Here's my entry:
I walked slowly down the dusty sidewalk, kicking up dirt as I went. I reached my school, and walked slowly inside. I looked at myself, still natural. I sighed. But what was I thinking? I was going to be natural forever, and that’s that. I walked even slower into my clas.sroom, where I sat uncomfortably in my seat. I was uncomfortable because one Vaspi was stinging my shoulder and a Otachie was scratching my side. I sighed, everyday life. Finally, the bell rang. Break! I ran outside to get some fresh air, but I only got a mouthful of dirt, because a Berrok pushed me into the ground. I got up and dusted myself off. I thought to myself. One day I’ll show those jerks, one day! Then, I got my lunch and went to sit down. No one sat by me. Then, a skinny and half starved ginger Wyrae slimed up to me. “I’m Fantasme, nice to meet you. Will you be my friend?” She asked. I nodded. Fantasme sat next to me and I gave her my lunch. I wasn’t hungry, I was too busy planning my revenge.
First, I thought of a prank for my revenge. Nope. Then, I thought of becoming trance. That would make everyone so jealous of me! That was a good idea. Quickly, I asked Fantasme to come on a journey to the CS land with me. She said “yes” and we ran out the school doors, ready to begin the adventure of our lives.
First, we went onto Reiflem property. My hooves were in serious pain, and Fantasme’s slime was melting by the minute. The harsh winds blew my mane and ribbons around like a tornado. Fantasme’s slime was everywhere, like a huge, gooey mess in the air. The heat pounded against my eyes, and blinded me for moments. Finally, we got to Atquati property. It was better then Reiflem, but not by much. I cooled off my hooves, and Fantasme tried her best to get her slime back together. Now we were ready to face the water. Carefully, we waded in the shallow water. Then, it got deep. Like, really deep. Struggling to keep my head above water, I thought about school. My guess is they didn’t even know I was missing. So, I continued to try and stay alive. After a long time of the saltwater stinging my eyes, a huge wave came and knocked us onto Scria. This place, was my kind of place. I lived kind of in space. Not really on a planet, but hovering around the planets. That’s where a lot of Creatu lived. Some did live on the planets, but it was uncommon. I leaped up cloud after cloud, the soft puffyness comforting my sore hooves. The beautiful rainbows filled my eyes with tears of joy, not pain. The friendly people patted me as I soared pas.sed them. The Easero’s chirped the most beautiful sounds. But the joy didn’t last too long. The road on Scria ended, and we went into Relcore territory. There wasn’t much, just rocks everywhere, and millions of people and shops. The people weren’t friendly, they were rude, and didn’t care about us. The rocks made my once comforted hooves sore again. Fantasme was struggling to get around the people and rocks, as well. At last, the CS land. We ran inside and I took out my TU. I had barely enough for one Trance potion. Quickly I bought it and drank it. I was Trance at last! Quickly, me and Fantasme ran home. Through heat and water, through comfort and people, we made it home. Once the Creatu saw me, most fainted. I yelled out loud in triumph. “I told you I would get you one day! I told you!” Everyone wanted to be my friend, but I shook my head. “If you guys only care for my looks, you’ll never be a real friend. I’m going to Scria with Fantasme, and I’m never coming back.” After my speech, I went up to Scria. I went to school there and got real friends, with Fantasme at me side. And I never, ever left Scria again.
THE END!!!