Giving Away an Iluvu


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Meelanya

2:28pm Feb 22 2011 (last edited on 1:28pm Mar 14 2011)

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Here's Fluffae.
 
All you have to do to get a chance at winning this little guy, is to write a short story, with him as the main character. It could be a happy or a sad story, it's all up to you. I will choose the best story on March 1st.
 
There will also be an honorable mention, who will receive a small prize.
 
Good Luck to all! :D
 
 
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Jylaz366

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Fluffae walked through the forest, his fur tattered, dirty and clumped. Unusual from the sanitary, clean and well-groomed Iluvu that he really is. "Where are you?" he moaned. Fluffae had been wandering the forest for days trying to find his owner Meelanya. Several days ago Fluffae was snatched up by a couple of 'creatunappers' while playing in the sandbox outside Meelanya's house. Fluffae was able to sneak away from the creatunappers while they were sleeping and found his way out of the building. When Fluffae got out of the building, nothing but dense trees and thick shrubs surrounded him. As Fluffae wandered for days and days on end, he began to grow weak. With every step more exasperation came upon him and soon enough, he was almost a goner.

Fluffae walked through a shrub with a hole in the side of it and another bush and got stuck for the 30th time. "Ugh. I need a bath." he said to himself while pulling out the thorns and burrs in his fur. He shrugged the pain off and kept walking. His determination was greater then ever. Fluffae loved Meelanya and could never dream of leaving her. How worried she would be! His ruby red eyes shone in the darkness of the night. Owls 'hoo'ed and mice clacked their teeth together. Fluffae was terrified, he settled underneath a tree for the night and fell asleep.

When he awoke the next morning, he saw something shiny out of the corner of his eyes. He got up instantly and followed his sighting. Fluffae gasped and stopped dead in his tracks. It was Meelanya's bracelet! Fluffae suddenly flashbacked to a couple of weeks ago. Meelanya and him were playing just a few yards north of his house! "Yesss!!" he cried happily. He ran as fast as he could in that direction, ignoring the splinter he stepped on as well as the tree root he tripped on. Tears streamed down his eyes as he made it back to the house. Meelanya was on the swing out front of the house crying. "MEELANYA!!!" Fluffae cried out. Meelanya turned around and smiled. "Fluffae! Your back!" she stretched her arms opened and Fluffae jumped into them. "I have never been so happy to see you!" Fluffae whispered in her ear. Meelanya giggled, "Me nether."

-By Jylaz366

I am not the best at writing. Usually I just follow the images in my head. XD Hope you like it!! 8D I guess this is just a practice for me. ^^




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Meelanya

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Actually Jylaz, it's pretty good! :DDD



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Thanks Meel!! 8D



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ImmortalRose

5:34pm Feb 25 2011 (last edited on 7:55pm Feb 25 2011)

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A small, jet black egg quivered under a bush. It's mother nudged it gently before pulling herself back. Her owner was evil, and she'd never let her egg be in his hands. Until he, hopefully one day, realesed her in the Aquati Forest, she was his. But he didn't have to know, her egg would stay here, to be hopefully found by a kind creatu or human. She closed her eyes tightly, doing everything she could to keep from crying. A single tear fell to the ground before the dreaded time came. Her owner was calling her.

  It was time to go, and she'd just have to forget. But how? She shook her head fiercely, her tail quivering. She fell to the ground, now ignoring her owner's furious calls. He'd come for her soon, if she didn't move. So, she dreadfully heaved herself back to her paws. And right before the stepped away from the bush, she had one more thing to say. She sealed her ears from the yelling, and whispered quietly. "Fluffae".

~~~~5 months later~~~~ 

  She'd all but forgotten the black egg she'd left in the bush. It had haunted her since, racking her heart with pain. After she'd left the egg, she never forgave herself. Even though she knew it was the best thing to do, rather than to let her child suffer beside her. Though she still missed the unborn kit, she showed no grief. She couldn't, not around her owner. He was cold hearted and evil. He'd become suspicious, and he'd find out. He always did, he alway did. 

~~~~one month later~~~~ 

  Meelanya walked through the forests of  Relcore. She watched as a bush quivered ever so slightly. She wasn't sure how she noticed it, but she did. Bending down she reached carefully into the bush, laying her hand on a smooth surface. She jerked her hand back, and waited a few moments. Nothing. She parted the bush and was surprised to see a sleek black egg with a pink heart sitting quietly in the bush. Since when were Iluvu eggs on Relcore?

  Ignoring the strangeness of the place she found the egg, and wondered how long it had been sitting here. Iluvu's laid eggs around the week of Valentines day. That was how many months ago... six months? Something like that, anyway. She stared in awe at the egg, that had survived this long. She picked it up, and placed it carefully in her backpack. Setting back towards home, she wondered more and more about the little egg. 

