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Fireelf

8:42am Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 9:18am Dec 14 2010)

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I am good at poetry, only I find everything comes out with a depressing or sad theme, so for a change I would like to see some bright, happy stuff.

 

Now, to narrow it down and make it more challenging:

1. No Love or Romance Themes

2. Please make it more that five lines, or I will cla.ss it as a Limerick :o

3. NO PLAGERISM WHAT SO EVER.

Apart from that you have free range to write on anything you want.

 

Now to the most interesting part:

Prizes:

First: Shaefu Egg and a display on my profile

Second: Xoria Voodoo Doll

Third: Name Tag

Fourth:1 Mill TU

 

Remember to post if you intend to enter :)

CLOSING DATE: Wll be Tuesday 21st December






HappyMomCat7

9:05am Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 9:15am Dec 10 2010)

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A Welcome Home

Little pattters of little feet

Hurrying to greeting me as I come home

from a very long and hard day at work.

Purrs and tails, jumping up

to welcome me home

Licks on my face that make me smile

Now I am so glad to be back home!

 

Written by Di

 

 




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druu

10:29am Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 10:30am Dec 10 2010)

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 There is an opaque part of the body

By Alisha M.

1.

sunlight glows red through eyelid membranes;
illuminates windows to our ever-transparent souls.
And who, who is to say that one is ill-prepared to receive it?
Sound begins to fragment and we can touch the vibrations.
Scuffing feet leave trails worth tracking.
Air dissipates and we suffocate on our own breaths.
Our shoulders curve as we bear the sum of our darkest parts.

Oh, to touch.


2.

The heart jolts in panicked spurts of red life.
A touch of a word to still it;
a brush of a hand to freeze it.
seasons mean nothing - the temperature that matters, truly,
is on the inside.
down, deeper than our transluscent skins.
Our dragonfly wing-lips and eyes of brittle glas.s.

Oh, opacity.
autumnleaves

4:19pm Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 4:21pm Dec 10 2010)

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Becky’s question

When Becky was asked,

“Where would you go in the past?”

 

She replied,” Oh I don’t know.

I would visit the first gazebo

 

And the Mayflower mast

Maybe see the last

 

Olympic Games and sit in a row

That was very low

 

I would be in the first television cast

And visit a desert that was very vast

 

I’d also meet Marilyn Monroe

And stay in the country of Monaco.”

Thanks! =)




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iloveotter

6:54pm Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 7:42pm Dec 12 2010)

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My winter wear

I felt a breeze go by my hair

But the coldness was not fair

I went inside to get a coat

but all was left was a note that was wrote

I knew that they would take care with love

but there stood with my winter coat a hole in my glove

I screamed in the air i was angry

but i told him no more and he just smiled in agree

took and hope you care!

 

Getting ready

Todays the day I get to play

The snow will melt by the sunshine's ray

Go and get my special toy

Its name is Roy!

I got to get my coat

Then I went to say

 

Merry Christmas

 

 

 

StFangofBoredom

10:41pm Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 12:36am Dec 11 2010)

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Something I wrote for a creative writing in college. Based on a scene from a fanfic I wrote. 

 Beast and Intruder

It would be easy to mistake the sound for thunder.

He ran wildly through the open field, beating some mad dance into the ground in front of him.

He seems to take no notice of the world around him.  He doesn't need to.

It's his world, everyone else should take notice of him.

He leaps, making circles through the meadow, swinging his head from side to side.

Then, on a dime, he stops.  He stretches upward, trying to let even the Heavens know of his existence.

He lets out a scream as he plummets back to earth, an earthquake rumbling under his feet as he lands.

He isn't satisfied with the sky's lack of answer. He races to and fro across the field again, making himself known.

He races to the middle and reaches again.  Notice me.  

I challenge even you to try and stop me.

Suddenly, his challenge is accepted.  Sometimes flies towards him and lands on his back.

He bucks, he kicks, he screams.  

Like a two year old child, he throws a tantrum.

But the Intruder holds on.

The Intruder speaks calmly to the Beast.  He rea ssures him of his fate.

Exausted, the Beast gives in, his dance becoming a slow walk as his sweat sparkles off of his body, giving the illusion of a black diamond in the sun.

The Intruder takes a handful of the Beast's hair.  With a gentle tug, the Beast walks the way the Intruder dictates.

No longer Beast. No longer Intruder.

They are partners. 

fawn

11:06pm Dec 10 2010 (last edited on 11:20pm Dec 10 2010)

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Holidays

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I see my family once again

Cant belive the joy they bring

The fun we have when we sing

No matter what the wether

We are always together

Seems to get better every single holiday

We share the laughs all of the days~




SerenityMist

1:35am Dec 11 2010

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Reserved



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supernovastar

4:31am Dec 11 2010 (last edited on 4:32am Dec 11 2010)

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Together

We can roam the hills 

Freely

But alone,

We are little but a body

Together

We are one

As flames dance,

And dewy gra.ss sparkles,

I see you

Gambolling around

Tail wagging,

Feet pounding.

You are beauty,

Happiness

Silence,

Noise

And Love

All rolled into one.

I love you.

You are my dog. x

 by supernovastar

 

 

R-U-B-B-I-S-H I know. I fail at writing poetry. I may be able to get one I did at school on instead since I just made this one up off the top of my head. Wierd, eh?

 




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Life

8:01am Dec 11 2010 (last edited on 10:48pm Dec 17 2010)

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Your fragile, folded wings are just tired from the pure blue sky
Break free from the arresting clouds and let your feet touch the forest floor
Listen to the rustling of the bright autumn leaves,
As the trees break into a wild dance in the glory of your presence
Grace their welcome by smiling.
You don't have to smile for the sake of others.
It's okay to smile for yourself.
It will always be.

