A Fate Worse Than Death


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SparkleCutsey

4:55am Sep 18 2016 (last edited on 4:56am Oct 18 2016)

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this story was awful sorry its closed


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fyrekit

5:12am Sep 18 2016

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There are a few grammatical errors and the wording is a bit......clunky in places, but it's a good beginning.
SparkleCutsey

5:13am Sep 18 2016

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Yeah i know its awuful 


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SilverThorn

5:15am Sep 18 2016

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I like it, it's a really good beginning and i would like to hear more, but maybe go over and check it too? otherwise, its lovely
Snow

5:17am Sep 18 2016

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It's a nice start! Is the character based upon yourself?


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SparkleCutsey

6:02am Sep 18 2016

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Ok... i guess Im gonna go on.. if u dont like it tell me, ok? No, she isnt :)


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