Her owner has finally given her up, left in the forest to rot, or be found. But neither of those would be happening. She was going back to Relcore, and she would find her egg. Setting of quickly, she reached the edge of the forest. Here the land turned marshy, and in turn into pure water. She didn't know how to swim, but she would. Squishing her way over the short marshland, she reached the water. She looked down at her paws and closed her eyes. Then, she jumped. 

  She sunk quickly, and she churned her paws helplessly trough the water. She opened her mouth for a breath of air, but sucked in only water. Her cries for help where useless here under the water. She feared the blackness below her, slowly rising towards her. Death was taking it's time, as she choked on only more water. Then, as her sight was wavering, and she felt feint, she watched as the darkness fell away. Then, she closed her eyes. 

  Waking up on the shore of a small island, she blinked faintly. Her sight was blurry, but she saw him clearly. Opening her eyes, her eyesight clear once more, she blinked. Was this the force the pushed her up, her life? "Hello there" the Murren said in a shrill voice, quite high pitched for a male. She sniffed, heaving herself to her paws. "So your the one who saved me?" she asked indigently. "Not very thankfully are we?" the Murren snorted. "But if you must know, then yes. Why are you here, anyway?" he asked.

   "My owner abandoned me, and I'm trying to get back to Relcore" she responded, a bit more gently than before. "Aw, I'm sorry. But if they abandoned you don't yo-" he was cut off by a indigent snort. "He was abusive, sir. I'm going back to find my... my.." she trailed off. She couldn't say it. She shut her eyes tightly. For all she knew, chance are, that egg she held to dear in the short time she was with it, was dead. Anything could have found it. She slumped on the the sand with a sniff.

  "oh... Your what..?" he asked, tilting his head as she slumped to the ground. "What's wrong....?" he asked. "Shima. My name is Shima" she whispered. "and.. my egg." she cried ot in anguish. He notice how sad she looked, helpless and alone. Plus, she couldn't even swim. She'd never make it to the portal. Not by herself, anyway. "Then, I'll help you, Shima" he nodded. She looked up at him. "Y-you will?" she asked meekly. "Yes, I will". 

  She cried out joyfully as she rode on the back of the murren. They sped off through the ocean of Aquati, leaving rippling water behind them. "What's your name?" she asked happily. He smiled, "Koru." he said simply. "Thank you, Koru. Thank you" she said softly. And in the distance the saw the rippling green portal that would take her to Relcore. She cried out, almost falling off the back of Koru. 

  "Thank you!" she yelled out to Koru. She realized without him, she would have never made it this far. She would have be dead, drowned. He waved one of his lavender fins out to her from the water. She smiled and swished her tail in respond, leaping trough the portal. She silently cried out, from the feeling of the portal. It was a similar feeling to drowning, the feeling she knew all to well. But this time, here in the portal, she could breathe. 

Falling out on the other side of the portal, she realized it had only been a second she'd spent inside the portal. Though, it felt like an eternity. Now one of the small side towns of Relcore, she sighed. She was home again. The same town where she'd been hatched. She looked up at the old run down house she'd lived in. But now, sitting across from it, she was free. Her eyes where cold and she stood up stiffly. Then, she took a few slow steps towards the house. Then, she ran. 

She ran on silent wings, rushing into the forest. She almost fell forward as she spotted a human. It was there, by the bush she had laid her egg away. And in the human's hands, held closely to her, was a jet black egg with a pink heart. She was too late. But she'd been so close... Just to have it all ripped away, by a few mere minutes off. She stepped slowly through the ferns, staring coldly at the human as it walked away. 

Meelanya though she heard something following her, slow, light footsteps crunching the leaves behind her. Whatever, or whoever, it was, was doing a bad job of following her. She turned around quickly, only to be coldy stared at by a small Iluvu. She though of the egg in her backpack. Could this be...? No, no. It couldn't be. Where was the mother when she found the egg? There seemed to be no tracks around the bush. Plus, the egg was cold and shivering. No mother would leave her egg like that. 

  She made a shooing motion with her hand, staring at the Iluvu. Probably someone's pet. But looking at her ragged un-groomed fur said otherwise. She stared at the Iluvu blankly, not sure what to know. She didn't seem to be planning on moving. And if she kept moving, the Iluvu would only follow her. "What to you want?" she asked tartly, crouching down on her knees. 

  Shima stared coldly at the human, following her boldly trough the forest. She stepped on every leaf, not trying to hide her presence. As the human turned around, she held her ground. As the human shooed her off, or tried to, she only glared at her more. Furious, though she couldn't speak it.  When the human crouched down to ask her a question, she quickly bit her nose and leaped easily onto her back. 

