I am going to try writing a story on the Warriors series. But I need some ideas first. Can anyone help please?

P.S. It will not use the cats, clans or prophecies of the actual Warrior Series

P.P.S The warrior series belongs to erin hunter, I just like it so much I want to try writing a story based on it. :P

Duskclan: The camp of Duskclan is set deep in a forest of Oak, birch and elm trees. Some landpoints are the Twoleg town, Owl tree, Star-rock (Where the deputies go to become leaders), Halfwood (Where the clan meetings are) and Silverpond (The Med. Cat meeting place)

Leader: Jaggedstar

Deputy: Mosstail

Med. Cat: Pebbletail

Med. Cat Apprentice:

Warriors: Thorntail, Blackstripe, Stormclaw, Riverheart, Sandfur

Apprentices: Heatherpaw, Starlingpaw

Queens: Ashfur - Mother of Bramblekit and Leafkit, Silvercloud - Kits unborn

Elders: Rosepelt, Darkbelly

ooc; Ok, I got a start, please post comments. :P

Hmm... Very good, I've too read them and have them, I love cats and feel in love them

As for the story, Don't foget enamies, and other struggles,

I've tried to write stories, so I spend my time thinking about it and picturing a little before I go to bed, It helps to just stare off into space and heve it come, At least for me, you have to know your story before u write it of be spontaniouse and just write as you think

ooc; It's my first story really. They're in short parts since I write them when I get an Idea and post it straight away. I should describe them more. Thanks you guys :P (I'm working on the enemies, it's a slow start.)

P.S. I will give deions of the first cats and add the rest in the actual story.

DUSKCLAN:

Jaggedstar: Dark brown tom with green eyes. One of his teeth is broken off at the tip. 

Frostwing: White long-furred she-cat with blue eyes. She is Jaggedstar's mate

Thorntail: Brown tom with a black tail. He is the deputy

Blackstripe: He has black fur with light brown stripes down his side. His eyes are brown

Mosstail: Is a ginger tabby with golden eyes.

Heatherpaw: She has light gray-blue fur and light brown eyes.

Bramblekit: Dark brown tabby with green eyes

Leafkit: She is a calico cat with gold eyes.

Pebbletail: He has dark grey fur and blue eyes. He is the Medicine cat of Duskclan

Frostwing helped Pebbletail and Mosstail carry Jaggedstar’s cold body out. Her body was shaking from the effort of trying to keep her sadness in. She felt like she had been ripped into a thousand pieces. Her mind was a vortex of pain, sadness and confusion. Mosstail looked sorrowfully at Frostwing, feeling her pain. “I’m sorry.” She whispered quietly. “It’s alright, you’ll do fine,” answered Frostwing. They carefully carried Jaggedstar out and buried him in the cold ground. The silverpelt glittered above and when Frostwing looked up at it, she could see Jaggedstar hunting in the prey filled forests of Starclan. “I love you my dear…”

ooc; I was listening to a sad song when I wrote this. XD

I like your ideas, and I have a few suggestions to make this even better.  

1.When changing for one character to another, create a new paragraph. This makes for less confusing. For I’m having a hard time understanding which cat is speaking. It makes the posts seem longer but it’s less confusing for the reader. As an example, instead of: