Plot help?


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Cinkira

1:21pm Feb 16 2011

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Okay, so I have the basic idea for a book. Its about a epileptic girl, and when she goes into a seizure the darkness that engulfs her is called the Noir (na-or) a animal helps her go over e every time, her name is opal (the artic fox. The girl also become different once in the noir, a more evil take on herself. 

But I can't think of a good plot, any ideas?

 

Cinkira

1:24pm Feb 16 2011

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I was thinking she could become obsessed with the Noir. Trying to force herself into a seizure just to see the Noir once more, until at last, her Khor (normal world) body is broken and her spirit goes to the Noir forever, which in this case would be similar to purgatory. 
thaliaflame98

10:53pm Feb 16 2011

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Mail me more deets, I'll see what I can do to help.. This is really interesting :D I like it alot XD



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