Random poem - I don't know LoL


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Fireelf

7:18am Jul 23 2010

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I have a heart that I wear openly on my sleeve.

It gets broken so many time you would not believe

Yet still it repairs itself ready for the next blow.

 It continues shining brightly with its hopeful glow.

It has never dulled grey or tried to leave,

that exposed open place upon my sleeve.

 

 

 






enola

10:22am Jul 26 2010

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I Lovee This ^^ x] Vair Amase Methinks x



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Fireelf

12:10pm Jul 26 2010

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Thankies enola :)

 






ChispaBrisa

2:09am Jul 27 2010

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Cool! Very creative I think. My poems are mostly random nonsense XD Plz Make moreeeeee!
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P.S: I don't want to be annoying, but I would really appreciate it if you would give me some critique or tips on my poems... It's here on the forum called 'don't blame me for the insanity'.




My Angel Gone too soon, but never forgotten...
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