Walk down that weather-beaten path
And listen to the water
Flowing down the sleek, clear stream.
Stretch your wings,
But don't flap them
Let the breeze caress your feathers.
Close your eyes and feel the thick atmosphere
Breathe out all your whims and troubles,
Let them fly free, away from where you are

From there you walk on
You breathe in the freshness of the air
You taste the sweetness of the wind
Close your eyes
and feel
Feel the warmth of the invisible bonfire
In the wintry land.

When you've had enough
Stretch your wings
Flap them
And feel the air gather under them
Break into a run and take to the pure blue sky
This time with a smile on your face
Because,

You've taken a break, and you're happy.
You don't have to smile for the sake of others
It's okay to smile for yourself
It will always be.

OMG I FEEL ACCOMPLISHED. :D



 

Fireelf

11:46am Dec 11 2010

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Thank you for all your entries so far :)  They are all great.





TheWorldAroundUs

11:52am Dec 11 2010

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For away from here

If u should wake and im not there dont fear

For i am in a better place far away from here

taken my life to be safe and sound
 forever i will sleep 

as i am far away from here


heaven or hell does it matter?
im far away from here


to take my own life was such a pain but
im far away from here


to be with the sun who stopped breathing and is
far away from here


i miss life and cannot live without it

when it is not near
and ill be happy as long as
im far away from here......

 




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Honeybee

11:54am Dec 11 2010

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A dog to his human.

 

i really
really
really dont believe im
a dog. i mean
look at me
im talking to you
im writing poetry

do you think a dog could write poetry

listen
im sorry if i peed on the couch
when i was younger
and chewed up your favorite socks
and im really really sorry
that i leaped up on visitors
(i swear i was just excited)

but honestly
i believe that maybe one day
ill be just like you
with two legs

who knows
maybe
in another world
another time

you were the dog
and i was the human

 

ps
sorry for not
having the best capitalization
and barely having symbols
(typing with paws is really annoying)




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heybay

3:18pm Dec 11 2010

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Reserved for Abby's entry. (: Unless I completely forget about this, but I hope not. ^^



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mickeyy

5:07pm Dec 11 2010 (last edited on 5:13pm Dec 11 2010)

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Gone

Gone like the wind and the snow                                                                          

Gone like all the festivity there once was                                                                                                                       

A warm land is all that's left                                                                             

Where swimming and ice cream are best

I long for the the snowy hills                                                                             

With giving in the air

Where little kids are joyful                                                                                

And everyone has Christmas cheer

Happy Holidays   =)                                                                   

 




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Wishbelle

9:20am Dec 12 2010 (last edited on 4:23pm Dec 12 2010)

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Silverbird
 
A trail of silver marks the sky
carrying a silver harp
tweeting a lovely tune
flapping those brilliant wings
wings of stars
wings of hope
wings of dreams
soaring over life itself
dropping brilliant feathers
feathers of stars
feathers of hope
feathers of dreams
silverbird
what a brilliant sight
what a brilliant feeling
of joy and happiness when a feather lands in your soul
Silverbird 
Long tail feathers stretched out
like a flag waving
oh so brilliant in the gentle night sky
a tail of stars
a tail of hope
a tail of dreams
Silverbird
 
~Belle



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ipod2259

9:33am Dec 12 2010

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Laugh with me
 
C'mon laugh with me :),
 
I bet I can make you laugh ,
 
We can roll down a hill together,
 
Or go skiing down a mountain,
 
Now I'm seeing that beautiful smile I wanted to see,
 
But I need to get you to laugh,
 
Maybe if I tickle you it will come out of you,
 
Maybe we can stop by and get some ice-cream,
 
I see that smile getting bigger and bigger,
 
But yet I need to get a laugh,
 
I know what you like to do and we will do all that,
 
But only if you laugh,
 
Or just a giggle will make me happy,
 
So please please won't you laugh with me?   Laughingtle="Laughing" />
 
Merry Christmas,
 From Ipod2259
 
P.S Remember to laugh with your family 
 



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Fireelf

3:45pm Dec 12 2010

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Goodness this is going to be a hard one to judge, they are all great, I will set a closing date soon I promise.





Eliv

4:01pm Dec 12 2010

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Mine are always sad too, but everyone says their good, here:

This one's sad, but it's fairly good.

 Abuse

Locked and alone,
I have no home,
Been shoved in a microwave,
The radiation, oh did it burn.
My owner dumped me out on the street,
Where horrible childen pull at my feet.
I want a home,
where someone will take care of me,
give me food, and give back my joy and glee.
I'll never forget the painful lies,
Dirty and tricky it's all a rhyme.
I look at a lady, dressed in white,
Tears coming, flowing out of her eyes,
She lays me down, and rubs my belly,
It makes me forget the menacing memory,
She holds a needle, tears now on my fur,
I lick her hand, *censored*uring her not to worry.
I knew what was coming all along,
It all came to this, One death sentance,
where people can not hurt me, but care and love me.
She pushes the needle into my leg,
My legs go limp as I start to pray,
Will someone love me?
Not like before, I hope someone will love me,
Forever More.

 

Christmas

Christmas is coming, once again.
With Trinkets and Candy canes,
Gifts and food,
But is this a necessity?
Do we rely on christmas joy and cheer?
Is it just presents that the feelings reside on?
The True meaning of christmas is love and family,
Relaxing and cherishing,
While christmas lasts.
Merry christmas to all!

~Eliv




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Wishbelle

4:24pm Dec 12 2010

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I agree fire!! they are all good!!



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