted a bold and noble stance; unfortunately, some of his muscles had cramped up and the resulting half-crouch looked more like he was constipated.

“Argh. Ow. Um. Do not worry, sweet maiden! For your rescuer Capricorn is here!”

“I’ve never been called sweet maiden before,” she said, looking intrigued. “Nice to meet you, Capricorn. My name’s Eosphorus. Rescue away! I’ll be interested to see how you do it.”

A little off-put, Capricorn nodded, forced his protesting muscles into a more truly noble stance, and dramatically unsheathed…a stick.

“Oh,” he said, looking at it. He’d forgotten about the broken sword. Then, becoming aware of a rather nasty smell, he looked up into the face of the ogre.

It roared at him, gusting more foul breath into his face. Despite himself he nearly gagged; Eosphorus, who had seated herself on a handy rock to watch the show, nodded.

“I noticed he had rather bad breath. I reckon he needs a breath mint. Are you going to kill him with your stick?”

“No I am not!” Capricorn snapped, tossing it away. “I’m going to grab you and run like anything!”

So saying, he dashed over to her rock, picked her up as politely as he could manage, and sprinted for his life.

“This is rather nice,” Eosphorus said conversationally as he tried desperately to scramble up the steep trail at speed without using his hands. “But you’re holding me a little awkwardly…”

“Trying…not…to…be…rude…” Capricorn rasped, attempting to shift his hold on her without touching any bits of flesh. This was nearly impossible. She giggled in his ear.

“Don’t be silly. I’d speed up if I were you, the ogre’s catching up.”

The meragon said a very rude word, and attempted to put on a spurt. The lip of the ravine was so close now…

He felt the tiny pebbles shift under his boots, and begin to carry him backwards.

“Nonononononononono,” he whimpered, scrabbling for a purchase. “Nonononono-”

And then the rockslide was in full swing, and all he could do was try to stay upright and on top of the big rocks, try to shelter Eosphorus as best he could, and try to stay alive.

Amazingly, he managed all three, and ended up down at the bottom of the ravine still on his feet, still with the maiden in his arms, and still alive.

The ogre, though, had not been so lucky. All that was visible of him was a paw, sticking out from under a not inconsiderably sizeable boulder.

Capricorn stood for a moment, trembling, and then breathed out.

“I’m alive,” he said slowly, and then, “I’m ALIVE!”

He whooped with exultation and dared a little jig. Eosphorus applauded politely and slipped out of his grasp.

“Well done,” she said cheerfully. “Very nice rescue. I’m impressed. How were you planning on getting back out of this ravine?”

“What?”

As it turned out, the rockslide had entirely obliterated the trail. Capricorn stared at it dumbly.

“…I’m doomed,” he said. “I’m going to be stuck down here for the rest of my life…”

“Don’t be stupid,” Eosphorus told him briskly. “I’ll fly us out.”

She grasped his shoulders, standing on tiptoe to reach, and quite suddenly the meragon found himself getting a birds-eye view of the landscape.

It made him feel ill.

Lowering him gently to the ground next to his horse, which had apparently gone to sleep, Eosphorus winked at him.

“Good, wasn’t it?”

“Why didn’t you say you could do that before?” Capricorn demanded, feeling hard-done-by. “Think of the trouble it would have saved!”

Eosphorus smiled winsomely at him.

“But you were having such fun…”

She patted him on the cheek.

“Don’t feel bad. I like you, Capricorn. I might come visit again someday. Watch out for me in the mornings!”

Floating off the ground already as she spoke, she was suddenly surrounded with a nimbus of glowing blue light; with a last grin and a wink, she rocketed upwards into the sky, and for a second a star shone in the daytime.

“Look out for me in the mornings,” Capricorn repeated, puzzled. “Look out for me in the mornings…”

And then he groaned. Why hadn’t he seen it before?

Eosphorus. It meant The Morning Star.

No wonder it had been so dull at dawn.




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sadrain

11:43am Mar 19 2009

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Ahh, Ragnarok, it's awesomness out of awesomness. xD I will get money to send to you as soon as I can. I just adore this story, love it to pieces and every written character. xD *hugs* THANK YOU.
Ragnarok

11:56am Mar 19 2009

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x3 No trouble sadrain, I had lots of fun with it. I like writing stories like this. =3

I'm very glad you enjoyed it! x3




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