Chapter One: A New World

I ran down the corridors in my house, getting all my stuff ready. "Akila!"Ron called. "Coming Ron!"I told him. It was my sixth year at Hogwarts. My brother, Ron, looked around for me. "Akila!"He said. I looked back at him. 'Yes Ron?"I asked. "Mum was wondering if you were taking Iliadii."He said. I nodded. Iliadii was my patronious. Omashu's my cat. My sweet cat. Speaking of her, she ran past my legs. "Omashu."I muttered. Omashu stopped fastly. "Are you ready to go?"I asked. 'Meow."She said, meaning yes. I nodded and picked her up. "Let's go."I said. We got in the car and drove to the train station. We said goodbye to our mum and went to the wall that we walk through. I walked in and smiled. I got tackled by my friends, including..... Draco Malfoy.

I have more for this chapter. Please criticize me.