The Berrok Express ( a Rescreatu version of The Polar Express)


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Samurott

9:02am Jan 4 2012 (last edited on 12:39pm Apr 1 2012)

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Okay This just another version of the award-winning book by Chris Vans Alsburg okay? It's a mix of the movie and the book. So now le't us begin!

 

The Berrok Express.

 

When I was a young lad, I layed on my bed quietly, without making a sound. It was Christmas eve that night. My newly hatched narwi, Narwea, swam quietly around the bathtub. My friend insisted that stayed up at Christmas eve, to hear the ringing of the golden bells of Santa Klaws's sleigh. I doubted that there would even be a Klaws. I watched Mirallibises, Uilus, every creatu that could fly fall asleep. Even Narwea, who often stayed up late, fell alseep. As I was about to fall asleep, a noise snapped my eyes open, and Narwea also woke at the sound of that noise. I checked my window to see if he was there, but Santa did not come. Yet, there was a train down below. Narwea was alseep again. I woked Slivia, my sliver Easero, and told her to come with me. I crept downstairs, opened the door, and stepped outside. 

 Even though I only wore my nightdress, it felt both warm, then cold. A tall man with an albino Berrok by his side steeped out. He looked at me and Slivia, and said,"Well, are you going to come on the train?" "Where to?" I asked. "Why, to the North Pole of course!" he chuckeld. I climed on the train, and saw other cildren on board. They all had a creatu by there side. Kayoki, Tesuri, Iluvu, Kioka, and all other kinds of creatu in differnt colours. 

Allof them were wearing there nightdresses and pjs.allof them were in there seats, talking and giggling. I saw my friend, kewlgurl, staring out of the crystal-clear window with her Kioka, Wingardi. Wingardi nuged her, and she waved at me. I sat down with her, and we began talking, while Slivia and Wingardi played. Then the train gave a sudden lurch, and the creatu went back to there owners. Everbody knew where we were going. To the North Pole."

"Do you really think we'regoing to the North Pole and meet Santa Klaws?" kewlgurl asked. I didn't awnsher. "Hello?" She waved her hand in front of my face. "Wh-what?" I stammered. "I asked if you think we're actually going North! What else seaweed-brain?" she said, rolling her eyes. I nodded quitely.

 Then we jumped. The conducter had shouted something, and all of a sudden, waiters came out of the door! A chef came rolling a big long metal pot, hissing with steam. The creatu yelped with terror. I whipered to kewlgurl"What do you think there doing?" Slivia nodded, shivering, as if she approved this question. Wingardi pranced around nervously. All the creatu were restless. Then the waiters took a huge white cloth, and when they put it in the middle of the children, and suddenly, there was a table! The waiters poured us hot chocolate faster then the speed of lightning, and they gave our creatu gingerbread cookies in there favourite flavor.

After few minutes, the train suddenly stopped. I nearly jumped out of my seat. We were in front of a big house, with two gigantic light red dooors. I was shocked! It was my best friend's house!Well... her grandparents house, because her parents were at a business trip, since they were very rich. The coundecter then said to his berrok,"Okay Teddy, let's go get that child." I started to giggle. A grown man, calling his creatu a child name! Teddy the albino berrok nuzzled him happily. They went out. magicalme came out, the couducter said a few words.  Then she came on the train, and accidently tripped over her creatu's tail, Daide, who was an Iluvu. Daide use to be kewlgurl's pet, then she gave it to me. Then I gave it to magicalme as her first seasonal creatu. Everyone laughed. kewlgurl,me, our creatu and daide gave EVERYBODY  an evil eye, it made them silent almost immedialty.

For the rest of the ride, everybody was silent. Some of them fell asleep. I just looked out of the window. kewlgurl was playing with Wingardi. Everything was so peaceful. After I got bored, I played with kewlgurl,magicalme,Daide,Wingardi, and Slivia.

The silence stopped with a blow of the train whistle. Children everywhere woke up. We saw a city nearby, filled with lights. "What is that place?" everbody asked. "There is the North Pole. That is where he will give the gift of Christmas." the counducter awnsherd. "Who will recive it?' everybody asked. "He will choose one of you." Everyone started chattering about who will receive the first gift of christmas. Then, a big guy who looked pretty mean and ugly  said,"I bet I'm gonna get because I'm the smartest, powerfulest, and most good- looking." he said smugly. All the girls just stared at him and one of them knew karate.  And then there was a horrible fight... 

 

 

DragonessStar

1:43am Jan 5 2012

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I love your story hey wanna check out the story i am writing it is about dragons. You can read it if you want I will not force you. But it will be really good and I will write about dragons every day for it. It is called Dragons Of The World. Read it only if you like dragons though. Please read it though and I thought your story was great. It was so cool and funny. :) 
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