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pumpuli	1:08pm Feb 4 2009 (last edited on 4:05am Feb 8 2009)
Normal User Posts: 3	Uff. Constructive criticism is welcomed (but not necessary^^) Here, have some of my oekaki boredom killers from both 08 and 09~ :� � I hope these won't break the layout or there's not too many of them.. :S (some of these have pumpulipiraatti (or another name I've used in different oekakis) signed in them, it was my previous dA-account before I changed it to pichipon). Whaddle whaddle whoo. So, particularly, I'd like to know what areas (coloring, anatomy, etc) should I practise some more? Of course them all, but in what areas should I especially attach attention? Thank you for your help~ �
shadowrider	6:05pm Feb 6 2009
Normal User Posts: 2,440	those are really good! i know you have some but i say try more shadow and light area's. they add for great affect. Click please<3
�_Ranvier	11:44pm Feb 6 2009 (last edited on 11:31am Feb 7 2009)
Normal User Posts: 1,731	These are amazing. I'm not sure how much to critique. xD If you are ever open for commissions and are willing to take pay in tu, please be sure to tell me. I'll pay very well. EDIT: Actually, the only thing that caught my attention was the second dragon. (orange one.) It's legs look a little weird, probably anatomy wise, so maybe you could practice a bit there?�
shadowrider	8:08am Feb 7 2009
Normal User Posts: 2,440	also for the second dragon down id only recomend darkerlines ;D Click please<3
pumpuli	1:58pm Feb 7 2009 (last edited on 2:01pm Feb 7 2009)
Normal User Posts: 3	Thank you for pointing out that stuff, I'll try to work on the shading/light sources and anatomy ~ About the outline's color, maybe a little darker would go, but I don't usually like to use black lining in my pictures~ (And that picture is cropped, the larger version has its lines not so.. broken-like XD ) Here's couple more~ � Some of these (for example, the lolita girl) are really old, but felt like uploading >__<
shadowrider	2:38pm Feb 7 2009 (last edited on 5:23pm Feb 12 2009)
Normal User Posts: 2,440	((edited so no page stretching)) Click please<3
pumpuli	3:07am Feb 8 2009
Normal User Posts: 3	Shadowrider, that's adorable :D Although the image itself is kinda obscure (I'm not sure is that the right word to describe it's darkness XD) since it's taken by a camera, but I like it~ �� Do you sketch their basic shapes (with circles etc) before lining and detailing? It's a good way to practise anatomy n____n�
shadowrider	12:03pm Feb 8 2009
Normal User Posts: 2,440	no. idk. i was tought to skip that step at a terrible elementary school D: yeah i dun have a scanner ((i almost put scammer...X3)) Click please<3
prinxess	2:42pm Feb 12 2009
Normal User Posts: 319	SOme are a bit blury, but they are fantasic Status: Studying the blade

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