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De

10:57pm Mar 27 2011

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Hey, it's De. 
Okay, well, I have this untitled warrior cat story that I'm working on. 
ti
tle suggestions are welcome. c:
It's like the warrior cats super edition, as it's focused on one cat's life.
Please comment!
Thanks,
~De 
 



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De

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WARRIOR CATS

THUNDERCLAN

Leader

Sharpstar- Abyssinian tom with amber eyes.

Deputy

Rosebriar- Golden she-cat with pinkish/yellowish eyes.

Medicine cat

Jayleaf- Brown tabby tom with amber eyes.

Warriors

Ivytail- White she-cat with black patches.

APPRENTICE- STARRYPAW

Frostfang- Pure white she-cat with blue eyes.

Gingertail- Ginger tom with yellow eyes.

Blacktail- Silver tom with black tail, and amber eyes.

APPRENTICE- DARKPAW

Sparrowwing- Brown she-cat with amber eyes.

Goldenpatch- Golden she-cat with blue eyes.

Dappleheart- Cream she-cat with yellow eyes.

Ashcloud- Gray tom with blue eyes.

Coalheart- Jet black tom with blue eyes.

Silvertail- Light silver she-cat with silver eyes.

Foxfur- Red she-cat with fox markings and amber eyes.

APPRENTICE- STARRYPAW

Snowfall- Pure white she-cat with silver eyes. 

APPRENTICE- ROBINPAW

Rainheart- Red tom with blue eyes.

Apprentices

Starrypaw- Black tom with white speckles and green eyes.

Robinpaw- Brown she-cat with amber eyes.

Darkpaw- White tom with black paws and ears, and yellow eyes. 

Creampaw- Cream she-cat with blue eyes.

Queens 

Patchwing- Silver tabby she-cat with emerald eyes. (Mother of Coalhearts kits, Nightkit and Fogkit.)

Icefire- White she-cat with flame colored paws and silver eyes. (Mother of Rainheart’s kits, Forestkit, Redkit, and Cherrykit.)

Kits

Nightkit- Jet black she-cat with emerald eyes. (Mother- Patchwing, Father- Coalheart)

Hailkit- Silver tabby tom with ice blue eyes. (Mother- Patchwing, Father- Coalheart)

Forestkit- Brown tom with blue eyes. (Mother- Icefire, Father- Rainheart)

Redkit- Red tom with amber eyes.(Mother- Icefire, Father- Rainheart)

Cherrykit- Red she-cat with green eyes. (Mother- Icefire, Father- Rainheart)

Elders

Stormynight- Black she-cat with dark gray patches and amber eyes.

Sandcloud- Sandy colored she-cat with green eyes.





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De

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WARRIOR CATS

RIVERCLAN

Leader

Berrystar- White she-cat with silver patches and blue eyes.

 

Deputy

Thrushflight- Brown tom with darker brown speckles and yellow eyes.

 

Medicine cat

Rainwillow- Tortoiseshell tom with amber eyes.

APPRENTICE- Creekpaw

 

Warriors

Watersplash- Silver she-cat with dark grey legs and blue eyes.

APPRENTICE- Fishpaw

Blackstripe- White tom with black stripes and silver eyes.

Crowpelt- Black tom with amber eyes.

Leafswirl- Tortoiseshell she-cat with yellow eyes.

Flamefleck- Flame colored tom blue eyes. 

Shadepelt- Dark gray tom with yellow eyes

Grayfur- Gray tom with blue eyes.

Streamheart- Pure white she-cat with green eyes.

Brownfoot- Brown tom with orange eyes.

Thornclaw- Light gray tom with amber eyes.

APPRENTICE- Mosspaw

 

Apprentices

Creekpaw- Brown tom with amber eyes.

Fishpaw- Silver tom with blue eyes.

Mosspaw- Cream she-cat with blue eyes.

 

Queens

Fernsong- White tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes. (Mother of Brownfoot’s kit, Harekit.)

Echowind- Silver she-cat with green eyes. (Mother of Shadepelt’s kits, Silverkit, and Steelkit.)

 

Kits

Silverkit- Light silver she-cat with yellow eyes. 

Steelkit- Dark gray tom with green eyes.

Harekit- Brown tom with dark brown patches and blue eyes.

 

Elders

Whitelily- White she-cat with cream feet and amber eyes.

Sunblonde- Blonde tom with blue eyes.

Bluepetal- Blue she-cat with silver eyes.

Greeneye- Brown tom with green eyes.





