Final Ki Ni Ro Kitsune


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atalanta

7:41am Jul 26 2010 (last edited on 1:25pm Jul 26 2010)

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Hello all viewers,

I want to make a anime show one day called  Final ki ni ro kitsune.Its about kitsune nekos who have guardians that help them throughout their jobs of purifying kenrei or evil and dark kitsunes..But we will get into that later right now im giving you a breif opening.




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atalanta

8:01am Jul 26 2010 (last edited on 1:17pm Jul 26 2010)

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But heres a start for now...

The night was young and the full moon shined in the middle of the dark sky.It revealed what was hidden behind the darkness,as a symbol of what all was good and or evil.The night was silent and still.The drops of rain from earlier that day slowly dropped from the leaves to the cool wet ground.The low breeze stirred up the leaves leaving them to wonder in the wind.

All of a sudden rumbles and snarls awaken the ravens as they soar in the sky Stirring up noise.4 paws tretted the ground running fast then 8 more appeared to be after it.The kitsunes were out this night but not to play.Those first set of paws,The kenrei was out for souls.Its night black fur was the only thing hiding him from those kitsunes.But his glowing red eyes were an alarm to the animals in the area and they gave him away.

The first white kitsune with blue and silver eyes snarled loudly seeing the Kenrei.The moon was a real advantage to them it shone the location of the kenrei.The large white kitsune leaped in the air jumping off of two trees one after the oher.It saw the kenrei and gained speed.It was so graceful in its movements.Its tails flickered silver and rose as the kitsune tackled the kenrei with jaws and saber teeth lashing out at it.

The second kitsune that was Night black and had blue markings on it lashed out at the kenrei as well.The two kitsunes slashed the kenrei and sunk their saber teeth into the beast who shone a bright light and dissolved into the air.The two kitsunes rose their heads and howled at the moon.Then something rumbled in the bushes.They both turned around snarling with a deadly gaze...




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(waits...)



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atalanta

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(9still waits..))



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Flowers234

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Its good! I liked it...Laughingtle="Laughing" />



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atalanta

9:37am Jul 27 2010

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thx this is my first one i wanted to keep people wondering



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Flowers234

9:40am Jul 27 2010

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lol...I know what its like. But you should really continue it! Its got a great base now.



ferniio made dem^^
atalanta

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Really thanks alot ill start it in a sec this is like making me wonder myself reading it over XD.



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Flowers234

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I put chapter 4 up! Wel some of it. My stories turning into a real big mystery!! lol



ferniio made dem^^
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....light blue eyes appeared from behind the bushes.They looked like water with light shone on them.The snarls eased,they knew the kitsune.The white kitsune came out of the shadows and infront of them.They nodded to the kitsune and it rose its head.Slowly a gleaming light blue light shone from the kitsune.

The kitsune rose a little and she started to change.Her tails shortened her paws turned into hands and boots.Her mane turned into long silver hair with light blue streaks that looked exactly like her eyes.A white top fromed from her chest that had a long colar up to her neck and a long slit from the colar down to her breasts.Her legs turned into human legs and a white skirt fromed from her bodt.She landed to the grund with long white boots that went up to her knees and had buckles on the sides.Her kitsune neko ears perked up and she opened her light blue eyes.

The other two kitsunes looked at her.She smiled and waved her hair through the soft cool breeze"well thats the last one for tonight"she said softly.She had a sweet child like voice that was a beautiful sopund to the ears.Her white gloves that blue in them appeared and the blue and silver tribal designs appeared on her clothes and boots that had a heal on it.

The black kitsune closed his eyes and was about to change...




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atalanta

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(lol cant wait to see it))



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Flowers234

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OMG! This is great!! I can't wait to read more.



ferniio made dem^^
atalanta

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((lol thank i actually drew the characters but i need more of them)0



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The black wolf floated in the air and so did the white one.They both had a red light glowing from them that war a ruby neon red.Their eyes closed and the light grew brighter

The white wolfs mane turned into black hair with long blue tips alined with silver.His paws and legs turned into human legs and his long black jacket appeared down to his knees along with his black shirt and black skinny pants.The colar flipped up to his neck and the blue dragon design appeared on the right side of his jacket.His black gloves shone from the neon blue marks on the tips he landed to the ground gracefully with his black skinny boots that had silver buckles.His biceps flaxed as he touched the ground he was strong and his very muscular body made his shirt look tight.

The black wolfs mane turned into silver hair.He had highlights that were red and black and looked graceful.His red jacked that went down to his thighs appeared and the buckles on each sleeve.His black gloves that were black on he top and silver where the palm was appeared.His skinny black pants and boots were like his brothers.He landed to the ground folding his arm"What a waste"he said opening his red eyes..




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Flowers234

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WOW! That is GREAT diion...Love it!



ferniio made dem^^
Flowers234

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Oh and BTW The contiueation of Chapter 4 is coming in a few moments!



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atalanta

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Thsnks alot and cant wait to check it out



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Flowers234

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You are like a diive MASTER!



ferniio made dem^^
atalanta

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wow lol thanks i never thought of it that way



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atalanta

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The once white wolf looked at him"Oh quiet Anariyon,Your always complaining"He said rolling his eyes.Anariyon looked at him and growled"Kakariyon why dont you go howl somewhere like you always do."Kakariyon huffed"Atleast im not the boy who cried wolf hint hint"
Anariyon came closer to him"Well you wanna start"He said rolling up his sleeves and his slits becoming like those of a cat.Kakariyon and him were now eye to eye"Try me".They both growled the girl dropped kicked them both and walked off"Enough you two"....



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