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kewlgurl

1:25pm Nov 25 2012 (last edited on 9:25am Dec 13 2012)

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So, I will be hosting a writing contest.
1st
2mil

2nd
1mil

3rd
500k

and 50k to everyone who participates.

So we all kind of have an idea of how the earth came to life right?
So now I want you to create your OWN story of how that happened. Whether it be scientific, or fictional. I will be keeping the entries as a suvenior

Contestants:
Greenkat
neomaemae
Megabyte
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kewlgurl

1:29pm Nov 25 2012

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whops. forgot to sub
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GreenKat

5:38pm Nov 25 2012

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I'll rmail my entry. End date? Word limit?



kewlgurl

5:39pm Nov 25 2012

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no word limit.
chrismas
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GreenKat

6:35pm Nov 25 2012

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k thanks.



neomaemae

8:35pm Nov 25 2012

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OEN? I do not understand.



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GreenKat

3:38pm Nov 26 2012

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I think she meant own



neomaemae

4:11pm Nov 26 2012

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Oh.. haaaahhhaaaa.
I don't think I'll be entering this, cause I'm a christian and believe god made the world... and that's from the bible.. so it wouldn't technically be my own? So.... uh.... ?



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kewlgurl

5:16pm Nov 26 2012

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your own, if you like you can base it off that, but not exactly the same, i judge on cratuvty
i beliee thaat god made the world and adam and eve
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neomaemae

4:42pm Nov 27 2012

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Ok. I will start! I will try. >:I



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Meg

9:14pm Nov 27 2012 (last edited on 9:14pm Nov 27 2012)

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I'll write you something. Should I rmail it to you or post it here?
Edit: Woo, my friends believe in God :)



Meg

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Bump. I'm almost done with mine ^^



kewlgurl

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You can post or rmail
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neomaemae

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Ok. Done! It's not too long, so I'll just post here.

















In the beginning, there was God. There was no world, no
universe, only God. There was no light, no life, but God.



 



And God was there, he was and always was there. The Spirit
of God, hovering over the darkness.



 



And God decided there must be a change.  And God said, ”Let there be light.” And
so, there was light. God looked at the light and knew it was good. He separated
light from darkness, and the light was good.



 



He named the light day, and the darkness night. There was
evening, there was morning.



 



And that was the first day.



 



The next day, God said, “Let there be a place between water,
to separate water from water.” So God made the place and separated the water
from it. God called the place “Sky”. There was evening, there was morning.



 



And that was the second day.



 



The next day, God said, “Let the water, not sky, be gathered
together, and dry ground shall appear.” And so it was.



 



God named the dryness “land” and the water “seas”. And God
observed, and it was good.



 



Then God said, “Let the land make vegetation, plants with
seeds, trees with fruits, also with seeds. And they shall multiply and bear
seeds and fruit.” God looked and knew that it was good. There was evening,
there was morning.



 



And that was the third day.



 



And after, God said, “Let there be lights in the sky, to
separate night from day. They shall be signs to mark seasons, days, years. They
shall give light to the earth.” And so it was.



 



God made two great lights, one to rein over day, one to rein
over night. He made stars, smaller than the great lights. And god saw, and it
was good. There was evening, there was morning.



 



And that was the fourth day.



 



Thereafter, God said, “Let the water called seas be full of
living creatures, life, and in the sky also. They shall fly above land and
water and some shall be named birds.” And in this way God made all living
creatures in land, sky and water. And God saw that it was good. And he blessed
them, each and everyone, to multiply and fill the earth. There was evening,
there was morning.



 



And that was the fifth day.



 



Then God said, “Let there be man, made in my image, in my
likeness, to fill the earth and multiply. Man shall rule over birds of the sky
and creatures of the sky, and all animals on dry land. I give Man all fruit
bearing plants for food, and the animals shall eat of the plants also.”



 



And it was so. God looked around at all he had made. And it
was good. There was evening, there was morning.



 



And that was the sixth day.



 



And so, the heavens and the earth were completed in all
their beauty and splendor.



 



There was a man and a woman.... but that is another story.



Hope you like it! It's based on the bible of course. :)

<3

neo~








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Meg

11:08am Dec 8 2012 (last edited on 12:30pm Dec 8 2012)

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I made mine. I'll post it here:


Note: I believe in Creation by God. This
is just a story I made up. It is not what I believe.




Darkness and light. Such was the
beginning of the world. Only the very first angels know how the earth was
created. I am one of those first angels.



I have lost many nights of sleep
considering whether to share the greatest story unknown to man. I have finally
decided that I should indeed tell man. Disclosed only to you chosen few, share
my story with the rest of the world.



The Bible does tell the truth. God spoke,
and it came into being, but there is more than that. God was, delusional. He
believed that He could really do anything. He believed that He could really
create anything he wished just by speaking. That is because of the marvelous
job that we angels did.



We angels carried out every command our
Lord had without question, and without His knowledge of it. We only did this
because before He became so delusional, He created us, shaped us, gave us life,
and loved us. By our work, He believed He was creating the world, and in a way,
He was right, because He commanded us to create the world.




