This is a story that I am writing. I have no credit for Markus. He belongs completely to Dragonstar. Please tell me what you think ^^.
Chapter 1:
Hush my little Angel, don't cry. Trouble is on its way to find you, dear precious. Stay awake, keep your eyes open. Monster's are coming. Run. Hide. The witching hour is close at hand.
Near twelve at night, Angel was walking around outside without her parents with her. She looked around, taking in all the sights she could see. The world was huge from a five-year-old's point of view. When she came across things she hadn't seen before, her bright green eyes widened until they looked like owl-eyes.
"Did you see h-"
"What is she doing out th-"
"Where's her mother?"
"Little girl! Come here girlie!"
Stopping, Angel turned around and spotted three men following her. Not know who they were, she took one scared step back before bursting into a run.
Picking up her speed, she ran a slight bit faster and her little legs carried her as fast as they could. Glancing behind her, she saw the three men still follow her. Coming up to an alley entrance, she quicjky scooted into it, hoping to catch them by surprise.
"Hey there she goes!" The man pointed towards Angel's disappearing form.
Feeling tears run down her cheeks, she forced herself to keep going no matter how tired she was getting. Angel heared their laughter, their running footsteps. Panting, she realized she was running out of steam.
As she turned another corner, she winced slightly as her ribs hurt from her breathing too hard. But as she rounded it, she tripped on her foot and fell down at the feet of another person. Looking up slowly, she saw a teenager leaning against a wall tapping one foot along with some unknown music.
His hair was the colour of snow. As he noticed her, his head moved in her direction and she saw glowing crimson eyes. Not knowing it, Angel had just met her first vampire.
(( This part was written by Dragonstar...who is helping with the story ))
The man pushed himself off the wall and knelt down so he didn't look so big. He held out a hand with his white palm facing upwards. "Do you need some help getting up?" he asked with a voice that sounded like soft rain. Angel nodded with a small, sad frown on her face as a tear rolled down her cheek. She placed one of her small hands on his larger white one. Smiling softly, he closed his finger gently around Angel's hand and stood up, pulling her up to her feet.
Then the three men that were chasing her rounded the corner. Angel quickly hide behind the tall-white-haired-man's legs.
"Hey, there is that girly behind the albino," one man cawed. He sounded like a crow.
The vampire raised one eyebrow and glanced at Angel; "Do you know these men?" Angel shook her head and hid her eyes by placing them close to his black jeans. The vampire said to the three men; "I'm sorry, but she doesn't really know you."
Another man laughed like a hyena. "We don't care," he laughed again.
The vampire tilted his head to one side. "Please leave," he said in a completely different tone. It sounded forceful and demanding. The three men laughed and Angel hugged one of the vampire's legs. Narrowing his eyes, a sudden wind picked up from in front of the vampire; heading towards the three men.
As it buffeded them, it picked up speed and strenght. As the men fought to stand upright, the moved backwards before fleeeing the way they came. The wind died down and the vampire gently released Angel from his leg.
Thats the first chapter. If you want the second one, post your ideas and give me some feedback. I'll be rewriting the chapter to make it longer when I finish the story. My chapters are just short right now ... Thank you and enjoy... ^^ Look for updates.