A Tale


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Neiru

9:17pm Feb 28 2010 (last edited on 9:19pm Feb 28 2010)

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A simple whimsical tale. I first started it when I babysat my nephew. He needed to sleep, so I made up a story for him, although he's just two. :x But anyway, I decided to actually right it down. It's been a while since I free-wrote like this, so it may sound a bit formal. I've been writing essays lately, and it takes my writing a while for it to converge itself to another flow. xD

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tle to it, partly because I can't seem to think of a fitting one. So for now, it will just be called "A Tale". It's just a simple fantasy, not to be taken and compared to actual animals or persons in the real world. I mean, the cow is selfish in my story, so. 

This isn't the final version. I notice some parts don't flow well, so once I get off my lazy bottom, I'll try fixing it. @_@ 

 

 

A Tale

 

In a faraway land lived a prince, who had a humble yet majestic castle. It was a hot summer, and when the Prince had the time, he would go down to his village and help the workers with their load. After one such evening of work, a lady approached him.

“Your majesty,” she said, “Thank you for your hard work. It is a very hot summer, so please do accept this gift.” In her hand was a cracked cup with a scoop of soft, cold churned milk. The Prince accepted it and took a hearty bite. It was sweet like the taste of summer fruits and spiced with a bit of mint.

“It is delicious!” He cried jubilantly. “What is this concoction?”

“We call it ice cream, dear sir,” the lady smiled warmly.

And so, everyday that he worked in the village, the local lady would give him a bowl of ice cream. When the next summer came, he helped the villagers with their work and asked the lady if she had any ice cream left.

The lady coughed and swayed. “I am sorry, Prince, but I am a tad too sick to make you any ice cream.”

 “You are right; I deeply apologize,” the Prince said, and sent the lady home with a bundle of herbs. But when the Prince returned to his castle, he could not shake the taste of the dessert off his mind. So he asked his most trusted servant to look for ice cream in the castle. The servant ran up and down the stairs, but no cooks knew how to make it. Next, the servant went to the village and asked around where he may find the best ice cream.

“Well, the best ice cream comes from the most perfect milk, which is produced by only one cow. He lives in a flourishing pasture a little way from ‘ere,” a villager pointed to the southern road. “It is said that he may be one of the gods o’ harvest’s cow that is too selfish. The cow has never given milk before even when a thirsty man may stumble upon ‘im.”

The servant nodded gravely and told the Prince. The Prince, who could not leave his castle because of work, gave the trusted servant a bottle of water, food, a token, and a horse. At the rise of the sun the next day, the servant rode away into the pasture.

When he arrived, he whistled in shock. Despite the scorching sun boiling away at the earth, the pasture was a ring of shade and trees, with a white cow in the middle. No blotches of black where on it—only white, like soft snow. The cow mooed and eyed the stranger.

“If you come here for my milk, you will not get any. It is for me and only me. I am the best cow there is, and no one is worthy of my milk except for me.”

The servant approached warily. “But dear cow, I am thirsty. Will you let me die here when you can save my life?”

The cow nodded. The servant shook his head and left. He set up camp near a boulder and drank his bottle of water, quenching his throat. He sat on a rock and thought. Why is the pasture so shady? Why does the cow not wander around and only stays in his ring of shade? Perhaps, the servant thought, if the cow truly belongs to the gods of harvest, then he may not like the extreme heat of this summer too much. After all, even the plants do not like it. After some more pondering and a nap, the servant got up at noon and stuffed twigs into his empty water bottle. Then, he lighted a fire, lit a twig with it, and dropped it into the bottle so that a flame burned brightly in the gl*censored*. He strode to the pasture.

“Dear cow, if you will not give me milk, then I shall unleash this bottle of heat unto your pasture. It will be stifling hot like an oven.” The servant raised the glowing bottle.

The cow shifted and snorted. “Come here, servant.” The servant came, expecting the cow to finally grant his wish. “Lift the cork off the bottle and put it just under my nose.” The servant did so. With one black eye staring in the bottle, the cow gave a big snort. The fire in the bottle fluttered then died. “A trickery that only fools can think off,” the cow stated arrogantly. He charged at the servant, who ran away to his camp. 

 




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Neiru

9:18pm Feb 28 2010 (last edited on 9:20pm Feb 28 2010)

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At this time, night came and the sky was lit with fireflies and stars. The servant sighed. How can he get the cow to give him milk? He pondered and looked to the stars for guidance. When he did so, a firefly landed on his nose and made him sneeze. Suddenly, his eyes widened. The servant grinned and cleaned his bottle from the burnt twigs. Quickly, he fashioned a net from wood and leaves and went hunting for bugs. Once his bottle was brightly lit with fireflies, he ran once more to the cow.

“You again?” the cow said, exasperated. He flicked his tail.

“This is your last chance, cow. I have gone to a wizard of magic and bought a bottle of sunlight from his shop. If you shan’t give me milk, then I will unleash the light unto to your pasture.”

“Bring it closer, servant,” the cow replied. “And put it under my nose.” The servant obeyed, and when the cow blew into it, the light swayed yet still burned brightly. The cow tried once more, but it did not die.

The cow mooed nervously. “A bottle of sunlight indeed! Get your milk and get that blasted thing away from me!” He cried.

The servant shook his head. “On one condition: if you share your milk so that people will not think you are selfish.”

“Fool! I will be taken advantage of.”

The servant thought of this, and then said, “Then if they try to take advantage of you, you may have this.” He lifted the token from his pocket. It hung on a string, which he crowned upon the cow’s neck. “If you are bothered, you shall show them this. The person will cower in fear as it is the Prince’s insignia. Anyone who has it is blessed by the Royalty of this land. Indeed, it wields a very significant power—none shall bother you.”

The cow bleated and shook the necklace around his neck. It gleamed from the light of the fireflies. “This will do.” The cow snorted and nosed the servant. On the human’s hand, he breathed. It was like dumping your hand into a bucket of ice water. The servant’s back tingled. On his hand appeared a sealed pitcher of milk. It was so cold that it may have been frozen, but the milk sloshed around in its container. “The pitcher may refill itself, but only once a week. You must teach your Prince to control his cravings, as everything cannot be given to him. If you do not obey your part of the promise that I shall be protected, then I will bring doom to your land.”

The servant, in awe, bowed and tumbled to his camp. Carefully packed, he made his way back to the castle. When he turned back for one more glimpse, he saw the cow gleefully turning around so that the token swayed in the moonlight. And just next to him was a tall man in brilliant robes, petting the cow. One of the gods of harvest. The servant, although far away, can hear him faintly: “Well played”.

The servant arrived in the castle the next day and presented his winnings. The Prince, impressed and gratified, shared his ice cream with everyone in the village and would journey to the pasture once in a while with his servant to keep the cow company.

 

~The End. 




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NightmareDream

12:57pm Mar 12 2010

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Wow. That was so lovely and fluffy and good. I like it, a lot. Not too much to critique, either. ^^




Neiru

11:09pm Mar 14 2010

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Thank you very much; that means a lot. ^^ Especially the 'fluffy' part. <3



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NightmareDream

9:01am Mar 15 2010

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Your welcome. Hehehe. I like fluffiness ^^



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