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fullmoon	8:08pm Feb 21 2010 (last edited on 7:06pm Feb 23 2010)
Normal User Posts: 6,296	�Warrior cat story Leaving the wild Chapter one That's it. As soon as I stepped out of camp, I knew I shouldn't have. But she was calling me back. � I kept walking, a tom on a mission. � For clarification, I am a ZenClan apprentice. My name is Riverpaw. I was patroling the border, when I met a beautiful white she-cat. The only problem, � She was a kittypet. � now, I'm going to meet her again. � I padded across the gra'ss, heading quickly to the kittypets fence.� � "Are you there?" � A face poked from the fence. � "Yes! Riverpaw, you're here!" She purred. "I want to show you my house." � I followed her, not realizing it was a trap. Once I had gotten inside, a twoleg came and put a bowl of stale food in front off the white she-cat. � "Here you go, Puss." She said. She then looked at me. � "Oh! You have a new buddy! Poor thing, I can't keep him. Oh! I can send him to Reta!" � A hand. A cage. It came in a blur. But I knew I was trapped. I couldn't escape. � � � I yowled for help, but my cries were drowned out by the sound of the Monster. "Help! Help!" The Monster suddenly, started moving, and I felt myself being jolted back. "Ow!" � This is the first time in my life that I have ever felt so alone. I sighed, knowing I couldn't do anything. So I curled up in a ball, and fell asleep. �
Detneth106	3:12pm Feb 22 2010
Normal User Posts: 9,641	I like it :D Its a cool idea <3
fullmoon	5:20pm Feb 22 2010 (last edited on 5:20pm Feb 22 2010)
Normal User Posts: 6,296	Warrior cat story Leaving the wild Chapter two Many moons had pa"ssed, I knew that. I had started counting, but then I stopped, as I was always yelled at for making marks on whatever I"m clawing at. I started feeling at home, forgetting my past. Untill that day... I walked outside, looking at the ground for squirrel tracks. I didn"t find any, but I saw cat-prints. As they say, curiousity killed the cat, so I followed. They started going into the forest, a place I hadn"t seen in years. I kept going and going, and it took me a while to realize that I was lost. Bravo me. It then all hit me in a flash, the biggest hit of my life: I remembered everything! My Clan, my real name, being in the aprentice and Queens den. It all came. I clenched my jaw at my stupidness. Why had I left? � But one thing was for sure: I was going home! I started that day, my great journey home. I didn"t know what allies I would get, or what would happen. But my facts were straight: *I was* going home.**
ssather	8:56pm Feb 22 2010
Normal User Posts: 5,835	�Oh I love this! Keep writing! I wish there was an rp about this though...Oh well I like just reading it.XD
Detneth106	3:27pm Feb 23 2010
Normal User Posts: 9,641	That's cool Full <3 Yet again :D
fullmoon	7:02pm Feb 23 2010 (last edited on 7:05pm Feb 23 2010)
Normal User Posts: 6,296	Warrior cat story Leaving the wild Chapter three I feel that I"ve been traveling for a half a moon, but I guess it"s only been about 20 days. I was at a twoleg fence, walking on it. All of a sudden, a brown-white blur hit me.� It was another cat! A she-cat, to be precise. She was chasing a pigeon, and I had to snort slightly in laughter at her. She couldn"t catch a turtle! Her skills were all over the place! The she-cat then turned to me. Her eyes were.. mazing. I couldn"t help gawk at them. They were violet, a strange eye colour for a cat, with it getting lighter and lighter at the pupil. Her coat was glossy- white with brown splotches- obviosly groomed a lot. She stared at me for a while, then finally spoke. "Who are you, and what are you doing on my land?!" I was so shocked, I nearly fell off the fence. Her territory??! "I didn"t know kittypets owned territo-" "Shut up!" She snapped. "I"m no kittypet. I only live by them, as disgusting as it is-" She wrinkled her nose- "I will fight you, and I"m warning you." I finally fell off the fence. "Smooth, Mr. I-can-tresspa"ss!" She smirked, but it was a friendly smirk. "Might as well be introduced! What"s your name?" "My name is Cri- I mean Riverpaw." "Wierd name. I"m Violet. Of course, I was named after my eyes." *"Well, Violet,* would you kindly give this starving tresspa"sser some food?" I put drooling sarcasm in my voice, seeing how she would react. She didn"t seem to care. "Are you worthy?" "Yes, madam." I almost laughed my head off. "Well then, you may!" I have never felt so grateful in my life. After a squirrel, and a sharing of a small hare, I started getting up. "Thanks for the hospitality, but I must go." "So soon?" "Fraid so." "Where are you going?" I didn"t exactly know how to answer, so I just said, "For an adventure." "I"m coming too, whether you like it or not!" I think, with a companion, I wouldn"t be as lonely, and at night, I would be warmer. And a bonus: More food! But the bubbling in my stomach told the real reason I let her join: I was in love.**
fullmoon	10:18pm Feb 24 2010
Normal User Posts: 6,296	Warrior cat story Leaving the wild Chapter four � We were walking through a mountain p@ss, and both silent. � Not even the wind was talking. � I didn"t dare speak, as it would shatter the quiet. Suddenly, I saw a landmark: � The Fallen Stone! � The Fallen Stone was... well, a fallen stone, shattere in millions of pieces, only one large chunk, the rest tiny shards. � I sniffed it excitedly. It was stale, but definately ZenClans scent! � "Come on!" I called to Violet, urging her. � She didn"t complain, as she knew how important this was to me. � I raced to the cliff, to take a look at the territory. But when I saw, I almost fell. � Where it once was, was nothing. � Nothing at all. � Sorry for the short chap, but it"s almost bedtime,and I thought that was a nice ending. I'll make it up in a longer one tomorrow.
SweetAromaz	10:23am Feb 27 2010
Normal User Posts: 110	Warrior cats aren't my chiz, sorry but it seems almost played out and boring.
fullmoon	8:41pm Mar 2 2010
Normal User Posts: 6,296	Bump Getting the chap ready........

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