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Puddles

4:31am Aug 18 2011 (last edited on 4:49am Aug 18 2011)

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Yeah...
 
I just want some comments on my art so that I can improve more.
 Here is my dA account 
 
 This is all digital stuff
 
 (Easy Paintool Sai)
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/Dollthing.png 
 
 
 http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/babbypb.png
 
Lineless stuff
 
 
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/pannacottta.png 
 
 
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/gurlllllllll.png  
 
Experiment with textures
(Textures used were all origami paper) 
 
 http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/playingtexture-1.png
 
 Traditional
 
(Indian inks and colour pencils) 
This was the first version of the doll princess (first picture)
painted on a box, but I don't have the boxes anymore since they were donated away
Other sides of the box: 
  1.  http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/DSC03685.jpg
  2.  http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/DSC03686.jpg
  3.  http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg100/HappyVeggies/DSC03687.jpg
I don't really like the 4th side
My pencil sketches are messed up and stuff so I don't really think I should put them up 
 
As you can see from what I have going on here I like to draw girls, cute stuff and I'm not very creative with backgrounds so I just want some ideas to help me improve
 
 If you could help then that would be magical
 



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hj42

10:34am Aug 20 2011

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;A; your art is so damn cyute

your designes and style are so creative looking ;u;

one thing i think you should work on for more detaled drawings/paintings is your light source

not that its bad

your chihiro piece is awesome

but your more recent one could use more shading detail

its still adorable ;o; but if the light source is coming from the top of her head you might want to shade areas that the light may not catch, like parts of her outfit or her knees or something

theres not much more i can tell you lol ;o

im having problems with my art lately ;c so i can just give you advice given to me that has helped

like references and figure drawing

andover349874386743760pagesofsketches

also that gif

that gif inspired me to write this

that mustache

 

Puddles

11:44pm Aug 20 2011 (last edited on 11:47pm Aug 20 2011)

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Thank you!

I have been having troubles with shading since I'm always not sure about the light source ^_^' since I always like to colour with just flats which means I haven't been practicing that much.

I have also been trying to practice more dynamic poses  and expressions as well to give my art more 'pazaz' so I've been sketching on paper more often (and when I sketch trust me it's not pretty) and I've been experimenting with poses so I am wondering what advice can you give me when practicing it? 

And that gif is magical enough give inspiration to everyone xD




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