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Fireelf	10:27am Oct 13 2010 (last edited on 11:48am Oct 13 2010)
Normal User Posts: 615	This is my random poetry and verse corner. Comments welcome. Adding your own is welcome. I will keep adding. None of these will be titled: If you are all that I am then what would I be? Love you though I do with all my heart. What would be left of me that is me? If you turned bad would I be tainted too? Not given the choice to turn tail and flee. You are your own person and I am mine. We fight and argue quite frequently Maybe sulk for a while before we smile, Make up and laugh again at our stupidity Comparing silly notes on every day things Basking happily in one anothers individuality
Fireelf	1:18pm Oct 13 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	In spectacular multicolour splendour a new day is dawning Life is sleepily stirring to greet the plumes of the rising sun But I am still shrouded in the hideous darkness of mourning I do not see bright sun but only the coal of a moonless night The bleakness of the yawning emptiness that is now my life Stretches desolate before me where once the path was bright My love, my Soul Mate, you have gone where I can not follow Mercilessly clawed away from me by Death’s greedy fingers Now there is no soul left in me, just a shell, empty and hollow Your last struggling breath was my last happy heartbeat You will tread this path alone where I can not comfort you Your lifeless cold body has become my only source of heat I look dumbly from the gaping wound to the bloodied knife
Fireelf	1:19pm Oct 13 2010 (last edited on 1:25pm Oct 13 2010)
Normal User Posts: 615	I went away and wrote this little poem for you, When you where supping your alcoholic brew Already hazed in an angry whisky fuddled stew. I wrote because I didn’t know what else to do When you started ranting after a bottle or two I was long thinking of going somewhere new You have already started with the illusions Your sodden brain filled with confusions You think you are skimming across the room Drunkenly hanging from your witches broom You loll in darkness waiting for the light to shift Slavering there truly insisting that you are God’s gift Vile you sit there pickling in your own fetid pit (yes it was orignally a curse word) I wrote this poem for you, you ungrateful git As you slavered and drooled and began to spit You’re too fuddled to talk to and to big to hit It’s a shame you going to be to drunk to read it You arrogant, drunken, stupid little tit.
Fireelf	1:22pm Oct 13 2010 (last edited on 7:36am Jan 26 2011)
Normal User Posts: 615	Daddy, I remember when I was small I looked up to you so tall You where my safety and comfort. You could cure any hurt. I remember your wonderful stories Our walks on quiet Sunday’s. Now, you are still so tall, because I still look up to you Even in the worst storm, I know I can always turn to you. You have seen me through so much With your wise words, humour and gentle touch. I love you very much and wanted to say, I hope you have a wonderful Birthday And everything good comes your way. Love You Daddy,
Fireelf	1:23pm Oct 13 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	When I wake from the depth of my sleep. I remember my vengeful vigil to keep. I will yearn to drink long and deep From the eternal sorrow you weep Until you collapse in a shuddering heap And slow death upon you will creep Mercy please will fall upon deaf ears This is a place where no one hears I will bath in those bitter, salty tears And dance to the music of your fears Amid the mocking laughter and the sneers You will pay for your crimes my dears
Fireelf	11:36am Oct 19 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	The long icy fingers of death are taking the colour from your face I watch the emptiness slowly come as the life fades from your eyes. I see the soul is slipping away and slowly replaced with vacant space. There is nothing left to do but wait for the darkness to claim you The life ebbs from your body like a torturing, continuous drip. I will be there so you are not alone that is something I can do. I will hold you close to me until I can not longer feel your heart The romantic heart that once thundered wildly in tune with mine. You are the first to go but I did not think we would ever be apart. I will hold you until the life blood ceases pumping in your vein Until I can not feel the warmth of your gentle breath brush my skin. There was no evil in you and no sin you did not deserve this pain.
