I'm not the world's best poet. Or even a good poet by any stretch. But I enjoy writing poetry. ^_^ So here's some of my more recent ones. One, called "Red Ribbon", is a rewrite of one I have already written before. Enjoy, comment, critique, whatever. It's all appreciated. 

A Grey Morning

The ends of my jeans

Rolled up

Rain gets on my gl*censored*es

I look at the world

Grey clouds casting grey shadows

Over everything

Making it all darker

Except me and my

Bright red raincoat

And that thought makes me

Smile

Random, yes. But fun to write all the same. The next one has rhyme and rhythm, and being a musical person, I like the rhyme and rhythm much more than the wordplay. xD

Red Ribbon

Red, red ribbon is my ultimate desire

The red, red colour, the coals in the fire

The crimson water, the fresh, fresh blood

This colour is my one true love

Red, red ribbon, ties that bind

Closing all innocent thoughts from my mind

Red ribbon is my freedom, yet my chains

To red, red ribbon my heart is enslaved

Red, red ribbon, better than sapphire sky

Red, red ribbon tastes like rich, red wine

Red, red ribbon better than white, white lace

The crimson colour does stain white's face

Red, red ribbon, my hands you stain

Red, red ribbon, I can’t refrain

Though my white, white heart you take

A red, red heart instead you make

Red, red ribbon I can't escape your chains

Even if try, I'll always fail again

The crimson water, the fresh, fresh blood

This one colour, my one true love 

I'll post more here as I write them. Hope you like 'em. <3 

hmm.. I'm guessing you like red? or writing about it at least...

I also prefer Red Ribbon, but I really like A grey morning as well.

Nicely written :) Keep it up

SerenityMist xx