So anyway... I want some constructive criticism


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username

12:52pm Jul 7 2009

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i decided to try something new this morning and i need some advice on how to better my techniques. i know its not the best in the world and the background is kinda weird. and since i scanned it the colors aren't showing up right... but anyway please tell me what you think.

 

07-07-2009013819PM.jpg Pegasus picture by UserHana

1ran

1:09pm Jul 7 2009

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I think it looks cool. There is something about the chest that is bugging me... I'm not sure what though. I hope that helps? lol



username

3:09pm Jul 7 2009

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i agree. its kinda fat. lol its a little bit too... flat? i wish the lines and shading showed up. but thanks to my scanner's lameness...
GangstaGriff

3:19pm Jul 7 2009

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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

Fizzeh

3:48pm Jul 7 2009

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Head is a bit too small for the body, the wings seem to be sprouting out of it's neck, too. Tail shouldn't stick up that way, other than those things looks pretty good. ^_^
username

3:51pm Jul 7 2009

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k that makes sense... the wings are too high. i drew them first so that made the head weird too. thanks^^
Ping

8:12pm Jul 7 2009

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The anatomy is all wrong. The head's too small, wings don't look right, the legs haven't got the right sort of thing going on and the tail is weird. How to improve, study photos of horses, read books about horse anatomy (these books can be for medical or artistic reference) and practice using this knowledge alot, it'll get stuck in your head.

Your rendering skills seem a bit weak. Not really much I can tell you to fix that other than practice, experiment and develop your style. Attend as many art workshops as possible, you can learn new things.

It's not exactly the best thing in the world, but y'know, we all gotta start somewhere. I'd love to see your work as you improve.




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username

9:51pm Jul 7 2009

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i agree... its been months since i've worked at drawing a horse. i have the books and all. i just really need the practice. and since its summer maybe i'll get around to it. the neck really buggs me too. definately not my best...
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