  Meelanya cried out in pain as the Iluvu snapped forward and bit her nose. She felt a weight on her back, realizing the Iluvu had jumped onto her back. She felt it clawing at her backpack. She jerked up, hoping to throw the Iluvu off. But she stayed put, tearing at the backpack. She heard a rip and yanked her backpack off. 

  Crawling into the tear she had made in the human's backpack she pulled her egg close to her. Then she felt herself being rushed to the side of the backpack. A angry face peered into the backpack, and glared at Shima holding the egg closely. She's wouldn't let go. This was her egg, her life, and she just wouldn't let go.

Staring down at the Iluvu, crammed into her backpack, she noticed it holding the egg tightly. Maybe this was the egg's mother. But why would she neglect it, only to fight for it back? Whatever reason she had, she needed to get out of her backpack. Yanking the Iluvu harshly out of the backpack, with the egg, she place both softly on the ground. "Fine. Keep it." she said harshly, walking away.

Holding the egg close, she could feel the unborn kit's labored life. Even as an egg, the child was sick. And  Shima knew no way of helping it. She sighed, nudging the egg to the human. "I need help!" she said crossly, knowing this would come out as 'I loo vue'. But hopefully the idiotic human got the message. The human stared at her then at the egg. Then back to her, then back to the egg. The human picked up the egg in one hand, and Shima in the other. She hissed indigently, but fought no other way. 

~~~~2 months later~~~~

Shima pawed her son gently. He hopped onto her back, biting her ear with his tiny teeth. Meelanya sat at a desk off to the side of the room. She watched the two of them play, and smiled gently. Shima looked at Meelanya, and smiled softly back at her, before shaking her son off and nudging his head. She watched as his jaws opened widely, then shut drowsily. Nudging him off to their bed, she curled protectively around her son. And as he fell asleep, and a gentle quite fell over the house, she whispered softly... "Goodnight Fluffae."

 

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Hrm. If this doesn't count as him being the main character, even though the story totally revolved around him technically... then ohwell. I had fun. So yea, I spent about an hour or so on this, I hope you enjoy it, at the least. It's 1821 words. 

Jylaz366

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Whoa! That is LONG!!! D8



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Wishbelle

7:00pm Feb 28 2011 (last edited on 6:29pm Mar 1 2011)

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I was in a egg. A cold egg. No sun. The day I hatched was a joyous day. I opened my eyes to see who was my owner but no-one looked down at me but a alien thing. OOOOOOH cried the alien thing! There was a blue and yelllow horse next to him. MRHORSE it cried. A smaller  horse crowded next to it. HOLYCOW it shouted. I looked behind me. It was not me they were talking to, there was a GIANT HORSE-COW behind me!

"Umm...." I said to them. All they said back was

"Don't talk Fluffae, this thing can eat you up like gr*censored*!"  Scared, I looked up at the horse cow again. It was HUDGE! It was taller then 2 trees!! OMG I thought. the smallest horse (who said HOLYCOW) suggested to take a ride on the horse.

"Lets RIDE IT!" he shouted jumping up and down. The others jumped up and down too.

"Wait.... whats your names?" I asked feeling I was in the presence of mental idiots.

"MrHorse!" said the yellow and blonde horse. "This is SPACEDOOOODE!" he pointed to the alien.

"HOLYCOOOOOOOOOOW!" shouted the small horse. And with that I got to know these things as MRHORSE HOLYCOW and SPACEDUDE.

After my question I was scooped up against my will by Holycow and tossed up onto the giant horse! A split second I thought I could fly, buuut theeenn.... I went pelting down to the cow's back  at 1 million MPH! I was like... I'm too young to die! SO then Spacedude got HUDGE! I have no idea how! And threw MRHORSE and HOLY cow onto the cows back. Then jumped on and was suddenly small. 

I wondered how we were to control this m*censored*ive creature but I suspected spacedude had us covered. The cow suddenly took a DEEP breath and made a sound so loud I thought my ears would burst! it went something like this- MOOOOOOOOOO

OOOOOOOOOOOOO

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

OOOOOOOOO

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO and it was so loud I thought I had went deaf for a few moments. But I heard MrHorse cry DUCK AND COVER so I knew I could not be deaf. ME being new born and all thought but there is nothing to cover from and no ducks until a random duck came along and swooped me up! HolyCow started to yell RUN to the cow. After the loud Moo, all the building had collapsed so I had a real sight to see behind me. A giant cow with some idiots on it's back running over collapsed building to fetch a Fluffae thing. I looked in front of me. A sign said 'Good ol' 1800s' so I finally knew what year I was in! Then the sign epically crashed into a bus which rolled off the world because Christopher Columbus had died today and never got the chance to proove the world was round, so it was flat.

The bird kept flying thinking where in the world did my babies go? which allowed the cow people lien things behind me to catch up whic made the competition even! As we neared the end of the world I started to worry if my fluffae pink fur would frizz in the wild unpredictable space! I would hate to be seen with a frizzy coat, it just would make me look so horrible. Let get back to the story.

