Prison Break! Creatu RP


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Mars

10:20pm Feb 13 2010 (last edited on 2:28pm Feb 14 2010)

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Plot

Berming has always been a peaceful land, but due to one creatu recently, they have been forced to make a Berming Penitentiary. More crimes followed in a trend set by that creatu (who doens't really need a name as that's kind of irrelevant), and now the citizens of Berming have become suspicious of everyone else. Nobody can trust anyone. A number of creatu are convicted of a crime they may or may not have committed. [run!] They are now concocting a plan to get out of the penitentiary--will they break out? If so, where do they go afterward? They can't go home, they'll simply be convicted again. They can't go to anyone but each other, they'll get turned in. Where do they go from here?

Rules

  • Listen to me, please. If I ask you to leave, I will do so respectfully, so I ask that you leave respectfully as well.
  • You may use as many creatu as you can handle, but please do not go overboard, and try to keep genders balanced.
  • Romance and roughage is allowed, encouraged, but please do not make it explicit or too gorey.
  • Post "Berming" to join, just so I know that you read this complete rule set. Post the word in brackets in the plot, so I know you read the whole plot.
  • No GM/PP.
  • Please respect fellow players, and enjoy the RP!

Bio Sheet

  • Creatu name:
  • Gender, age:
  • Species, color:
  • Personality:
  • Did they commit the crime? (bold one: YES/NO)
  • Other:
  • Appearance (image please):

Please enjoy the RP! c:

Did you lose your place?

Who committed the crime? | Jesiah; Kauro

Who is innocent? | Well, everyone else. o3o

Where are we now?* | Berming Penitentiary. We just finished introducing ourselves, and nobody has confessed to committing the crime.

*This is updated daily.






FoxCrazy

10:28pm Feb 13 2010 (last edited on 10:37pm Feb 13 2010)

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Creatu name: Keehar

Gender, age: Male/Adult

Species, color: Meiko/Albino

Personality: Silent, Devious, sharp witted.

Did they commit the crime? NO

Other: None

Appearance:

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Creatu name: Attentater(as.sas.sin in German)

Gender, age: Female/Adult

Species, color: Roditore/Natural(soon to be albino)

Personality: Cunning, Swift, Silent, Thoughtful

Did they commit the crime? NO

Other: An as.sas.in.

Appearance: '....Attentater settled into a crouch upon her perch, watching the city far below. She was some two hundred feet above the ground, but the height didn’t affect her. A light breeze ruffled her white cloak, which was belted around her mid-section, looped twice with a leather cord. On the left side of the belt, a sheathed sword hung, and on the right, a small pouch that held twenty knives was secured to her side. From her left shoulder, across her back to her right hip, and back to her shoulder, a red cloth was bright against her otherwise boring apparel. On this cloth, hanging almost upside-down on her back was an also sheathed dagger. It was angled so that the handle was just under her left shoulder, where she could reach under her arm and grab it. The dagger wasn’t very curved, only enough so it didn’t fall from the sheath when she twisted and turned.

Her Roditore ears were far too large to hide, as were her claws, which were also used as a weapon. But of her face, only her snout was ever seen and even then, rarely. She glanced down, her red eyes glimmering mischievously....'

Excerpt from a short story I'm writing. Hence the sctions and such. i will provide a picture once one is drawn.

Berming/Run




"You're off the edge of the map, mate. Here there be monsters."

Mars

10:28pm Feb 13 2010

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Creatu name: Jesiah
Gender, age: Male, adult
Species, color: Roditore, natural
Personality: Sneaky, somewhat pushy, logically inclined
Did they commit the crime? (bold one: YES/NO)
Other: Had been untrusted by the people for quite some time, but now they have a reason to distrust him.
Appearance (image please):

Creatu name: Jailkeeper
Gender, age: Female, baby
Species, color: Roditore, albino
Personality: Shy, shady, secretive, defensive, honest though everyone takes all she says with a grain of salt
Did they commit the crime? (bold one: YES/NO)
Other: Has always been suspected, but she has never done anything wrong, even to a mild degree.
Appearance (image please):






iheartyou919

10:32pm Feb 13 2010 (last edited on 10:35pm Feb 13 2010)

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  • Creatu name: Crispin
  • Gender, age: Male, Older Teen
  • Species, color: Iluvu, Rose
  • Personality: Sinister, Handsome, Romantic, Suspiscious, Territorial, Loving.
  • Did they commit the crime? (bold one: YES/NO) NO
  • Other: He accidentally murdered someone when he was younger, which makes him a suspect in authorities' eyes. He is an orphan, and is involved in gangs. He hopes to one day find love. His calling card is a dead rose being swallowed up by a living scarlet one, with a scroll with crimson writing saying "Love Reborn."
  • Picture:[Berming/Run]



  • Love is unconquerable. For love needs not the pleasure of outward beauty, as it takes great pride in the inward. Love needs not the cushion of luxury and riches, for lovers tend to grow closer in strife. Love needs not fame, for those true to love will not host greed.
    EasilyBroken

    10:41pm Feb 13 2010

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    ((Can I join?))

