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1:33pm Feb 15 2010
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And, you want to know what has happened? See how my fist post just says hi? Well, that's because my mom read my story, because I was telling her what Yellow wrote, and now she says I'm not allowed to write anymore. Thanks. So, now I can't write for fun on this. I can't write at all. Please keep your snappy and rude comments to yourself please.
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1:44pm Feb 15 2010
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CAN be,but i doubt they always are.Most probably he only does that to show the intensity of whats going on... or the lack of it...or something. Well, i'll prolly never read a book written by him anyway. Latvia doesnt like popular writers... except for like Meyer and Rowling /fail (and i never said patterson's an idiot. i just trust ten famous-er writers judgement more) Im sorry,but ,do you know what the sole purpose of a forum is? To communicate. You put stuff up here for discussion, like it or not. People like that really annoy me. All they wanna hear is praise. Lifes not a playground or a chocolate desert. Plus, i was only trying to help,i wasn't attacking you(even though you pretty much flared up and spew mad cannibal rabbits at me)
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1:47pm Feb 15 2010
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Snappy?Mean? Oh God. Y'know what,im not even gonna edit what i just wrote. Youre ridiculous. Thank you for this rage |
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2:16pm Feb 15 2010 (last edited on 2:18pm Feb 15 2010)
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excuse me, but i just googled how long a chapter has to be, and they say it can anywhere from a paragraph or 2 to sixty pages. So it can vary. All that matters is that an idea is put down and set straight. So see, no one here is right at all. Everyone's writing is different. Me, I like to make my chapters 7,000 words each (12 pages), and sometimes that can be a bad thing. But you know what, its what I want. i dont give one single care about what other people think because all that matters is that you're giving your best effort into it. It's the writing that matters, not the number of pages or words you put in. This is not going against or siding with anyone. I am just stating the truth And seriously, critizing James Patterson, yeah, real mature. What did he do wrong? Become an excellent writer? Have a talent? Someone, quick, call the police! |
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2:56pm Feb 15 2010 (last edited on 3:01pm Feb 15 2010)
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nevermind. have your pile of crumbles. i'd much better keep my nerves and get some sleep |
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4:54pm Feb 15 2010
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life isn't always a playground or a chocolate desert, flash |
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5:02pm Feb 15 2010 (last edited on 5:07pm Feb 15 2010)
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cool story,bro repeating what i said and throwing it into my face after the battle(which has like,nothing to do with you),real mature. |
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5:17pm Feb 15 2010
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Thalia is my cousin, and I intend to stand by her, no matter how many fights she gets herself in. BTW, IT WAS A JOKE. Apparently, you couldn't recognize one when it's dancing naked in front of you flailing Dobby's tea cozy! (another joke) And yes, I am mature. I realised before you that we are arguing over a STORY.
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5:28pm Feb 15 2010 (last edited on 5:29pm Feb 15 2010)
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The blood in your veins an a few similar strands of hair dont make you a part of this. BTW i knew that. So was the first line in my post. Nobody's laughing though. Aint that sad oh and BTW, if you havent noticed, humor,sarcasm and all that crap is harder to spot in text-form. Unless you'd use a gazillion smileys or something. Also,i never asked you if youre mature or not. Now stop picking a fight,sheesh if you want to show-off your intellect while raping a dead horse,be my guest, but please do it somewhere else.
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5:34pm Feb 15 2010
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no need to get messy. I think both of us should just drop it. Also, I think that you should watch the language. If I was like nine, I'd be petrified. Like I said, we are talking about a story. Do we really need to be savages?
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5:34pm Feb 15 2010
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no need to get messy. I think both of us should just drop it. Also, I think that you should watch the language. If I was like nine, I'd be petrified. Like I said, we are talking about a story. Do we really need to be savages?
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5:35pm Feb 15 2010
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oopsies. double post.
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5:36pm Feb 15 2010
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you know, theyyellowflash, have you ever heard of the word exit? here, i'll put it into syllabols so you can read it EX-IT. It means leaving. And that, my friend, is exactly what you need to do
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5:38pm Feb 15 2010
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And by the way, I am Mythalians best friend and thaiflames friend, too. So i have every right to stand up for my friends
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8:00am Feb 16 2010 (last edited on 8:53am Feb 16 2010)
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12:43pm Feb 21 2010
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Oh! A no show comment... As Yellow said before; "Real mature." Please Yellow. Comment on my story or leave. This is not a trial in court.
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1:09pm Feb 21 2010
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Oy! You'll have to pardon me for butting into this, but I'll only post this, and then I'll leave. I'm a bit tited of seeing a fight going on in the writing forums, so. Thalia, if you didn't want criticism, you should have posted so. This whole mess could have been avioded simply by typing that. But--this is my opinion, and you are entitled to yours--I do agree that chapters should be fleshed out a bit more. They help paint out the picture more, and describe the characters. It's your choice if you want to keep them short. I suggest that you, however, try to be a little bit more thick-skinned. There are always going to be people who oppose to your work and such. If you get upset over every little comment, you'll never be able to grow as a writer (I must point out that I've learned thsi the hard way). So, try to be tough, and jsut carry on with your story if you wish to continue it. Just ignore the negative comments unless they give constructive criticism, which some of these have. Well, that is my two cent's worth. .-. Hmph. *poofs* ;o
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1:37pm Feb 21 2010
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Thanks! Sorry, I will post that next time. I just think people can be so rude and immature sometimes. Whatever! Have a nice day people!!
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3:14pm Feb 21 2010
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well said, lolalover6, very well said :)
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3:35pm Feb 21 2010
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I agree. VERY well said. I couldn't have said it better myself. :-)
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