Ok do i drew this. No reference used apart from the arm because i had no idea where to put it XD

Yeah this is probably my first decent attempt at something remotely human. So i wanted to check how my anatomy was? And any tips?

I don't mind constructive criticism but please don't be rude. Thank you. 

Lemme see if I can do this without sounding like a complete idiot. lD /lectures better than she can draw/

Okay, so her butt seems to sag a bit. :/ I dunno if Ferni can see that, but it's a bit...hang-y?

And her chest is a bit odd. xD Other than that, it's pretty.

And I can't even lecture omg. T^T 

hrm

well

i really dont like anthro spaggle things

mostly because of THIS RIGHT HERE

ANATOMY

how does it apply to these things FFF

i think you should use human anatomy in everything but the head and legs. basic. the arms are a bit too long and the hips are off. also, the chest. you should either move the shoulder forward or straighten her back and pop her chest. her rib cage is a little too wide too, so just look at human anatomy to fix that up. 

her hips are a little low and it looks they they are shaped like a frownie face.

see how it sort of fanns out at the top?

female hips are wider then male hips, so there is more of a curve at the waist.

the top half of her body is sort of leaning forward. the rib cage is more flat in the front and back, not rounded. you should also look at female anatomy, especially for the chest area. the breasts should not be so close together when the shoulder is way back there. they sort of start from the collar bone too.

foo recommended me these books that really helped me.

figure drawing for all its worth and creative illistration by andrew loomis. you can go to filestube.com and download the PDF. Very, VERY useful books. and read about the color theory, just because.

you should also study wrinkles in clothing. c:

 http://alexhays.com/loomis/

theres some of his books that are worth looking into. hope you have fun drawing! ;D 

I tried red-lining it, but I think you are pretty good at it already. 

One thing I'd suggest is that even if her arms are behind her back, her farther shoulder should be a bit visible.

Also, your folds are good, but you can improve them by drawing the body & putting on the clothes & adding folds at the joints, etc. It takes a bit of studying to get the folds right, so look at what your wearing, etc, and pratice. :}

I made her waist thinner, but you don't have to do that; that's just my drawing style XD