2:43pm Nov 2 2010 (last edited on 2:45pm Nov 2 2010)
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This is my first ever attempt at a poem, I got the inspiration to write this while i was taking the dog out for a walk in the woods. Please enjoy, coment and criticism is welcome considering this is my first try.
Good first poem ;3 I can tell you like Autumn. I do too. It's my favourite season, really. The good news is that one generally gets better the more one writes. xD So you'll improve if you keep writing it up. ^^
Thanks Nightmare, i'll keep what you said in mind. Yeah, I do like Autumn the sight i saw really was amazing. So i decided to write this, glad you like it. ^^
No, she didn't draw the girl. She did tamper with the pic though. The girl in the picture is called Nana from the manga +Anima. Which I recommend to you. xD
Ohhh ok! And I will take your recommedation in mind :D
Red~ I like this line "Never, shall I forget that sight, So many Autumns ago, Never will it leave my eyes." Cause you wrote this poem recently, Correct? And you said 'So many Autumns ago' and instead of saying 'Just this morning' or something like that you made it make sence, hahaha I dont know if you get what I tryed to say.
It's okay guys.^^ Thanks a lot for the advice, Leoleaf, yeah I did write it recently. I didn't want it to sound like it was written recently so that's why I talked about it being a long time ago. Don't worry I do get what you was trying to say. ^^
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