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Wishies

7:52pm Apr 7 2009 (last edited on 8:01pm Apr 7 2009)

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This is just some poetry i've written. Leave comments please :)

NONE of these have Titles. :P

~ Here is where i lay
With nowhere else to be
and all thats on my mind
Is just you, and me.
This is where you left me
so here is where i'll stay
untill some other friend
will pick me up again.
I roll by life with no care
Because if i give affection
i'll end up crushed once more.
Wishes dont always come true
'Cause all i could wish for
was an apology from you.

~If i am weak
When you are strong
would you be my wings
to keep me off the ground?
Pain and tears are my gravity
pulling me back down into reality
Would you be there to relieve me
From this disaster? The disaster i call my life.

~If you don't want to stay
don't make my heart believe you do.
Don't say i love you
Unless you "Meant" that too.
When you looked me in the eyes
and called me beautiful,
Was that mask you were wearing
Saying it for you?
I think with my mind
But sometimes my heart interrupts
i don't know what's real anymore
You or the side of you i'm beginning to see?
Are these just fairytales
That you're making me believe?
What i don't understand is
Why i'm still loving you
With the pieces of my heart you have left.

~These are the unspoken words
Of the broken people.
Tears, pain, and shame
Is their only language.
They stand on an edge
If they were to jump,
Would they be wrong?
All they want is somebody to care.
To show them that life is worth living for
Did you ever think
That you could be their hero?
to save them from their viewpoint
Of a disasterous life?
In our own way we are all part
Of these broken people.
The tears no one sees,
The shame no one feels,
And the screams no one hears.
These.
Are the unspoken words
Of the broken people.

 

I have others... but i won't post if no one interested :P

(Don't steal any of this, i wrote them, they iz mine! Muwhaha)
P.s. i will hunt you down if you steal.. haha.




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PrevKina

7:57pm Apr 7 2009

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~If i am weak
When you are strong You need a g there
would you be my wings
to keep me off the ground?
Pain and tears are my gravity
pulling me back down into reality
Would you be there to relieve me
From this disaster? The disaster i call my life.

 They are very good!




~May the stars sting you when you touch them...may the nights scare you while you're awake...may you see me in your dreams and scream with horror...for I am your worst nightmare!
~Kina
Staryulynn

7:57pm Apr 7 2009

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Beautiful, Poet



-and a new day will dawn, for those who stand long, and the forest will echo with laughter-
Wishies

8:02pm Apr 7 2009

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Haha thanks Kina.. I was trying to hurry them all on there XD

 

And awww thank you stary :D




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Sylphie

8:05pm Apr 7 2009

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Lovely poems, Wishies dear~. <3 If I might make some basic corrections, however? No offense, you know. xD I'm just a grammar nut.

~ Here is where I lay,
With nowhere else to be,
And all that's [Or that is, but that would disrupt the flow.] on my mind,
Is just you, and me.
This is where you left me
so here is where I'll stay
Untill some other friend

You get the basic idea, hun. xD I'm basically just spellcheck. Lovely poems, though~!




Wishies

8:07pm Apr 7 2009

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Thanks Sylbby.
I was in too much of a rush to worry about capitalization and punctuation :P

But i get the drift ;)!




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