It lacks...shape.
Everything is long and pointy and sharp. It needs more curves o:

I'd say about the same thing. :)
But me and iRin do full body sketches+colour for 100k.
But yeah, I'd say about 75-100k.

LOL I hope i did a better job on this one...

EDIT: i know the head is a little to big and the leg and looks a bit funny >.>

..this one i'd say the head is bit too small compared to the other body o3o'

but who knows,i may not be pro at thise things (;

around 100k i'd say? ~ 

EDIT: pretty sure it's a man? Sorry if I mess it up D:

I like the second one much better, but I think you are trying to draw "freehand"? (not using basic shapes and drawing the body and pose first). It's always useful to draw the circles, etc, and the pose before putting on the clothes and folds. 

 I tried red(and blue)-lining it, but my redlines aren't perfect, there's flaws in it.. but I hope it helps though! Red = basic shapes; blue = folds

 * the head should be an egg shape, and the eyebrows should be a bit closer to the eyes. If you are trying to draw in an anime style, it is a bit better, but your porportions are off still. The face is too thin for a man's face.

*  the clothing doesn't "stick" on the skin; there's more folds in it than that. (blue lines). The best way to draw clothes is to draw the person first in their pose, and add clothes on afterwards. Pay attention to the joints; I usually draw more folds there. I'm not sure if that's right or not though; I'm still learning haha.

I think you have to draw it wider. ;D

 Btw, if you're learning anatomy, it's best to start with frames (as I like to call them); aka just the basics of the person, no clothes, eyes or anything like that. :DD

Try really random poses to get used to anatomy stuffies ^^

Anatomy. The best way to learn is to look at real people and draw them. This is really the only way.

Firstly, that red line... I really wouldn't recommend learning from someone else's mistakes. No offense to Faction.

A better way to figure out how a body looks and how folds fall on forms is to use a reference. For example next time, find a photograph of someone sitting to use as a reference. Not to copy, but to reference. It's okay to look at photographs to figure out a pose and how folds work. Learning how to draw an anatomical correct person is a long and hard battle, but if you're dedicated you will accomplish much.

I would also recommend you start gesture drawing to loosen up and stop drawing stiff. You want to represent forms in a 3d manner, but right now they're flat. Gesture drawing will help you very much with this. I've realized that many don't know what a gesture is. A gesture is a very quick drawing (1min or 30secs depending) where you capture just the essence of a pose using line and shapes. I do them all the time to warm up.

Here's a nifty little reference sheet for the basic proportions of a human being.

And here are some examples of gesture drawing.

 LOL this is how i view myself...>.>

For Grayvs! Spidur.

The hand on the first one is over-sized, and the neck and arms are too long.

The second one; The belt is awkward, sticking out in that direction. The head is a tiny mit to small, and the arms and neck are too long.

Are you looking at the anatomy refrences we're going you? -n-