A life of pain


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nononolick

9:05am Jul 28 2009

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Intro: I didnt know I was going to end up like this,cold and lonely with chills running up my spine not being able to even feel my hands,crying.

Chapter one:

"First day of school means a new chance to be killed.I am much shorter than the other kids and more mature also,and very much more intelligent than them.The other children didnt comprehend why i woud enjoy staying home and writing,or possibly reading instead of going out and playind pranks on random, innocent people.(Jerks)"      I whispered then quickly wrote down in my journal.

     The bus for school was early,and i missed it.I was going to be late anyway and, I mean its the first day of school what hartm can being late do?The answer was:ALOT!When I walked in my cl*censored*room sweating like a dog,pating,and trying to not p*censored* out I realized that I was almost 20 minutes late, oh and did I meantion that I got lunch detention for two weeks......School stinks!




Why the cloud, Sunny?
girlsmackback11

3:47pm Jul 29 2009

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That's really a really good story. Although for further notice, after puncuation you put a space before you start a new word. Instead if "The bus for school was early,and I missed it.I-" It should be "The bus for school was early, and I missed it. I-". ^^;




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nononolick

2:18pm Jul 30 2009

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This story isnt the good one




Why the cloud, Sunny?
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