Jira's Jar of poems, stories, critiques, and more.


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Kurrabi

7:48pm May 24 2013 (last edited on 7:59pm May 24 2013)

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Okay so this is my page where I will be posting some of my stories and poems, but along with that I will also be doing commissions and critiques if asked.

Page 1: Intro
Page 2: Forms for critique
Page 3: My story list
Page 4: My poem list 

Now you may be wondering what gives me the credibility to critique your writing, well I'm a total english nut, a writer, and an avid reader. Although I'm knowledgeable with multiple writing styles I do NOT claim to know everything or be the perfect writer, just remember that ;) 


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Kurrabi

7:54pm May 24 2013 (last edited on 8:05pm May 24 2013)

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What I will critique:
Poems
Stories

What I won't critique:
Anything with extensive blood, gore, or inappropriate material


Form for Critique:


-Please critique this-

Story ti
tle:
Story:
Rating (G, PG, PG-13, etc):
Other:




What I will write:
Poems
Stories

What I wont write:
Anything with extensive blood, gore, or inappropriate content
Anything extremely long, I do have a life XD
You're English homework, no. just. no



Form for a commission:


-Please write for me-

Type of writing:
Length of piece:
Rating (G, PG, PG-13, etc):
Reason for commission:
Other:



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Kurrabi

8:05pm May 24 2013 (last edited on 8:06pm May 24 2013)

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My stories
WIP


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Kurrabi

8:06pm May 24 2013 (last edited on 8:18pm May 24 2013)

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My poems:


The moment the light begins to rust,
Is the moment that I turn to dust,
I want to stay,
To hold on tight.
But it tears me away,
That blasted night,

I long to stay,
To hold you close,
But alas I fade,
And lay morose,
In the hands of that blasted night,
Until the sun brings mourning's light,

When it rises I do to,
Longing to be close to you,
Through out the day,
We are one,
But I must depart with the setting sun,

Although every night,
We are torn apart,
You will always remain,
In the depths of my heart,

I am,
and I will always be,
Your one,
Your one and only,

I am,
and I will always be,
Your Shadow


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