POETRY. Maybe.


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AliceDowntheRabbitHole

9:38pm Oct 22 2011

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Imma just post random poems and stuff.
Feel free to comment/critique, I guess.
AliceDowntheRabbitHole

9:42pm Oct 22 2011 (last edited on 9:42pm Oct 22 2011)

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Here's one I wrote in late august:


The Beginning of the End

Popsicle Stains
Color once-new shorts
Colorful reminders
Of what has now passed

Through the last few
Dregs of summer
We sit on porch swings
Thighs sticking
To polished wood

Soon we will leave
This pink-lemonade dream
Back to the cold, hard reality
Of fall
dogpaw49

1:06pm Oct 23 2011

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Great poem!! 
AliceDowntheRabbitHole

6:51pm Oct 23 2011

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Thank you! Here' another one:

Starlight, star bright- Oh, wait, that's a satellite!
I wish I might, I wish I may- Or, is it the other way?
What about "little star upon the wall"?
Oh well, I didn't really want
a wish at all.


It needs work :I
Lillyblossom

10:32am Oct 30 2011

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I like it... :)


Love isn't like a fruit-sweetest when it's new. Love is forever bright and fresh, IF it's love that's true...♥
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