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Raru

8:32am May 8 2009 (last edited on 7:39pm May 8 2009)

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Chapter 1

'In which we meet four rather important characters.'

 

It was a hot summer’s afternoon and the sun continued to glare down at the world.

Indrik stretched and sat upright, yawning. He was an odd creature and his fur was a blend of purple and black. His body was very much like a lion, though slightly larger and not as lithe, and his snout was longer. His yellow eyes watched the world lazily as he began to scratch himself with his hind foot, feeling slightly uncomfortable in the heat. It did not help that his fur was thick and he now found himself wishing he was back living in the mountains. Despite the harsh weather and fierce competition it had it was, at the very least, cooler.

From the corner of his eye, Indrik noticed a rat and swiftly pinned it down beneath his black claws. He bent down and crushed its head in his teeth, silencing its shrieks.

Of course, the food in the mountains was not as plentiful. And stringy he might add.

“Indrik.”

Indrik lifted his head up, a half-eaten carcass dangled from his jaws. He turned and looked at the young woman who stood behind him, a young woman that looked no more than twenty gazing at the farmers as they retreated from their corn fields and into the shade until the heat of midday died down.

She was small, somewhat thin but not gawky and dressed in a long, white kirtle with a blue sash. Her hair was a rich golden colour, like the ripe corn she watched as they rippled in the winds. Her eyes were blue yet it did not resemble the calm seas or skies but a fiery and intense blue, stronger than the weak, flickering flame of a candle. Unlike Indrik or the famers she showed no sign of discomfort.

This was Midday.

“Do you think we ought to move the cottage elsewhere? It might be troublesome if that boy intends to keep coming back.”

“He likes Lady Midday.”

“I’ve noticed. But I’m not keen on having a great, smelly oaf come to my house and constantly bicker on about all sorts of useless things. I’m surprised we managed to escape him.”

“You should not save people from goblins then.”

“I know.” She pressed her lips together, her eyebrows creased in annoyance, “Do you think it was foolish of me to interfere then?”

He laid the corpse gently on the ground and tilted his head, “interfere, my lady?”

“Yes. Threatening the goblins like that.”

He chewed the rat thoughtfully, “Gods always interfere.”

“But my brother would be displeased if he learnt of this incident.”

“Eros went unpunished.”

“Mm? Eros? But that was because he is well loved; pitied, possessed a tongue fit for flattering and does not have to deal with Dawn.”

Indrik coughed, or chuckled, she couldn’t tell.

“If your brother does not find out then it is okay. He will not send Rarog then.”

A gust of wind appeared, as if irked by the comment, Indrik winced as he noticed the ragged sparrow flapping towards them. The sparrow landed on the ground in a rather ungraceful manner, hobbling and flapping wildly as it did so. It shook its feathers huffily.

“Lady Midday.”

Midday looked down, where the sparrow once stood was now a stout dwarf with an enormous brown beard peppered with grey hairs. Indrik scowled.

“Lady Midday.” The dwarf said huffily, “I am displeased with you. Do you realize how much difficulty you are causing for Lord Dawn? What were you thinking saving the prince-“

“It was a prince?” asked Indrik in mock astonishment.

“-from the Faerie Folk? Do you know how we must not get involved in the affairs of the mortals?”

“Yes.”

Rarog began to pace around, “the Faerie folk were not pleased. And you know how they’re like when they’re not pleased. Audacious little brutes that have the nerve to simply march up to Lord Dawn and rant constantly until even Cronos himself might find his patience wearing thin.”

“Like you?”

“Yes like-” Rarog paused and glared at the beast, who innocently continued to chew on the rat’s skull.

Rarog, in an even fouler mood than before, sighed and continued to pace up and down the grass, “I honestly don’t know what to do with you, Midday. Why can’t you be more like your siblings and keep yourself out of trouble? I have taught you for so many years and your brother has made it very clear that you must take care of yourself. It is dangerous for you; you are not an Immortal like the others.”

Indrik noted the wince of Midday and perked his ears; he looked up and swallowed the rest of the rat.

“A falcon appears.”

Rarog squeaked and panicked, ducking and trying to do his best to hide himself in the grass as his eyes scanned the skies. Taking this momentary panic, Indrik nudged Midday who in turn climbed onto his back and rode off on him. By that time, Rarog realized it was a hoax and stood up. Flustered and angry, he brushed his coat down and muttered, “Now where was I, ah yes. I hope you understand the seriousness of this situation, Lady Midday. Oh and I must tell you that Midnight has a message for you…” he paused and turned around.

“Lady Midday?”

*****

Indrik and Midday slipped into the murky darkness of the Changing Forest, Indrik slowing his pace down to a walk knowing that he was never a graceful animal running at full speed. Midday’s lips twitched into a smile as her fingers gripped onto his thick, black fur.

