Lol it's okay. Nice of you both to apologize ^^

I didn't think anyone noticed my art

A WIP I started today :) Please critique?

Ha! I gotta say it : Lumpy Butt.  But seriously the art is fantastic, That is one magnificent Liyure, what is his/name? I can't belive you drew it ON the computer. amazing.

fantastic.

I finished redlining it :)

Your liyure's anatomy was generally good, the only areas which was problematic were the legs. And the liyure's butt hangs out too far xD

However the woman... the woman... the woman... D8

There were a number of mistakes. I'm not too good at drawing humans but I sort of know the anatomy. Everything but the head was too long. The arms, the legs, the body, the neck the body. All the dimensions of the body should be based off the head. As you can see, I do not know how to draw feet or boobs.

Also, her pose is kinda akward. Sitting split legged on a liyure? Looks kinda of weird. You can see that in the red-line I drew her in side saddle (I was too lazy to draw her dress in, so yeah, she's naked on the liyure.... Don't imagine that... I judt did and it's kinda disturbing xD).

But don't trust me entirely on my critique, I could be completely wrong xD

...and also I can't draw people...

Finished my Unicorn! ^0^

I'd say Ping's Human critique is pretty good. xD Although on the redline, her elbows should go a little farther down; I usually go with the rule of elbows and bellybutton being level, and those just barely miss that mark.

For Miss Whitler there, I'd mostly just suggest moving her hips up a bit. Torso's too long. And the jacket's bothering me a little, because it looks like the right side is defying gravity. xD

Yes I understand what you mean ^^ the jacket wasn't included in the first sketch so I just kinda lined it in quickly when I was inking it.

That elbow/bellybutton thing would really help me in the future. I have a thing for drawing long people, I don't know why D:

Thank you for your help ^^

Tryst is this all your art??

Preview: Rough Sketch of Shanxi