Just A Story


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EllaJoan

6:47pm Apr 22 2010

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Yeah, I'm a writing freak. This is one of the stupidest stories of written, ever. Anyway, if you want me to write you a story, just throw out a plot and a couple of characters.

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 My shoulders tense, and I drew my hackles upwards, and my nosed flared, while my amber eyes were alive with a hidden fire. I pulled my lips backwards, revealing my sharp canines, and lowered myself to the ground, sitting back on my haunches, preparing to jump.

 "Chloe, its just me!" a soothing voice said. I looked up into the eyes of my loving master, Hera. I lowered my hackles and my eyes were dimmed, and I moved forward, my wait now equally distributed in between all four legs. Hera had been good to me, but I was still nervous around anyone, even her.

 "Listen, Hera, say your good byes quickly," a taller woman said to the teenager. I cocked my head. Goodbyes? 

"Chloe, girl, I'm sorry this had to happen, " Hera said, her voice low. She seemed to be holding back tears. What had happened? What was going on?

"You were a good dog," Hera whispered into my war, before standing up again. I saw her wipe away a single tear that was leaking out of her eye.

 She led me into a white-washed room, and then a man came in, with a long white lab coat on. I whimpered and pushed my head into Hera's hand. I still didn't understand.

 Eventually, Hera broke down sobbing, and covered her eyes. I saw the doctor take a needle into hand, and then I realized what was going on. 

I was going to die that day. 

 

 

MomokoCove

9:32am Apr 25 2010

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This is sad.But, I like it even though it's sad.You get the message across of how dogs probably feels from this and I think you did great.



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EllaJoan

1:26pm Apr 25 2010

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Thanks. :D

I'm good at describing emotions, according to one of my friends. 

Twilight

2:15pm Apr 25 2010

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wow, so sad



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