     




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    EasilyBroken

    10:44pm Feb 13 2010

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    ((Nvm, Making my first RP.... feel free to join))



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    Spear

    10:48pm Feb 13 2010 (last edited on 11:07pm Feb 13 2010)

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    "Berming"
     
     
    • Creatu name: Serena
    • Gender, age: Female/Middle
    • Species, color: Iluvu/Indigo
    • Personality: Usually a thoughtful one, and has a kind heart. Not one to believe in needless death or violence. 
    • Did they commit the crime? (bold one: YES/NO)
    • Other:  She was once arrested for being nearby at a crime scene. She didn't commit the crime, but the authorities didn't believe her. She is a suspect. 
    • Appearance (image please):



    I just posted. Deal with it.

    Spear

    10:51pm Feb 13 2010

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    (( Nice plot by the way Murgster o0o ))



    I just posted. Deal with it.

    Mars

    10:52pm Feb 13 2010

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    [Thanks. 8D Who'd like the honor of starting?]






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    10:54pm Feb 13 2010

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    ((I will.))

     




    Love is unconquerable. For love needs not the pleasure of outward beauty, as it takes great pride in the inward. Love needs not the cushion of luxury and riches, for lovers tend to grow closer in strife. Love needs not fame, for those true to love will not host greed.
    Spear

    10:55pm Feb 13 2010

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    (( Thanks Iheart. o3o; I thought I was gonna be stuck doing that. xD I usually am. ))



    I just posted. Deal with it.

    iheartyou919

    10:58pm Feb 13 2010

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    It was a cool, brisk night. Shrill winds seared the walls of the Berming Potentiary. The prisoners had cold hearts and most, criminal minds. But Crispin was different. He never belonged in here. He lunged up against the wall, a futile attempt. He lay in the depths of the cell, bruised and heartbroken.




    Love is unconquerable. For love needs not the pleasure of outward beauty, as it takes great pride in the inward. Love needs not the cushion of luxury and riches, for lovers tend to grow closer in strife. Love needs not fame, for those true to love will not host greed.
    ssgarcia97

    11:01pm Feb 13 2010 (last edited on 11:37pm Feb 13 2010)

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  • Creatu name: Kauro
  • Gender, age: Male, Adult
  • Species, color: Intes, Lemon
  • Personality: Kauro is normally grumpy and mean. He prefers to be alone or if he were to be with other creatu, he would want just a few. Kauro can be kind and caring, though, he would only be like that to others he knows or been his friends for a while.
  • Did they commit the crime? (bold one: YES/NO)
  • Other: Nothing I can think of..
  • Appearance (image please):
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    Berming [run!]




    EasilyBroken

    11:03pm Feb 13 2010

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  • Creatu name:Ray
  • Gender, age:Male, 17
  • Species, color:Silver Paor
  • Personality:Nice, Funny, Fun-To-Be-Around
  • Did they commit the crime?NO
  • Other:None
  • Appearance:     "Berming"



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    Mars

    11:04pm Feb 13 2010 (last edited on 11:04pm Feb 13 2010)

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    Jesiah wrinkled his nose, looking around his cell. All these unfamiliar faces--he didn't realize how vast Berming really was. "So what exactly are we in for? Someone, please remind me," he snarled.

    Jailkeeper sighed and shook her head. "Whatever you got us in here for. You were probably drunk," she snapped. "You don't remember a thing, do you? Or are you just lying through your teeth again?"

    (As for you two, just hop right in. ^^ Thank you!)






    Spear

    11:06pm Feb 13 2010

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    "You should probably stop lunging at the wall, you'll end up getting hurt, bad," a calm but weak voice said from a few cells away. Serena's red eyes glowed slightly, but were dull from hunger. She was hungry, as you could tell from her thinning self. She was curled up in the corner of her musty cell, and she shivered as she winds rolled by.



    I just posted. Deal with it.

    iheartyou919

    11:07pm Feb 13 2010

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    "I have no idea, Jess. But I don't plan to stay long. I've been in the slammer before, but nut'n like this." He screamed. He was slowly killing himself, disrupting his internal organs, pouncing against the impenetrable brick wall of the cell.



    Love is unconquerable. For love needs not the pleasure of outward beauty, as it takes great pride in the inward. Love needs not the cushion of luxury and riches, for lovers tend to grow closer in strife. Love needs not fame, for those true to love will not host greed.
    EasilyBroken

    11:07pm Feb 13 2010

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    "I really don't know why I'm in here either," came a voice from a dark corner," I know I'm not drunk because I have never had a drink in my life."




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    iheartyou919

    11:08pm Feb 13 2010

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    "I know I should. But... I didn't do nothing! Why am I here?"




    Love is unconquerable. For love needs not the pleasure of outward beauty, as it takes great pride in the inward. Love needs not the cushion of luxury and riches, for lovers tend to grow closer in strife. Love needs not fame, for those true to love will not host greed.
    Spear

    11:09pm Feb 13 2010

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    (( -fail late post- x__X gah ))



    I just posted. Deal with it.

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