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Ageha1304

8:53am Jan 21 2012 (last edited on 11:11am Jan 21 2012)

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Abyss

Chapter 1

Girl with slightly flushed cheeks, long chestnut hair and jade green eyes is standing and seems to be waiting for someone at the gate of school. Boy with short, blonde hair and deep blue eyes passes by her.She instantly calls out to him, her cheeks gain more color with each secondrnpassing. She nervously asks boy to follow her. Boy doesn’t seem to be motivated but follows her. Girl leads him further away from stream of students coming from school. He looks at her with impatient look in his eyes, she turns away,her cheeks burning red. She quietly whispers something under nose, boy can barely hear it. Then he starts laughing and walks away. Girl’s cheeks changed color from bright red to pale white. That was her first confession. And her first rejection.

That girl’s name is Agafi Moonlock. She is 17 year old high school student. Today she got enough courage to confess to the guy she liked ever since she first saw him.Guy’s name is Mike Bumblack. He is number 1 most popular guy in school and herngoes in same class as Agafi. Mike always seemed nice in class because he always helped girls out when they didn’t understand something. Agafi sometimes asked him for help as well and he didn’t reject her then. Mike was second smartest student in class and that is one of the reason he was noticed by girls whothought that Mike had both looks and brain. Agafi just like any other girl tried to impress Mike. Most girls tried to become prettier by putting on make-up but she studied hard and became number one best student in class.

Agafi seems to have got talent for anything except sports. She was loved by teachers and elder people who thought of girl as very smart, nice and polite person. Agafi respected elders because they could give her good advices which she, unlike herrnpeers, used as much as could. But because of love from elders she was hated by most of her schoolmates. They were jealous because teachers were never angry at her even if she was wrong.

Agafi thought Mike was different from others because he talked to her just like to any other girl. But she was terribly wrong. When she finally said words:

- I like you, will you please go out with me? - , Mike laughed at her terribly and said:

- There’s no way I’ll go out with such an ugly girl as you! –

After cruel rejection Agafi went home and locked herself in her room. She wasn’t crying but she was very disappointed. “I liked Mike for a year and now it turns out he’s not the person I imagined him to be. He’s just like any other guy in this school. I guess it’s time to drop the mask I’ve been putting on so far.”

Until now, she tried to act nice and friendly to Mike but it’s not needed anymore. She will act like self and not fear saying what she really thinks. Even despite that herrnheart ached a little she wasn’t too sad. “It could’ve been worse. He just rejected me in quite bad way. That’s all. Tomorrow I’m just going to ignore him and every other student and that’s it! End of story!”

With these thoughts Agafi calmed herself down and just like any evening she did her homework, washed up and went to sleep. Her mother and father as every evening came in herrnroom to ask how was her day. Agafi loved her parents. They were really kind and caring and would always look out for her.

Agafi’s mother,Elizabeth Moonlock, is an illustrator. She draws beautiful pictures for books, children’s magazines and even manga sometimes. Agafi always enjoyed watching mother draw because all her drawings turned out to be beautiful. One of most precious mother’s drawings is portrait of Agafi. Her mother drew it so beautiful that each time Agafi looked at it, she really felt as if she is beautiful.

Agafi’s father,Victor Mooonlock, on the other hand is a businessman who owns a very successful company. Due all the success in company he has lots of free time to spend with his family. When girl was small Victor would always let sit her in his lap and play with buttons on shirt. When Agafi finally fell asleep father would take her to bed, kiss her forehead and quietly walk out.

Yes, Agafi indeed has a very good family. Unfortunately she’s the only child but she isn’t too sad over that because she has a very good friend that is like a sibling to her. Her name is Nicole Tarabur. She is lives in neighboring house and her parents are good friends with Agafi’s parents. Even though now Nicole is studying abroad they still call each other and chat a lot. Nicole is the one person Agafi can really thrust. Ever since being little kids they have trusted each other their secrets and protected each other.

Agafi did hang out with few girls sometimes, but they couldn’t exactly be called friends. They just wanted Agafi to help them study, but she didn’t mind. By teaching other students Agafi herself remembered lot of stuff and learned herself. And in exchange for teaching them, Agafi’s “friends” helped her as well.