Fireelf	11:38am Oct 19 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	Is there nothing tender left in this world? It all seems to have gone brittle and hard Is there nothing left to care for and hold? What has happened to the merciful warmth? It has seeped in to a cruel, selfish cold Is there no compcensoredion and wisdom left? Have we really just stopped caring? That we are leaving our children bereft Of things that we have be able to enjoy Is it with calculating steps that we go about Breaking our planet like some unwanted toy The future won’t look kindly back at us Having deprived it of pure air and clean water The environmentalists are making a fuss A little too late we can not restore wholly Green woods, the teeming seas and virgin skies We try to stop now, but will that repair our folly
Fireelf	11:42am Oct 19 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	Sweet innocent, welcome to my lair Come softly into my waiting arms, Close your eyes and rest peacefully there I feel the warmth of your life blood Promises wear thin, so I won’t hurt you I swear You come so willingly to this certain doom. The poison words I whispered in to you ear You know now what I am and what I want Yet in your enchantment there is no fear I feel the softness of your silken hair Gentle curls crush softly under my hand Take no note of the cold chill in the air You will not feel it for too much longer You are under the illusion that we are a pair But I am the predator you are pray to me You know deep down, but you do not care I feel nothing but hunger that needs to be sated Jet Black eyelashes rest on cheeks once so fair And Death snuffs out the light that shone from your face
Fireelf	11:43am Oct 19 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	I will try to write more erm cheerful poems LoL
ashdog554	5:25am Oct 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 12,384	Dang your good at writing. o_o ....
Fireelf	5:26am Oct 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	Thanks ash :)
Shao	5:43am Oct 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,792	you write just like I do Fire!
merecat	5:46am Oct 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 74	i really enjoy your stuff - i wanted to share lol but i re-looked at my stuff and am pretty sure it wouldnt be... appropriate lol Thanks to everyone who helped me achieve my goal of a black aerix :D
Fireelf	5:58am Oct 21 2010
Normal User Posts: 615	Shao awesome :) mere I don't mind if you want to rmail some. I love reading.
Fireelf	7:35am Jan 26 2011
Normal User Posts: 615	LoL due to lack of inspiration this died a bit. I now have some poetic inspiration back, so adding :) Comments, Criticisms, everything welcome as normal :)
Fireelf	7:51am Jan 26 2011 (last edited on 7:52am Jan 26 2011)
Normal User Posts: 615	She sobbed in panic as he attempted to flee, Grabbed his hand in a desperate silent plea. He turned to stare at her stony silent and ghostly Those cool, glittering eyes betraying no mercy Mocking at her pain he freed his hand still silent On the floor her racking sobs grew more violent He moved purposefully towards the nearest door Yawning he thought she had become such a bore She found in her blurry vision a heavy paper weight Now flaming hot anger made her decide his fate His hand on the door handle she had to move quick She threw it hard and as he fell she was violently sick
Fireelf	4:39am Feb 9 2011
Normal User Posts: 615	I'm sitting in a chair with no peoety in there LoL - I need inspiration!
Fireelf	2:51pm Feb 9 2011
Normal User Posts: 615	The smart thing to do would have been to run Not stopping a while to think about what to do Concentrating on dodging the bullet from the gun Trying to reason with a madman was insane I saw the gun I should have turned and fled And disappeared into the darkness of a lane But my normally nimble legs turned to lead I gazed to the barrel like a frightened animal I wonder what insanity had got into my head I wonder still why I did not end up dead!
Fireelf	2:54pm Feb 9 2011
Normal User Posts: 615	All of God’s creatures do not make war So why do we? What do we kill it for? How can a friend suddenly become a foe? What is this about? How did we sink so low? One mans decision to make others fight Do the murdered souls wake him at night? Wailing mothers for lost children weep In death another young life is put to sleep Looking into the bloodied abyss so deep Pray, Lord watch over your little lost sheep
Fireelf	2:56pm Feb 9 2011
Normal User Posts: 615	To the palace he rode Upon his steed of silver With his load of jewels and gold Still on and on he rode With his cloak billowing around Along the dusty road ‘neath the Elm trees he rode and through the empty street. No emotion he showed ‘neath his dark hooded head As through the gates he rode So the Princess he could wed. There he put down his load. There he was warmly accepted Because the silver and gold Fed the of King’s hungry greed. Wed they were and wed they stayed. Away the stranger rode. The stranger was not old But neither was he young From root nor womb he rode From whence he came no-one knew. All the women have grown old Yet still he rides the dusty road. Searching for the one he loved The one who was lost and never found Seeking with hands that are gloved For the beating of his lost heart. To the place he rode On his steed of silver With his burden of gold Still on and on he rode With his cloak billowing out Along the narrow, dusty road.

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