“Thank you.”

“If you allowed me to eat him I would not have to run.” He grumbled.

“You know he gives you indigestion and besides you are terribly unfit, Indrik.”

Indrik grunted, offended.

She buried her head into his fur, “Why did I interfere? I know I mustn’t and yet I continued to do so. I continue to watch the humans and I continue to intervene in their lives.”

“Lady Midday carries human blood.”

She groaned, “Why?”

“Because Mother of Midday has human blood.” He tilts his head and his yellow eyes lit in amusement, “Does Midday hate her mother?”

“I miss her.” She murmured and said no more as Indrik continued to walk through the forest. In the silence, Indrik decided that Immortals were difficult to understand for they thought too little and shared nothing while mortals thought too much and needed more guidance than required. However, Midday did not think like either of them and he decided it was better that way because he understood her. Indrik pulled himself free from the brambles which clung onto his fur as he crossed through the bushes, walking along the banks of the lake as he studied the trees that loomed over him, “Where are we?”

“I do not know,” admitted Midday, “It seems the forest chose to change its paths again. It may be some time before we find out was back.”

Indrik nodded, “Oh. That is alright. I like the forest.”

“Yes, I like it too.” She gazed at the ancient trees which stood tall and mighty and remembered a time when they the most ancient of trees was still a sapling and the forest was ruled by trees long gone. And she remembers a child, who still wore a smile at the time, wandering through these forests and crossing paths with a king.

“Were you planning to eat me, Indrik?”

“Mm?”

“When we first met each other, were you planning to eat me?”

“Yes.”

“That’s just like you, Indrik.”

She slipped off his back and walked alongside him, her hand clutching his mane.

“We met at this lake didn’t we? I was playing when I found you.”

“Yes.”

“You seemed very tired at the time. What were you doing back then?”

Indrik looked at her.

“I cannot tell Lady Midday now.”

“But will you tell me one day?”

“If I have to.”

“You’re impossible.”

Indrik nudged her playfully and she stroked his snout. She watched the lake, wondering which path she must take in order to return. It was not that she was afraid of it but it would have been nice to return home in less than a month.

Indrik’s ears twitched and he turned his head, “we will have help, Milady. But you might not like it.” Midday followed the direction of his gaze and noticed a large shadow emerging from the forest. One may not have expected it to be a bear for it was too large but often they run before ever finding out. Those who stay would not run from it for its eyes held no savagery. Streaks of grey stained its auburn coat and moss and other such plant life clung onto it. The bear ambled through the woods, while her pace was clumsy she took care about where she treaded.

Midday dipped her head respectfully, “Good day, Ursa.”

The bear lifted her head and, noticing them, her jaw slackened into a rather charming smile.

“Hail, Mistress Midday. Lord Dawn has been looking for thee.” She tilted her head and gestured at the approaching person behind her. He was taller than most men and perhaps twice as thin. His hair was a tangled mess of pastel colours that fell past his waist. Despite his calm demeanour his eyes, hidden beneath his fringe, were wild and may have held some demon restrained and bounded. No man would challenge him and perhaps no man ever will. He smiled; his smile false and lacking a warmth that should be there.

“Yes I have been looking for you, dear sister.”

Midday grimaced.

H held up his outstretched hand, “Shall we walk together? I’d like to talk to you.”

Midday nodded and followed him, Indrik and Ursa trailing behind, the bear was chatting happily whilst Indrik was trying his best to understand.

“Midnight had sent me a message to pass to you.”

Midday looked up at her brother, “He has?”

“Indeed. It seems that our father may be coming to visit us soon.” Dawn noticed her look and grinned, “Our brother thought you would like to know.” He reached out and patted her head, “after all you have always been his favourite.”

Midday bowed her head; she disliked being treated like the youngest. “No I am not.”

The man chuckled and continued to look ahead, “it’s a pity Midnight does not know when he will be arriving but I suppose it is better that way. Our father enjoys surprises after all.”

He stopped, “it is time I returned now.”

Midday tilted her head, “you are not angry at me?”

“Mm? For the incident last week?” he shook his head, “these things happen though I suppose Rarog had been scolding you?”

She nodded and looked down.

“Well he is worried about you, we all are.” He patted her head again, this time his smile contained a slight trace of warmth that did not seemed forced. “Just take care of yourself.”

“I’m not a child anymore, Dawn. I can take care of myself.”

“Perhaps.”

Midday looked up again but Dawn was gone and they now stood at the entrance of the forest. Ursa smiled and nodded a farewell, “visit us more often, Mistress Midday. We shall welcome you heartily.” And finally she ambled in her slow, clumsy trot back into the forest.

Indrik yawned and Midday reached out to scratch behind his ear, a ghost of a smile that hovered on her lips. She looked up at the sun and watched her continue her path across the sky.