Next day camernfast. Agafi wasn’t thinking about yesterday. She just erased all her feelings for Mike. She didn’t worry about rejections and thought “It can’t be any worse then this”. She walked to school alone just like every day. Way to school wasn’t long, she lived quite close to school actually.

When she entered school, she felt as if everyone were looking at her. Something was wrong. She started to become careful. She slowly walked to her classroom and before entering it, tried to listen what were classmates talking about. first voice she heard was Mike’s:

- …you all should have seen her face! It looked ridiculous! – Agafi heard Mike laughing and along with him all class. Then other guy from class named Jack Vastori(Agafi could easily reorganize all her classmate voices) asked Mike:

- Maybe you should have dated her? I mean, she is a bit plain, but her face is cute. – In answer Mike started laughing louder and scornfully said:

- Me? Dating her? NO WAY.She has no sex appeal at all. Besides she’s so incredibly weak. I bet if she heard what I’m saying right now she would be crying like a baby! In fact, I’m sure she cried yesterday all night! – with those words Agafi couldn’t take it anymore. In anger she slammed door open and looked at surprised faces of her classmates. She saw Mike’s surprised face and took her chance to attack:

- So I would be crying huh? Excuse me but I don’t see any tears on my face even though I heard ALL that you just said! – Mike’s lips turned into smirk again. Most guys started laughing, but girls, except for few, looked at Agafi with compassion.Some of them were rejected by Mike as well. Mike stepped forward and started talking in disrespectful manner:

- Oh, so you’re a strong girl! That is a bit of surprise! But what do I expect?! You are so quiet that knowing what you are actually like is impossible! In fact you’re like a ghost! Nobody sees you and nobody cares for you….- Mike was interrupted by some girls that even though liked him, defended Agafi because she helped them many times.

- Mike! That is not true! Agafi is not like a ghost! She is very kind! Agafi, don’t let that guy take best of you! Show him what you’ve got. – Mike started laughing once more but Agafi smiled. Girls approved that she showed what she got. So she will show it!

Agafi walked close to Mike and stood like that for a while. Mike looked down on her and laughed:

- So what will you do now? – Girls looked at Agafi worried. Guys too stayed silent and didn’t dare to interrupt show that was going on. Agafi looked in Mike’s eyes with scornful look. She saw nothing but Mike’s big ego in there. She swigged her hand back and punched Mike in face with all her strength.

- I’ll do this!– Whole class looked at Agafi in disbelief. The most shocked one was Mike whose nose was bleeding a little. Then his face changed from shock to anger. He wanted to attack Agafi but bell ringed and teacher came into class. Everyone including Agafi took their seat. Only Mike kept standing in front of class with bleeding nose. Teacher looked at him and said in slight shock:

- Mike, why is your nose bleeding? Did you get into fight again? Go to nurse’s office now! – Mike smirked and said:

- Mr. Hempton, Agafi punched me in nose! She must be ….. – Teacher interrupted him.

- Agafi punched you?! Mike you sure have gone low trying to set up girl like her. There’s no way girl could hit you hard enough to get your nose bleeding. If you keep telling such lies you will be punished but now go to nurse’s office. – Mike wanted to protest but stopped since he knew it was no use. He left class and glared at Agafi while he did.

Classmates from all sides encouraged Agafi and said that she did the right thing. Even guys were impressed by Agafi’s guts. But she knew this isn’t the end. Mike will definitely want revenge so she has to be ready.

Next lessons went by fast. At short recesses she was surrounded by everyone so Mike couldn’t get to her, but that didn’t last long. School day came to an end and everyone went home. Agafi also tried to quietly go home but Mike caught her half way and looked at her with anger.

- You’re coming with me! – he grabbed Agafi’s hand and started pulling her inside school. Soon they reached old cabinet which wasn’t used for studies anymore. Mostly students went to eat lunch there or read but now it was empty. Mike pushed Agafi against the wall that way leaving no chance of escape.

- I bet you feel all great now huh? Punching me in face! Feeling all high and mighty! I’m going to make you pay for humiliation you did to me! – he already leaned closer to her, but then suddenly he was pulled back and tossed aside. It was Jack who did it.

- Leave her alone, Mike! You already did enough. – Mike clenched his fist and yelled at Jack.

