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12:19am Sep 11 2010 (last edited on 6:11pm Sep 24 2010)

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Wanna make 500k? Write a story about my amber tesuri, 5pider! Any theme is accepted, I want to see people's talents and ideas. The story I later pick will get the 500k.

 2nd and 3rd places will also get something.

The deadline for all stories has ended.

 

1st place - 500k (Dustfeather)

2nd place -  Valabex egg (innagong)

3rd - Otachie egg (recreater6000)




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gemmalambe

7:55am Sep 11 2010

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5pider the amber tesuri was a very lonley creatu and had no friends so he was very excited was he found an egg on the floor so he decided to make the egg his very first friend. He took it home and put it in a box of hay and waited 7 days for it to hach, all he did was wach the egg. When it started to hach he wached and waited some more, first a tiny crack then the top poped of and out came the little baby. It was a nateral Ivik and 5pider was very happy but just then the baby fell over in to a pot of creatu dye and was dyed amber so now the were the same colour as each other and were very happy so they lived happly ever after 

                                                         THE END

                                      




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innagong

1:22pm Sep 11 2010

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My name is 5ider. Call me Spider, if you wish. I'm an amber Tesuri, and yeah, I know, a Tesuri, the amazing swimming fox with wings. The thing is, I've never felt amazing, or even good about myself for my whole life. Sure, I'm valuable. Sure, I'm handsome. But that doesn't mean a thing. It's like that old saying, don't judge a book by it's cover. I've always been a loner, until Arcane came and picked me up.

This event has drastically changed me, and my life has done a 360. Arcane is the most amazing person in the world, and I wouldn't change a single thing about her. She brought me home, away from the hell I was in before. I made new friends, and more importantly, a real family. For once, I've felt good about myself, even amazing, and I owe it all to Arcane. Arcane, I've said it once, and I'll say it again, you're the most amazing person I have ever met. 

 

And that's my short story. ^^ 




Flashbacks, warm nights,
Almost left behind.
Suitcases of memories,
Time after time.

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InvalidNumbers

1:35pm Sep 11 2010

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Hello, I am 5pider! I love my owner, ArcaneWolf! She is awesome. I love being her amber Tesuri, and she is so nice to me.

 Ok, this is my short story. It's so short!

 




99% of teens would cry if they saw Justin Beiber standing on top of a skyscraper about to jump. I am one of the 1% sitting there with popcorn and 3D glasses, screaming "DO A BACK FLIP!"
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Innagong has done a great story! Well done!



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recreater6000

3:57pm Sep 11 2010

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My name is 5pider, like the insect. I was born on August 21st, 2010.

 I am an Amber Tesuri. Yes, I know, it's like "Oh my god, a Tesuri!" But i'm not all that. No, my owner has taught me better than that. I don't show off. It makes me sick, seeing pets that show off, and that fills the hole in their heart to make other people feel inferior. Who likes to make people sad about themselves?

I like to make people happy. Once in a while, i take walks with my owner, ArcaneWolf, and i see someone sad. So I come up and lick their hand while their not looking, and they look at me, and smile. I close my eyes as they pet me, and i'm smiling with glee, my heart feeling warm and delightful. Then ArcaneWolf comes over and takes me away, leaving the recently sad person to happily go home.

You see, I don't like seeing people upset. Like you would be after a break up, or getting yourself a cut, or sprain. That makes a cookie cutter stab into my heart. I wish iI could do something about it when that happens... but the best help I can provide... is caring. 

 

FAIL END. 




In soviet russia, car drives you :D
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5:09pm Sep 11 2010

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Interesting story recreater6000.



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wizgrl

1:29am Sep 12 2010 (last edited on 1:40am Sep 12 2010)

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I opened my eyes and there she was. She was my new owner, and so much more than that. She became my constant compaion and greatest friend. Who am I, you may ask? I am 5pider, a Tesuri- one of many creatu that exist. I am slightly different, however, for I belong to a cl*censored* of rare creatu, being both elusive and after hatching, becoming quite a stunning and rare color. Back to my birth; I was but a kit when I began to see the world around me, so vivid and full of interesting creatu as well as humans. No human, however, is as unique as mine. Arcane is bold, comp*censored*ionate and extremely generous. Being an adult now, I see how special and significant her companionship is. I will always remain loyal to Arcane, who found me in a little swamp in Atquati and had the heart to stop for me, still within my egg, and incubate and hatch me. We have been inseperable ever since, and shall remain that way for many years to come. We creatu are shaped by those that raise and care for us. It is my great fortune to have been shaped and trained by someone as honorable and knowdegable as my owner.




Dustfeather

2:02am Sep 12 2010

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5pider is the name Arcane gave me. So don't you dare call me anything else.

Did I ever tell you that story? Of how I met her? No? Well, I guess that makes sense. Not many people come by to see me. I'm not really a social magnet.

I was born into a large family. I remember there being many pups. The majority were natties, like me. A sepia or cream here and there. There was a blonde thrown in the mix though, and compared to her, we were all treated like dirt.
That was the only sort of kinship I felt with my silbings. But I was always the one with the odd pessimism, and was avoided.

When we hit age fifteen we were kicked out of the old den and forced to see the world with new eyes. Eyes of fear and wariness. If we were to survive on our own, we couldn't act like pups anymore, now could we?
The first place I headed was the Atqueen Forest. I figured pets get picked up there all the time, why should I be any different?
Someone did pick me up, actually, but within a few weeks I was rotting in their graveyard. Making the soil healthy by decaying. Or something. I've long since forgotten the other name, the name my mother gave to me. It doesn't matter. I don't count it as one of my names; it doesn't deserve that sort of acknowledgement.

