What do you think of this as an adoptable thread? critiques please!!


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wolfbitez

6:16pm Apr 24 2014 (last edited on 5:04am Apr 25 2014)

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Deep in the Scryent Forest, egg-like capsules called pods can be found. Each pod can hatch into different creatures when played the songs sold below. Other words can be added to the song for clothes. The pods are free, but you can't hatch one if you don't buy a song. 
On holidays I will sell special songs, for example; christmas carols. Maybe you will even be able to get one of the limited edition songs, which are only sold once.

Haunting Incantation-300k
hatches a Plague creature

Techno Music-300k
hatches a Technology creature

Classical Music-300k
hatches a Nature creature

Custom Music-500k
choose your own theme


Clothes-50k for one with solid colors, 60k for patterned
bandages
beret
cap
cape
mask
collar
scarf
arm warmers
leg warmers
hair extension
spike collar

Effects-each 200k
paint splatter
all stitched up

Shelter
if you don't like your creature, you can put him/her in the shelter for other people to buy for 200k



FORM
what song:
clothes (if any) and their colors:
effects (if any):
name of creature (you can name it after):



Tell me everything that is wrong with this, and any suggestions you might have please!!






wolfbitez

5:08am Apr 25 2014

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Do you think these should be canines with a few mutations and extra things depending on the theme? Or a whole new species of creature?



spirit1212

4:31am Jul 17 2014

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I think you should make it whatever you feel comfortable with and give it a little personal flair depending on the song played and the clothes and such given. But only if your comfortable with doing so.



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