*****

The farmers stopped their work to examine the peculiar sight. There, emerging from the forest was a handsome grey mare carrying a bedraggled youth that did not suit her at all. He was rather tall and his build might assume that he could be a boxer or a fighter if it wasn’t for his eyes, which were devoid of any bloodlust. His face was covered in filth as well and his hair was a mess of brilliant red and not-as-brilliant brown. He sat up on his saddle and blinked, unused to the light, and shook his head,

“Perhaps the fall has made me delusional, Filly. But for a moment I thought I saw the beautiful maiden of the purple beast back in the forest.” He sighed, it was a pity. He had hoped he had hoped to talk to her more as well as summon the courage to thank her before he returned to the castle. The thought of returning made him grimace and clutch onto the reins tightly. It wasn’t that he did not enjoy returning home but he enjoyed the freedom of the forest more. And reluctant as he is on returning to the castle he knew his father would be just as reluctant to have him return so soon. Especially in the state as he was now, covered in peat and mud.

“But I believe me and the beautiful maiden of the purple beast shall meet again. In the meantime let us return home, Filly again. We need more provisions for our next journey.”

 

 





Raru

8:40am May 8 2009 (last edited on 8:56am May 8 2009)

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Notes: This is what claimed my life for the past week or so o3o (well, perhaps a day of it if you added all the hours together, the real thing that claimed my life would be revision at this moment.)

Had this idea since October or something like that and have been sorting it out at ever since. It's heavily drenched in mythology references, especially of the Slav kind so kudos to those who know what mythological character this was inspired by. It's sort of obvious though if you google the right words.

This is only the first draft and I'm sure there's lots of grammer mistakes 'cause I stink at grammer (so if you could kindly point them out to me it would help a lot). Will be adding first drafts of chapters here as well as my comments I suppose then editing them in my own spare time.

I like writing about Indrik, his speech is fun to write. I hate Ursa's (any pointers on erm...anglo-thingamajig lingo?). Also I always thought of blue as a really hot colour, especially for eyes. Guess this is what happens when you look at a bunsen burner long enough. I think I could say more stuff but I'm sleepy despite being able to talk this much already...

Critiques (for imrpovement), comments (for my ego) and pointing out my mistakes would be most helpful. I haven't written a proper chapter in ages so I may be rusty.





Staryulynn

9:14am May 8 2009

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I really like it Raru!

 

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petzareawesome

4:36pm May 10 2009

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Epic alert! :O
I don't see anything wrong with it Raru.
'Tis awesome, and the speech seems fine.
There might be a few punctuation errors, but that's normal.
I apologize for being so lazy as to seek them out at the moment.
It's srsly brillant though :3




"‎These little contradictions are in all of us. They’re in me at least. And so I forgot that I had been awake for 30 hours and kept walking, grateful to be a little boat full of water, still floating." — John Green
Raru

4:45pm May 10 2009

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I know I have this problem with commas xD

But if you can help point them out it would be gewd because I don't notice them much xD





Raru

8:46am Jul 24 2009

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(Excerpt from chapter 2)

Chapter 2

‘In which we see power doesn’t always bring satisfaction.’

When Cronos did arrive Midday had been busy cleaning her cottage. It was small and had no more than five rooms but moving the cottage had meant that the insides had still caused one of the biggest messes she had ever encountered. Dust swirled and she swept with a p*censored*ionate rage, this being because some of her best sheets had been ruined by an upset jar of honey. She could conjure up new ones but one of them had been a gift from the goddess Pax, who had found the beautiful material in one of her shrine offerings. Since finding the soft and silky wool ruined her annoyance doubled in size and so did the dust clouds. Indrik had been sitting outside beneath an old apple tree, sullen and irritated by the heat yet unwilling to return inside the house while she was cleaning.

She would use her powers but had long since realised that it did not give her the same satisfaction that doing everything the mortal way did. She kept this a secret of course, knowing very well that half the Immortal realm would snigger at her or roll their eyes and conjure up a new house, clean and complete with fountains, statues of naked cherubs and ravishing handmaidens at every door. All snug in a rundown, creeper-dressed cottage.

So when she saw Cronos coming she immediately dropped the broom and hurried outside, discarding the apron hastily and walking to Indrik with as much grace as she could gather. She curtsied politely and faced the older man, “Good day, Lord Cronos.”

The man chuckled; he wore rich, blue robes with an intricate yet unusual design made of symbols from some unknown language. The snow-white hair and telltale wrinkles which lined his face did not persuade people to think he was old for he walked with strength and pride. His beard was white and clipped short and sharp and his eyes were grey and perhaps if you looked at them you may only then think him to be as old, older perhaps, as he claimed to be.