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De

11:00pm Mar 27 2011 (last edited on 2:42pm Mar 28 2011)

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Chapter One

 

Nightkit yawned and opened her eyes. It had been a few sunrises since she had first opened them. According to her brother, Hailkit, they were green. She sat up and gave her chest fur a few licks. She felt a paw prodding her side, and turned around. Hailkit was looking at her happily. He was always happy! Nothing made him upset. 

“Patchwing’s sleeping. Let’s go patrol the borders!” Hailkit whispered excitedly.

“Race you!” Nightkit squealed and dashed off. She heard her brother calling that she had a head start, but she didn’t care. She got to the middle of camp and stopped. She flopped down and curled up, trying to camouflage herself. She heard Hailkit purring and looked up. He was standing over her, his whiskers twitching in amusement. 

“What’s so funny?” Nightkit demanded.

“Oh, nothing. Just the fact that you think you can hide yourself on bare ground.” Hailkit told Nightkit, through purrs.

“Well I bet you can’t do better than me.” Nightkit huffed. But Hailkit was already gone. She saw him stumbling to the camp entrance and raced after him. Hailkit was waiting for her at the camp entrance.

“You’re so slow.” He told Nightkit.

“Am not!” Nightkit protested and prepared to spring into the forest. Just as she was about to leap, she felt a paw on her tail. She whirled around to see Coalheart, her father, holding down her tail so she couldn’t get anywhere. She managed to pull her tail free and she sat down.

“You know you aren’t supposed to-” Coalheart began.

“ShadowClan invasion!” Nightkit yowled as she hurled herself at Coalheart. Hailkit clumsily pounced on his tail and clawed at it. Coalheart flopped down and pretended to be defeated as Nightkit rose a tiny paw and squealed in triumph. She relaxed her grip on her father’s shoulders and Hailkit climbed up onto Coalheart’s shoulders to join her. As the two kits were chatting about their victory, Coalheart sprang up. Nightkit and Hailkit tumbled off his shoulders onto the ground. 

“That didn’t count.” Nightkit announced. “We already won.”

“Yes, you did.” Coalheart purred. “You were wonderful.”

“ShadowClan better watch out!” Hailkit squealed. 

“Now, what are you doing so close to the forest?” Coalheart asked, suddenly serious.

“We wanted to patrol the borders!” Nightkit explained.

“And protect the camp.” Hailkit added.

“That is very thoughtful of you, but I’m afraid you’re too young. When you become an apprentice you’ll be able to patrol with your mentor. When you become-” Coalheart started.

“But that’s a whole six moons away!” Nightkit protested.

“I don’t mind.” Hailkit mewed as he gazed at the forest happily.

“You’ll just have to wait, then.” Coalheart mewed softly.

Nightkit sighed and turned around. She beckoned Hailkit with her tail and trotted back to the nursery. Patchwing was waiting for them. Nightkit curled up by Patchwing, too tired to see what Hailkit had done. 

“Patchwing?” Nightkit mewed sleepily.

“Yes, Nightkit?” Patching mewed.

“Will you be my mentor when I’m an apprentice?” Nightkit asked through a yawn.

“I’m afraid it doesn’t work like that.” Patchwing told Nightkit.

“Well it should.” Nightkit mewed.

“It’s all part of the warrior code.” Patchwing mewed gently.

“Will you always be my mother?” Nightkit asked.

“Yes, always.” Patchwing replied.

“Even when you’re in StarClan?” Nightkit mewed.

“I won't be in StarClan for a long time." Patchwing mewed. She saw Nightkit's eyes go round.

"Yes, even when I’m in StarClan.” Patchwing told Nightkit.

Nightkit felt her mother’s tail wrap around her as she drifted off to sleep.




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Twintkitty

9:19am Mar 28 2011

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Nightkit reminded me of how I used to be <3 

 

“Even when you’re in StarClan?” Nightkit mewed.

“Yes, even when I’m in StarClan.” Patchwing told Nightkit.

This seems a bit.. um. Sorta like. A curse to let the mother die faster. Well. Chinese cringe at these xD But it's probably nothing. Just wanted to point it out. 

 




De

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Okay Twint, I'll change it. Thanks. c:



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Inkabel

8:20pm Apr 15 2011

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“Patchwing?” Nightkit mewed sleepily.

“Yes, Nightkit?” Patching mewed.

haha, you typed patching instead of patchwing!

Arrow

8:29pm Apr 15 2011

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You gave the kits great energy and their personalities are great. I love them.

I recognized two of the character's names that I use for OC's.

Silvertail and Ivytail. Great minds think alike. xD






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