Please critique this charater


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Spikett

3:47pm Mar 18 2011

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You see a man the age of 38. He is carrying a cane with him but that isn't really a cane. Its a weapon called a sword cane. He has olive colored skin long black curly hair hazel eyes and a hook shaped nose. He is the musician of the ship. This man's name is Faolin Jagar but everyone the crew calls him Brook. Brook is the type of guy gentlemanly, likea to joke around, play his musical instruments and isn't very vicous at all.

 

I'm afraid that he will become the laughing stock of pirates. I wanted to ask people what they that of his perosanily first. I know there's not much of perosnality there.
Spikett

8:34pm Mar 18 2011

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So what do you think?
Yoshi

3:59pm Mar 22 2011

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I like him. He sounds kinda different - almost off, but in a good way. That he doesn't sound particularly handsome or amazing is what makes him interesting. I love characters like that, hah. They usually seem more genuine than their more.. spectacular counterparts.

I wouldn't even say possibly turning into a laughing stock is a bad thing. xD Almost all the characters I make anymore have at least a little something ridiculous about them or their personalities, so they can act as comic relief.




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