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Shadly

10:05pm Apr 8 2011 (last edited on 10:51pm Apr 8 2011)

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I did this sketch, and id like suggestions/tips before I lineart it

Id also like a color scheme perhaps

Should i open commisions?

http://gorge1225.deviantart.com/art/Sketch-204138954

I dont draw much i know :)

Edit:

Lineart :3

http://gorge1225.deviantart.com/art/Lines-204139462

Id still like tips before I color. Maybe pattersn to :3

I put a couple of colors I thought would look nice

http://gorge1225.deviantart.com/art/Lines-204139462

Heres a blue color scheme

http://gorge1225.deviantart.com/art/Blue-204143712
DecemberMoon

10:10pm Apr 8 2011

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Hm, not being really great at art, the only thing I noticed was that perhaps you could make the hindquarters a little more solid, they seem kind of skimpy. Other than that, it seems to be a nice start and should look quite good with some color on it. 


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Shadly

10:11pm Apr 8 2011

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Thanks :D Ill work on that :3
iheartyou919

11:52pm Apr 8 2011

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I like that. I'd add more detail and especially texture, of course. A good color scheme may include a greyish-blue theme. I also recommend using models as much as possible. :D


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DecemberMoon

8:03am Apr 9 2011

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I, uh, I feel kind of like I'm being critical now, since this is now my second post, but this didn't show up until you finished the lineart more. I think the eyes are a tad bit off (of course, it's hypocritical of me to say this since drawing eyes when the face is at an angle like that is hard for me and takes a while for me to get right). Its right eye could be down a little farther and closer to the nose, I think. The blue/cream/orange color scheme looks quite spiffy on it, though.


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Shadly

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@iheart: yeah i would too that is a preview of the color scheme with some shading thrown on XD

December: Aww no tis okay, i asked for it right? And thanks, and ill work on the eye thing maybe google some reference pics :3



iheartyou919

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Oh gotcha. <3

I really like the colors. Blue and orange, being complementary colors, tend to bring each other out.

The nose is ever so slightly lopsided, and the hair looks a bit stylized, unless that was what you were going for. The haunches are a tad scawny. Also, may I suggest editing the stripes to be slightly more detailed?

Also, what art programs do you use? Gimp or MS Paint, perhaps?



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Shadly

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I use Sai C:
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