So the bird reached the end of the world and was still flying! So far my fur was fine but I saw the bird was having trouble breathing! I mean a sparrow like it must have TINY lungs compared to my lung which must have been 10 time's it size whic brings me to the conclusion sparrows must be really strong. So as we flew the bird p*censored*ed out and dropped me. I thought OH NO! Until the giant cow cast a giant shadow over my punny self. I looked up and saw HolyCow  reaching out a supper long hoof to my rescue. I grabbed it! Just in time I thought for we entered a black hole! 

On the other end or the black hole was Spacedude's home planet! with a THUD we landed. The cow must have weighed 64367426758249768675489675842675984675843 because the planet cracked! IT was quite amusing if you ask me. The fact that all the little stick figure alienthings can tumbling down a mountain cliff into something I heard called a death tunnel if I am correct. I could not WAIT to get inside! LOLOLOLOLOL. a death tunnel! I sound like death but only.... My trip has been so nice death is out fo the picture! It is so much fun! 

So we entered the death tunnel! it was all purpley and black inside! I could hear non stop cracks and OOOS or fear coming from in front! Suddenly Mrhorse shouted I SEE THE LIGHT! and there was a crack of lightning! I was like LOLOLOL lightning! I hope my hair is not affected! I mean If my coat stays this way the WHOLE ride I will be like OMG look at me I am SO pretty! But enough about me! So this green lightning bolt hit the cow and the cow started to glow GREEN! it MOOOOOOOOOOO agian and let out a cry of excitment! I had to cover my ears because it was SO LOUD! but a green glowing cow? What in the world has this land come to! From alien things to glowing cows O_o. I love it I was born to be here! UNtil.... I fell off the cow! Holycow started to go HAHAHAEHEHEEHAHAHWHEHE and let out his tounge for me to grab! It was slimy and green rays were everywhere! I guess a death hole means what it is! I thought why am I doing this? Grabbing a tounge! I saw his breakfast on it! I was like EWWW it smells but also greatful causew e were out of the detah hole! WOOT WOOT! 

I break danced all over! saying! Woot woot! awesome! Until I looked around and no-one was there but me! There was no cow either! I was break dancing in mid air tumbling into a planet in which I have no iea what could contain! Maybe poisonous snakes or a jungle of furry things like me! But all I know is I never saw MrHorse and the others agian! When I landed I met some nothing! But I did meet some things that looked like their twins! It was an alien dude JUST like spacedue who had the same name! A horse who was an idiot like MrHorse who said his name was MrHorse! And a smaller cow who was called HolyCow! But I will never know what happened to my old pals but living on this weird black and white spotted planet has been my home ever since! It even had a head shapped like a cow! and it always seemed to be hurtling through Space and once and a while I would hear a MOOO that same MOOOO the cow used to make! But I love my home! I call it Fluffae since thats what I got the be called! I love my home and my friends on this small planet!

 

 

((FINISHED!)) 




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Meelanya

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@Immortal - Wow! That brought a tear to my eye! Your story is amazing!

@Wishbelle - Lolllll OMG your story is hilarious!!! You should've seen me laughing my butt off, all alone in my livingroom! x'D




Wishbelle

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I edited it! I completed it! WOOT WOOT!



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Meelanya

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Wishbelle - LOL Awesome!!! xD



Wishbelle

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today is the 1st...... O.O!! who won who won who won!



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Meelanya

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D'uhhh. I forgot about that! xD -derp-
I think I will extend the date a little bit.
Let's say until March 5th! :D



Wishbelle

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NO! today ;(! please! I am going to die meel! I really want to know! but I guess I can maybe wait.



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Meelanya

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But there's only 3 entries! xD It's not enough! lolll :[



Wishbelle

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The less entries the better chance of My story winning!

If I win can I use the story on his pet page?????? 




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Meelanya

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Of course Wish! :D



Wishbelle

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YEAH!!!!! I would dye him, if I get him but the story says PINK thing so he must stay natural p: or magenta hmm....



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Wishbelle

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winner?? it is the ffiiitthhhh



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Meelanya

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Lolll Wishbelle! xD Yep, it is the 5th! I guess I'll get an Iluvu out for everyone! xD

 

Wishbelle - You may have Fluffae, since you wanna use your story on his pet page.

Immortal - You may have Fluffay!

Jylaz - You may have 2hearts!

 

All three will be on my profile in a minute! :D Set trades.




Wishbelle

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OMG I won! I had no idea! JK! I will cherish Fluffae 4EVA! I love it! thank you SO much ^^



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