 “I can see you’ve grown quite a bit, Midday.”

“How have your travels been?”

“Interesting. I must say that Hua Xing was a beautiful and delightful country since they overthrew that emperor thirty ago.”

“It was actually a bit over a hundred years ago.” Midday replied, unable to hide the amused grin forming on her face.

“Oh is it? Bah, I am getting old. But be it thirty years or a hundred they both feel the same to me.”

Eventually, Midday suggested that they sit by the apple tree, nudging Indrik aside and sitting down on the gr*censored* alongside her father like they use to do. Her father coaxed the budding blossoms to ripen into apples whilst telling stories from his travels with Midday listening intently. Indrik had crept into the coolest part of the shade and curled up to sleep.

She listens to him about how he solved the three riddles given to three hapless daughter-in-laws; listen to the woes of a fox who lost her skin and sighted –not one- but two djinns. He talked of the days when he showed a man his love was not who he thought she was, gave hope to a trapped, white snake and was a slight bit annoyed to find out a tavern he wished to visit for its buckwheat bread had been closed due to the damage caused by some uncontrolled donkeys. He even presented Midday the remains of an old, metal bird he had found on his journey from the palace. Ten minutes of fiddling and a broken key later Midday suggested that they take it to their brother before Cronos broke it any further.

He shook his head and put the bird away into the folds of his robes, “humans are most interesting creatures, why on earth would they make a metal bird in the first place? Stirta made the most beautiful birds and they sing too.” he leaned back against the tree, “I must say it took me a while to find you, Midday. Did you move your house?”

She nodded, “I wanted to live a bit further away from the kingdom nearby. Indrik believes it’s slightly cooler here and I am still able to watch the farmers tend to their fields.”

“Ah I see. I suppose the prince fellow wouldn’t come near here as well. Bit far from his home and all.”

She cringed, rumours travel quickly amongst immortals.

Cronos noticed her reaction, “Don’t be too bothered, we rarely followed the rules if you haven’t noticed.”

“But-”

“Concerned about not fitting in? Even if you look like her, you obviously didn’t take after your mother.” He chuckled, be it nostalgic or not Midday couldn’t tell, “your mother never wanted to fit in. Not with mortals. Not with us.” The look in his eyes gnawed at Midday’s heart, knowing that her mother’s disappearance had affected him the most. “I remembered when we first met; she was the fieriest sorceress I have ever seen. We always wound up arguing with each other.” He fingered the greenish apple in his hands fondly, “Refused to believe I was Father Time even after she saw me grow apples.”

“She didn’t believe you then?”

He let out a sigh, both of admiration and exasperation, “Oh no. She then thought I was the Harvest Goddess. Honestly, I know oaks less stubborn than her.” He looked up at the sun and stood up, “I believe I should go now. Especially if I want to catch that sister of yours.”

Midday looked at him pleadingly, her mouth twisted into a frustrated pout.

He winced at the look that was so familiar when he had handled her as a child, “You know I don’t stay long, Midday.”

“But I have wanted to ask you questions.”

“Questions?”

“...about mother.”

Cronos paused and pursed his lips, hesitant on answering her. Midday knew he would act like this. His gaze searched the fields and sky fruitlessly for a reply before his gaze laid on an oncoming figure in the distance.

“Isn’t that your prince fellow, Midday?” He asked, sounding slightly surprised.

Midday was sure that the youth she first saw a week ago was bedraggled, filthy and rather irritating. Granted the handsome man before her still did not make her feel that she would be able to get rid of him anytime soon but she did not recognise him to be the prince she helped days ago. He was rather tall with a build might *censored*ume that he could be a boxer or a fighter if it wasn’t for his eyes, which were blue and devoid of any viciousness. His hair was a brilliant shade of red and he wore a smile that could perhaps cause half the women of the kingdom to swoon.

Midday looked back at Cronos but he disappeared, she scowled in frustration.  Gods –especially those of Cronos’s lineage it seems– appear to have a talent for slithering out answering unwanted questions. The prince slipped off his grey mare, an elderly and proud creature and grinned in a way that suggested both astonishment and delight. “The maiden of the purple beast? How did you -I mean- I am pleased and yet...how were you able to move your cottage?”

“What are you doing here?” She retorted, folding her arms in annoyance.

His grin turned sheepish, “Ah. Well would you believe the king sent me on an errand?”

“No.”

“Really? Because I was hoping you would.”

 

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A/n: I'm not done with this -_-; This chapter's been giving me a lot of headache. I'm sorely tempted to re-start the whole thing. It also might be a bit confusing since I did a bit of editing with the first chapter which is not posted here. Also anyone recognised any of the Chinese legends in the story? ;o I'm trying to incorporate a lot of different cultures in this. It's not working though.

Again critique and grammar help would be awesome.





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