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2:27pm Jul 12 2010 (last edited on 10:46pm Jul 18 2010)
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You can’t hide it, when you know all hope is gone. When every single tear means nothing at all.When you tell people you are okay, when pain is building up inside of you everyday.And love is as useless as life.Understand me now child, your life will not be easy.Never---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I stared at the yellow paper in my hands. I dropped it on the floor, then
grabbed my stained canvas bag. “Vincent!” I yelled to my companion,
a boy who was 14 years old.Only a year younger than I was.
I heard him shuffle down the stairs then he looked at me, and continued walking.
“We need to go.” I said sternly “Now.” His face looked a bit angered,
but I knew what ever he was mad about would soon pas.s.
He walked out of the door, then I took a step back and picked up
the letter from whom I didn’t know.
I stuffed it in my pocket, then I followed Vincent out.
A gush of wind blew my hair back, which annoyed me, so I took out a rubber band and put my hair in a sloppy bun. My feet crunched loudly on the snow I walked on,
but Vincent was almost silent. “Remember, right, then left at the fork. You should see Jake there, and jut follow him.” I said loudly to Vincent, who nodded.
“Okay. I remember now.” He stepped onto the frozen river, and I listened for any cracking noises. He shifted his weight, and as soon as he did, I saw a crack form on the ice.
“Vincent, hurry!” I yelled at him as I attempted to run onto the ice.
It would be impossible for me to around the river, so this was the only option I had.
More cracks sprung up on the surface, and I slipped.
Luckily I didn’t fall through. I stumbled back up onto my feet... Vincent looked back at me. "Bethany!" He stumbled towards me, but I put my hand up, signaling him to stop. "No. You'll just fall through." I tarted sliding towards the edge, then climbed up onto the snow. Vincent helped me up, but I pushed him away once I was stable. "Come on." I walked into a forest, which was full of pine trees powdered with snow. I walked into a clearing, and saw Jake standing there, his back against a single tree. "Finally." He huffed, then walked towards Vincent. "Pipsqueak. Whats up?" He pushed Vincents shoulder gently, and Vincent punched his stomach harshly. "Touch me again, and you die. Old man. >:U" It was quite humorous, how they fought and Vincent usually won, and he would gloat for a few hours and forget about what had happend.
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Just something I thought of. I have no idea where it's going to lead, but I want to make it a short novel eventually.
Theyre somewhere in Greenland. I dunno. DX
Tell me all of my errors, please. :D
Why the cloud, Sunny?
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2:32pm Jul 12 2010 (last edited on 2:33pm Jul 12 2010)
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Ugh. It stretching da page. D:
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10:05pm Jul 12 2010
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Why the cloud, Sunny?
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10:17pm Jul 12 2010 (last edited on 10:18pm Jul 12 2010)
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I like it. I am actually starting to write a story too I story I started to write..., I have no idea where I'm going with it either, it is just something I dreamed of the night I stayed up all night eating oreos and watching t.v. . . . yea. . .
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10:22pm Jul 12 2010
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Why the cloud, Sunny?
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10:40pm Jul 12 2010 (last edited on 10:46pm Jul 18 2010)
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Heres some of the chapter~
Vincent looked back at me. "Bethany!" He stumbled towards me, but I put my hand up, signaling him to stop. "No. You'll just fall through." I tarted sliding towards the edge, then climbed up onto the snow. Vincent helped me up, but I pushed him away once I was stable. "Come on." I walked into a forest, which was full of pine trees powdered with snow. I walked into a clearing, and saw Jake standing there, his back against a single tree. "Finally." He huffed, then walked towards Vincent. "Pipsqueak. Whats up?" He pushed Vincents shoulder gently, and Vincent punched his stomach harshly. "Touch me again, and you die. Old man. >:U" It was quite humorous, how they fought and Vincent usually won, and he would gloat for a few hours and forget about what had happend. Weeeep.
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10:55pm Jul 18 2010 (last edited on 2:47pm Jul 21 2010)
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I smiled at Jake, and walked over to him, my arms open for a hug. I knew Jake since I was just an infant, he fought with my father in the war, after my father had been killed, jake took care of me until I was 13 and sent me to live with on my own. Like any other girl my age was to do. He aslo sent Vincent to look over me, who was, back then, eager to please whoever he met.He smiled and hugged me with his muscular arms. " Ow! Youre hurting me with those meat chunks you call arms. :P" I joked, pulling awy from him. "Where are heading for, Jacob?" Vincent's voice filled my ears.
Just a little writing. :P
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3:46pm Jul 21 2010
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its fine if you don't finish, I write a lot about everything, vampires, shifter, dragons, and fantasy worlds, lol, never finished any of them! xD I did finish one but that was school homework!
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2:13am Jul 22 2010
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I like it... And I also don't finish any stories...Well I do 'finish' some but when I do they usually don't have a beginning... |
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12:02pm Jul 22 2010
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Thanks. I want to make it into a graphic novel, like anime, or manga.
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12:12am Jul 23 2010
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That would be cool.XD
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