Love Life

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1ran	9:26pm Apr 27 2009 (last edited on 6:06pm May 22 2009)
Normal User Posts: 917	-Happy fair? Never! For being in love, Without feeling loved! Is truly horrid on the soul. -Lion and the Lamb? Hardly! More like the crow and the dove. But which am I? And likewise, he? O spite! -The truth known to ears? I wish... I sit in the corner, miserable, Jealous, with a heavy heart Because I haven't told anyone... -Classmate crush? If it only were! Fallen in love with someone, Whom I never met! But still... Love sees with the mind, Not the eyes, So therefore Winged Cupid Painted blind.
Fox	3:57pm May 4 2009
Normal User Posts: 2,721	lovely poem. you are a great poet! I\'m back.
chantico	3:12pm May 7 2009
Normal User Posts: 185	wow,nice. I have rhyming problems French rule, Brits suck.
1ran	9:26pm May 13 2009
Normal User Posts: 917	Thanks!
Raru	9:17pm May 21 2009
Normal User Posts: 583	It's nice to see a poem with a structure like this, has a good rhythm. I don't like the last bit though, is it suppose to be phrased like a question? If not, then the 'is' feels out of place o3o
1ran	6:05pm May 22 2009
Normal User Posts: 917	:D Oops, grammar error.... Thanks for the catch.

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