 On
the first day of creation, we angels used our power to create the formless,
watery earth. We gave it night and day, and set it rotating and revolving in
its ever so perfect orbit. We gave it its very bones, the thing that held it
together. We worked tirelessly to make the world perfect, and with the
knowledge we had from our Lord, we succeeded, and he called the world good. We
were tired and weary, but we had little time to rest, for the dawn was soon
approaching.




On the second day, we had a simpler task.
We were to create the heavens, to set the atmosphere in place with its
intricacy and delicate balance. It took all of our effort to do this, for the
balance of gas is oh so delicate that one slip up would cause mass explosions
all over our newly created, perfect earth. We angels started referring to the
earth as our earth this day, which as you will see later, was quite a folly on
our part. We had a night of rest once God proclaimed the world we had worked on
good, but again the dawn crept upon us like a thief creeps upon a house. Our
happiness and rest was very short lived.




On the third day, our major task was the
land. And oh, what a task it was! Forming land out of nothing is not simple,
and we had quite the task set before us. The world was nothing but a liquid
like substance, not unlike water, and we had never actually experienced land
before. It was quite interesting, and not as simple as it may seem. Tirelessly
we worked, and it took half of the day to make just the land. We were weary and
tired, but then came the request of our Lord for vegetation and for water. The
water was simple enough, all we had to do was improve upon the liquid the earth
already had. The vegetation was not as hard as the land, but not as easy as the
water. Making greenery grow full and beautiful in one day is not simple, and
many of the angels had crazy ideas for what the colors, shapes, and sizes
should be. Eventually, we decided on green, and all the other colors you see in
plant life today. All of the plants on earth were made by split second
decisions, and we were lucky it came out the way it did. We had no time to rest
as it took us all night to make the plant life, so we had quite the day before
us. The only relief we had was when God pronounced our work good.




The fourth day was the most chaotic, for
sure. God was intent to speak everything around the earth into existence in one
day, and so we angels had to make trillions of stars in a period of twenty four
hours. We also had to make the planets, the sun, and the moon. We scuttled to
and fro, working epic hours to get the task set before us completed. The stars
took all of us combined to make, and we only had time to rest ourselves once we
were done. God said our work was good, and we were happy, but some of the
angels were upset. They complained that after all they had done, their work was
only “good”. I saw them trying to arise against our Creator, and I feverishly
tried to suppress any rebellion. My attempts worked at first, but became more
futile as the days of creation past.




The fifth day was much easier. We created
the birds and the creatures of the sea. We were lucky that it was, because we
only had two thirds of the power we had before. Why? Because Lucifer and his
angels left us for they believed they were better than God. They started their
own demonic army, and tried to stop us and take over creation for their own
purposes. We had to fend them off at every turn, every single creation was
attacked.




On the sixth day, we created the land
animals first. They were easily protected, and we fended off the dark angels
quite simply, mainly because they protected themselves. However, when we
created man, it was a different story. The angels all surrounded the spot we
had chosen to place man, and they all held drawn swords around the one angel
that had been chosen to create man. That angel was me. I flew amid my fellows,
and breathed life into man. Adam’s first sight was my face, not God’s. Adam
knew I was his creator, but he also knew that he had to pretend like God was,
for I had programmed him with this memory. I created Eve an hour later, another
perfect creation. Everyone congratulated me, and decided to anoint me leader of
angels. I politely refused, which marveled them, but I had my reasons. You need
not know these reasons, as they are not pertinent to this story, but I refused
them nonetheless.




We couldn’t protect our creation for much
longer than a month. The evil one found his way into our creation in the form
of a snake, and tempted my perfect Eve. I almost screamed at her and knocked
the fruit out of her hand, but God told me she had free will and I was not to
interfere. I almost rebelled. I almost flew in there and saved my creation, but
I let it rot, I betrayed my perfect creation. I wept as I watched Eve eat the
very fruit I had created, and I cried like never before as I saw her hand it to
Adam. My fellow angels had to stop me from flying down there. They hadn’t
created them. They didn’t know what it was like to see what you love so dearly
die. They had no idea, but I now did.




I want you all to know it is my fault
that man sinned in a way, but I also want you all to know something else. I was
also the one who sent Jesus to save man; I was the one who convinced Him to
come down and save you all. Jesus wasn’t delusional like His Father. Jesus
rightly claims the ti[injection]tle of a Savior. I was the one who watched in tears as
Jesus died. I was the one who told Mary that her son was alive. I was behind
the scenes the entire time, helping creation along with everything. I was
determined to redeem what I had created.




I want you all to know; I may have
destroyed my beautiful creation, but I also saved it.







kewlgurl

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Thanks! Ending at christmas!
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kewlgurl

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bump!
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neomaemae

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Bump!

I just noticed I should have done mine in Iambic Pentameter. Darn. :C



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kewlgurl

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That's OK, you can edit it.
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neomaemae

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Oh, naah that's fine. I've got tons of other things to worry about!



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