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RodeoRyder

1:12am Dec 4 2009 (last edited on 9:06pm Dec 4 2009)

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Okay, so, I've been wanting to create a graphic novel for some time now, but didnt know where to start. I tried to make my book into one, but that was uber phail; I kept changing the story line.

And I cant draw people very well when drawing small.

Then it hit me; Wolves! I can draw wolves pretty well, and it would help me learn to draw them better! Brilliant!!

The outcome was 'Bridge Between'. It's still a mystery to me, as I wrote and drew the first page within 5 minutes. I think it's good, and am willing to continue, but only if other people are interested.

Bridge Between, Page 1 (Rough draft)

http://art-bandgeek.deviantart.com/art/Bridge-Between-P-1-WIP-145654780

Further deion is on that page. Post here what you think!

 

Other pages

Page 2:
http://art-bandgeek.deviantart.com/art/Bridge-Between-P-2-WIP-145734584




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dreamersfantasy

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Ooo, I like it so far, if you keep writing I'll keep reading ^^



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RodeoRyder

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Thanks! Judging by how many people think I should continue. ^^



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DumBlinDeaf

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I think I got Todeo in trouble on here...
Danke

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Aw... that's so sad... ;_;

So... a wolf just killed his best bud? Not sure where you are planning to take it but it seems interesting enough. I'd like to see how Lakai handles all that.

Juuuust one thing though: the stalagtite on the very first panel doesn't look very... stalagtitish. I'd change it to be a straight triangle like the rest lest you get any lewd comments on its shape.




dreamersfantasy

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*Sits and waits for page three*



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Epona

12:52am Dec 9 2009 (last edited on 12:54am Dec 9 2009)

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Page three: http://art-bandgeek.deviantart.com/art/Bridge-Between-P-3-WIP-145838366

Danke Danke. LOL. I'll work on that. ^^

EDTI: Oh, and LaKai did not kill Kylan. Kylan pushed LaKai out of the way of the sharp pointy rocky that LaKais unnessicary laments caused to fall, striking and killing Kylan...hence the ure bit at the bottom of the page.




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Danke

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Ooh... humanizing now? This is getting interesting. The humorous way you portrayed the god-wolf is great, from the dialogue to the very un-dignified licking at the beginning. =p

 I understood that Kylan sacrificed herself for her friend. I just shortened it down to 'LaKai killed his (?) bud'  since it WAS LaKai's howls that caused the whole situation; if there were no howls or unauthorized cave entry there wouldn't have needed to be a sacrifice.




Epona

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Yes humanizing...although Kylan will rarely appear such if I can help it. She kills me. -_-

LOL. Yup. My brother loves T'Kana.

Oooooh. I git'cha. Yeah. LaKai is Kylans adoptive 'sister'. I dont think she'll appear very often though.

 

Sorry, page 4 is takin forever; my hands aint likin the cold weather we've been gettin here.




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sasora

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Ooooh I say /vote Keep writing :DDD



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Epona

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Takk Sas!



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dreamersfantasy

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I say keep writing too ^^



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Epona

7:53pm Dec 15 2009 (last edited on 7:54pm Dec 15 2009)

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Page four. ^^

http://art-bandgeek.deviantart.com/art/Bridge-Between-P-g-4-WIP-146896559

Deion thing, as always, is at the bottom of the page.




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Epona

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Bump



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Nouveau

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I've been stalking this.  xD  I love it so far, but I need more!  ^^  Keep up the good work!






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Epona

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Takk Lola. :3

I've been workin on page 5, but the weather is not my friend, and my hands are always cold to begin with. *sigh* I need a warm tea bag and cut off gloves. XD

I'll post what I have of page 5 later...just for the hay of it. XD




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Epona

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My life sucks. Im hungry and the dog just used page 5 as a bathroom. *head desk*



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