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Kirby

4:25pm Jul 7 2011

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Just something i am working on, will edit as i think of more

 First class loser never made with the guys never could hold much luck in my eyes. 

Found myself moving down too fast, 

Into the darkness where i knew i'd never last.

Looking for a way out 
Not for a hand out.
Everyone around me telling me what i was doing was right.
But in my heart i some how knew it was wrong.
Soon i found it hard to survive, 
Felt like my body was gonna die.
 Never though i was gonna find the light that i was trying so hard to find.
Until...
I saw you, and your heart, the light i found, 
was all around you. What i found, was my true life, and I found it,
In you. 
I sit here now finding it hard, not to cling to tightly to you.
I look around still seeing the darkness now. 
All i see is you now, even though my tears,
 My fears are all gone now. 
Only one remains....
Losing you.
I sit here writing day after day, but never has it been something for you.
Perhaps this is our song... 
Or maybe just my heart song.
Ohhhohhh Love, I love you, never will i not. 
Even though, I feel hurt, I will always love you. 
Even if you say "I hate you" I will only smile"
And say "I love you." 
Because
I saw you, and your Light, The light i needed to get free.
Its all around you, it made me new life, my new love. 
And i found it In... 
You.
Forever my.... 
Loving Sara.



dialga2palkia

11:01pm Jul 7 2011

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I think that is a great song. very good lyrics!



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Kirby

8:53am Jul 8 2011

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thanks =p -gos back to trying to re write it-



Fireelf

6:07pm Jul 15 2011

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Ally awww - just awww!  That is really good.





Kirby

6:12pm Jul 15 2011

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Fire thanks ^ ^



dialga2palkia

8:51am Jul 16 2011

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love the new lyrics! XD



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Kirby

5:23pm Jul 16 2011

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dialga2palkia I haven't finished reviseing yet XD <3 i am working on it but i want ti to feel right for me. i lvoe this girl and i want her to know i always will no matter what happens 



YoursTruly

9:52pm Jul 16 2011

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Love it! Ally, this is amazing!



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
Kirby

10:33am Jul 19 2011

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lol its not that good



YoursTruly

1:49pm Jul 19 2011

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Yes it is. You shouldn't be so modest.



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
Kirby

3:58pm Jul 19 2011

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no its not XD there is better out there



YoursTruly

11:03am Jul 20 2011

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Oh yeah, tell me what the better thing out there is.XD



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
Kirby

7:05am Jul 21 2011

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something not mine =D



YoursTruly

1:25pm Jul 21 2011

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Ally, you need to believe in yourself more.



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
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