I don't know how long I was in that hellhole, but eventually I found the energy of a resurrection potion coursing through my veins. It was a wonderful feeling, after being all skin and- no wait, just bones- for months. I became whole again.

Almost. I didn't have a name.

Of course I was wondering why my owner had revived me, but it turns out some kindly user had requested to adopt me. I was shocked, really. She promptly gave me the name 5pider. Before I really absorbed all this, I was traded over to who I soon knew as Arcane.

I was quiet for days, but she was patient with me, and eventually I opened up. Gave her a few words once in a while. It was only later that I began to appreciate the name she had given me, for a name was an identity; a name tied you to a family. I had a family now, and it was her.
5pider. Who needs the real letter anyway? If anything, the odd spelling made me feel more unique.

Then she surprised me again and dyed me amber. I was elated. I didn't really care that I had lost my 'nattie' status. It was more than that. I felt like I had shed my whole original, depressing existance before I met her.

Arcane is my world. She's done everything for me. More. I don't even understand how...

Oh geez. I've rambled. Didn't expect to talk this much. I've really changed since then, eh?

Bye. Give Arcane a box of chocolates or something on your way out.









Dustfeather -> Sparrow -> Universe
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1:39pm Sep 12 2010

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Wizgrl and Dustfeather have got spectacular stories so far.



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Toast

11:10pm Sep 12 2010

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No other entries?



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JessiKorpse

11:16pm Sep 12 2010

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I will enter. c: Give me a little time. <3




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KrazyK

5:58pm Sep 13 2010

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I will enter just let me warm up my thinking muscle..:)



Thanku, Krazy K :)
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5:51pm Sep 14 2010

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Bumpie



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wizgrl

10:42pm Sep 14 2010

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Bump

Hope you get more entrants :)





iloveotter

10:22pm Sep 15 2010

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enter almost done
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6:12pm Sep 17 2010

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so far Dustfeather is on a roll



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Toast

9:58pm Sep 21 2010

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Bumpie! Bumpie!



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Zayn

9:51pm Sep 24 2010

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5pider.

That is my name.

Gee thanks mom for not going to school. >:C Spell my name right next time plz.

But 5pider is cooler than Spider. Cause really, if my name was Spider, everyone would  like, want me. Cause it is a RWN. But 5pider is better. It is cool cause if you just glance at my name, its like, HOLY CRAP THE NAME SPIDER!?!?!?!?!!1!?!?

Then they like, look closer, and like, it's 5pider. Then they go oh. I see. -wander off-

BUT IT IS AWESOME because I can stay with my awesome owner and be a Tesuri that not everybody wants but Veraz does and she is jealous. :c And then Arcane can feed me salmon and cream with garlic bread bought from the 7553875 dollar shop. Cause I'm worth it. -does hair product pose thing-

Anyway, you want to hear the way I came about? I'll tell you. I'll tell you EVERYTHING. 

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The moment my egg cracked, my mother screamed with joy. 

"OMG OMG OMG OMG FRANCIS!" she yelled at my dad, who as usual was lazing by the tv.

"WHAT DO YOU WANT JUSTINE." he yelled back. And then I was out.

As the eggshell fell away, I caught my first glance of the world. Then I was just as quickly almost drowned by my mother licking me into oblivion. 

"AROWRR!" I complained, seeing as I couldn't talk yet. My mother chuckled at me, then lifted me up to examine me more closely.

"Eh, he's a natural." She sighed. My father turned around. 

"Poop!" He grumbled, stomping over and taking me by the scruff. "Gonna have to abandon the little thing."

My mother nodded, then grabbed a piece of paper and write a note saying that she couldn't look after me or some junk, whatever they write on those letters, like the one in Harry Potter when Harry gets dumped with the Dursley's, you know. 

"Call it 5pider, then we can save Spider for our next child if it is coloured. If it isn't coloured again lets call it Sp1der." My father growled, tossing me and the letter into a basket. He carried me down the bank from the cave and chucked the basket into a nearby river, and I floated happily away down the bubbling water.

 

Some way down my watery fate, a big pink paw reached into the basket and yanked me out. The letter, slung around my neck, was ripped of gently.

"What are you doing here?" A nice voice said, somewhere above me.

"Grrowprwoof!" I said. Well, blubbered. I couldn't really say much yet.

"Aww, you poor thing!" The voice said. The pink paw patted me on the head. "I know just the thing for you."

I was taken by this...well I dunno what it was. Thing. Into a big wooden cave. And then I was put down on a chair. 

"Wait there." The thing instructed me. I heard water start flowing into a basin of some sort, and saw the shadow of the thing pour some orange stuff into it.

Then, suddenly, I was lifted by my scruff and plonked into the water with a splash. I struggled, spluttering, for the surface, and exploded out of the liquid with a thud onto the carpet. The thing laughed at me, so I tried to whap it with my paw, but it lifted me up again.

"You look amazing, 5pider." It said. I looked at myself. In disbelief.

Then I said my first words.

"HOLY CRAP! I'M ORANGE!!"

 

 

 

c: Hope Arc likes it. ♥






Zayn

9:52pm Sep 24 2010

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And ya I do know its finished, I'm just bored xDD





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