Im trying to write something off the top of my head, (im bored, what else im I spose to do:P) can you give me some criticism if I make a mistake? (just asking. lol XD )

 

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    ... The ground started to shake. Everything that was once whole was broken. Screams filled the air. people ran into the streets, houses collapsed, people were crushed by the debris.

    It seemed that everything that could go wrong did, in one endless moment. 

 

Thats what I got so far.