- Had enough?! Are you out of your mind?! You saw what that b**** did to me!!! – Mike tried charging at Agafi again but Jack once again stopped him. Suddenly two Agafi’s classmates appeared and covered her from Mike’s angry sight. It was Mary Plameri and Felicia Jenkins. They were the closest thing Agafi had to friends.

- Mike, enough! Agafi isn’t the first girl you rejected. Count that punch this morning is from all the girls you were mean to. – Mike opened his mouth to ob
ject but then something unexpected happened.

Ground started grumbling and shaking and everyone fell down. Jack quickly got on his feet again and tried to get girls up as well.

- It’s an earthquake! We have to get of school as fast as possible! – Somehow everyone got on their feet and carefully started moving to school exit. Shaking didn’t stop. Infact it got stronger. But strangely nothing was collapsing. Vases stayed at their place, pencils didn’t fall off desks. Everything looked normal except for ground shaking.

But it turned out that ground wasn’t shaking at all. Some kind of strange thing opened in front of classmates. Felicia screamed.

- What the hell is that?! – Mary was so shocked that she couldn’t say a word. Agafi tried to answer as calmly as she could, but she heard that her own voice sounded scared.

- That looks like some kind of wormhole. – Felicia looked even more terrified then before. Mike angrily screamed at Agafi.

- And what the hell can that thing do to us? – Agafi looked at Mike and screamed twice as loud as he did.

- Hell if I know! You think I have ever seen such a thing! – Everyone tried to get further away from it, but they felt that it was sucking them in. Mary cried in fear.

- It’s sucking us in!!! – No matter how hard they tried, none could resist strength of this wormhole. One by one they all got sucked in it.


Story and all characters in it belong to me. Also this story isn't going to book contest, I'm doing it for fun.

Sorry for grammar mistakes, it turned out to be quite a mess at beginning.

If anyone dares to steal this story, I'll kill him/her/it with a rusty fork.

Ageha1304

8:26am Jan 22 2012 (last edited on 8:28am Jan 22 2012)

