Very cool ^_^ I actually don't know much about poetry and hardly anything about the rules you have for making a sonnet. I do like the poem though... Though some parts I don't understand, it was pleasant to read. I do some poetry, mostly because I have an ear for music and it makes it easier for me to do stuff like rhythm and rhyme. Other than that I can't really make amazing poetry. So yeah. This is really good. :D .. I think I rambled there. @_@ Sorry.