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Honeybee	6:28pm Oct 7 2010 (last edited on 6:30pm Oct 7 2010)
Normal User Posts: 1,191	This is a webnovel. WARNING: If you dislike anything gay, ~~perish in agony~~ kindly click the "Back" button. ^o^ Please do not go hating. It's quite unbecoming. Thank you. my name's russ and i only care about uldavi and cute men
Honeybee	6:36pm Oct 7 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,191	Prologue _____ This isn't you, it's me. ____ Why, she sobs into my t-shirt. But I don't know the answer, so I keep my thoughts to myself. Circumstances ____ Emily, please, I beg, but her sobbing continues. I never imagined a more gory break-up. But then I never could have imagined the circumstances. My Voice Cracks First _____ My resolve cracks next. Emily, please, I whisper. I was splitting in half. Fragmenting. You don't understand. And of course she doesn't. Accusations ____ You're cheating on me, aren't you? Emily is hysterical. She's clinging to threads that don't exist, long snipped by the Fates. Emily, I would never cheat on you. I'm sorry, but we're through. my name's russ and i only care about uldavi and cute men
chance437	8:00pm Oct 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 15,067	O.O More plzkthnxbai.
Honeybee	8:07pm Oct 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 1,191	Chapter 1 _____ Silence can speak volumes. Saying all that words can't and never could. But, only when used exactly right. Questions _____ Ever since I'd dumped Emily, I'd Been asking Myself questions. But I don't know the answer to the question: Am I gay? I don't know _____ That's the real answer. But I constantly try to fool Myself that it isn't, That it's spring. But spring Long pcensoreded into summer, and After that, autumn. The hummingbirds Have long vanished with the Southern winds, leaving me without Any idea of who I Am. Bakersfield _____ Is not the prettiest place. There are few, if any "Good" places, and those are Candy-coated in false senses Of self-security. And even though The city resides in California, you don't want to get into a Homosexual vibe, if you know What I mean. Desert Whispers _____ The desert whispers Whispers, whispers to me caressing me within its bitter air Comforting with the promise of something more, tangible. The desert cradles me, Whispering, always Whispering. Thanks for reading. This is all I will be posting here, seeing as it gets much 'darker'. Rmail me for more and I'll give you a link. my name's russ and i only care about uldavi and cute men
DecemberMoon	8:09pm Oct 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 255	This is quite good. Love stories of any sort aren't my usual genre (I like fluffy adventure stories better) but this is very well written. The format is different and captures interest easily. You should certainly write more. \r\n
Funlover6	8:41pm Oct 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 6,590	Oh my, Russ ^^ It is truly amazing. Very well written. Very interresting and I am officially hooked on reading. Hope you can write more, because I will definatly be back :D Is Funneh online?: why NO be back tonight
Riyo	8:43pm Oct 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 369	I really like these, Russ, though it reads more like poetry than like a novel. It's really good. "You must always remember that the only thing necessary for evil to triumph is for good people to do nothing." - Alucard, Castlevania: Symphony of the Night.
paigecam	8:59pm Oct 11 2010
Normal User Posts: 10,925	Omg, this is so pretty Russwart. Moar. Paige wants moar. *We fell through the ice when we tried not to slip.*
innagong	5:20pm Oct 13 2010
Normal User Posts: 4,914	-hatesongaythingsandbeshomosexual- Pffft Jk. \|D OMG ILRUSS <3333333 Flashbacks, warm nights, Almost left behind. Suitcases of memories, Time after time. ლ(╹◡╹ლ)

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