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Chapter 2

Agafi was on floor. She wasn’t hurt but very confused. One second she was in her school with the rumbling wormhole in front of her, and next one she was here. “Where am I? What is this place? Where are the others?” She looked around and saw dark room with no windows. Only light came from lonely candle at corner of room. 
Agafi didn’t have the time to look around whole room when someone violently grabbed her clothes and lifted her up in air. She saw that it was guy that could 23 years old at most. He had short, black hair that covered his ears; cold, silver eyes that made her tremble in fear and very beautiful face. Agafi has not seen such a beautiful man before. But she hasn’t seen anyone as scary before either. It was weird that such beauty was so scary. Man looked at her angrily but calmly asked her:
- Who are you and how did you get in here? – His calm and cold voice scared Agafi even more. When Agafi didn’t answer, he clenched her clothes and lifted her up even higher. She could barely breathe.
- Answer me, you foolish girl! – When stranger saw that she couldn’t breathe, he threw her down to floor and turned his sight into darkness.
- Glom, light up more candles, I want to see who is this girl! – something in darkness moved, but Agafi couldn’t see what. She just heard that creature answered in hoarse voice.
- But, Master, you know how much light burns my eyes, - man got angry and yelled at poor creature.
- Well, you’ll have to bear with it for now! Be happy that I’m keeping only candle in each room because, you foolish slobs, can’t take daylight! – Creature whimpered and lit up two candles. When Agafi finally saw creature she could barely hold her scream. Creature was terribly ugly and untidy. It had green skin, was no bigger then a 10 year old child and walked with bended back. 
He placed one candle on a little table that wasn’t too far away from Agafi but other gave to his master and quickly returned in darkness again. When Agafi looked at man again, she became even more shocked then before. He had black wings attached to his back. She didn’t notice them earlier because of dark. She also saw that man was incredibly tall, around 185 centimeters which was far more then her own height. 
Man bent down closer to Agafi while holding candle and carefully looked at her. He looked bit surprised as well. He straightened up again but he didn’t take his eyes off Agafi even for a second. Agafi couldn’t look away from him either. Despite him being scary and having wings he still was very charming. 
- How strange! I haven’t seen creature like her on this planet. Could it be that you’re trying to hide who you are by changing shape? – man’s eyes became scary and threatening. Agafi took a deep breath and finally spoke.
- No, I cannot change shape even if I wanted to. – Man started thinking again. Then he turned to darkness and asked his servant:
- Have you seen such a creature before? – servant whose name was Glom quickly answered.
- No, Master, this is the first I have seen such an ugly creature! – Agafi’s quick temper took over and she yelled at little troll.
- Who are you calling ugly, you bag of slime?! – Man started laughing and she became quiet again. Agafi hoped she hasn’t made him angry.
- How interesting, you actually have a spark in you, don’t you? Tell me, please, how did you get here! – Agafi looked in his eyes and saw that they were not angry so she decided that it’s fine if she tells him what happened.
- I’m not sure myself. I was in school with my classmates when suddenly everything started rumbling and shaking. At first I thought it was an earthquake but then some wormhole opened up in front of us and sucked us in. Next second, I was here in this room, - for a second man was quiet and then he started talking with gentle voice.
- I see, so you’re a human. It’s been a while since I saw one. How strange that you got teleported right here, – a smile appeared on his face. He looked at Agafi just like tiger looks at bunny. One second she thought he was really going to eat her. 
- My name is Damon Heavenwing and now you will listen carefully to all I’m saying but first tell me what is your name, human girl? – Agafi felt that Damon has something planned but she couldn’t do anything. She knew that in this new world, she has fallen into, she will have to obey every word this man says or die.
- I’m Agafi. Agafi Moonlock. – Damon’s smile grew bigger and he lifted Agafi up from the floor and started to lead her through darkness. 
- Agafi, listen carefully now. Everything I now say will be your only chance to survive on this planet. You’re lucky that you’re human or else I would have killed you already. From now on you are working for me and me only and if you dare to deny me I will kill you were you stand, understood? – His voice became so scary that Agafi could barely breathe from fear but somehow she managed to answer.
- Yes! – Damon smiled and led her in some light room. It had shelves on both sides of walls and they were all filled with books. In middle of room was table and next to it two armchairs. Damon showed her at one of armchairs and she obediently sat down. He sat in chair across hers.
- Good. This world you are now in is called Abyss. You can forget everything you were taught on Earth because here those rules will only kill you. Here animals are completely different from those in your world. People are different here as well. In your world all humans are similar but here there are no humans so everything is different, – something got Agafi thinking so she without thinking blurred out a question.
- How do you know about Earth? – Damon’s ex
pression didn’t change.
- I was once in there. Just like you I got sucked in wormhole except that I did that on purpose but you did not. Anyway, in this world things that you thought existed only in fairytales are real. Dragons, mermaids, unicorn, demons, angels…. All of them are alive here! As you see yourself I’m a demon. 
- You’re a demon? But I thought demons are suppose to be ugly with horns, tail and goats hooves but you are really handsome! – at her last comment Agafi blushed and Damon snickered.
- So you find me charming? Well, that’s how it’s suppose to be. You see in this world there are two supreme races: angels and demons. Demons are not ugly at all as you imagine them to be. In fact everything here will new to you. I got bit carried away a little. Most important thing is that humans can become the strongest creatures of this world if they want to, - this surprised Agafi a lot. She couldn’t imagine that something as fragile as human could even stand up to all the beasts of this world.
- Yes, I know it is surprising for you, but you’ll have to get used to surprises. First things first, give me your arm! – Agafi carefully looked at Damon and then stretched out her arm. He grabbed and held tight, then with other arm he drew something on her palm. After that he put his palm on hers and pain entered in her body. She wanted to break away but Damon held her so tight that she couldn’t even move. After, what seemed forever to Agafi, Damon let her hand go and when she looked at it she saw a burn mark on her palm that reminded a feather.
- This mark will give you power to fight. Angels and demons are made out of two things: human essence and jewels. Once they die their human essence turns into air where it searches for new body to live in. I believe it is called soul on Earth. As for jewels they stay on place creature died. For beasts of this world these jewels are useless but for humans they give power. If you absorb one of these jewels you will gain all the abilities of creature that this jewel was possessing, - Agafi fell in her thoughts. “If human beats an angel or demon that means it becomes stronger every time in fights. That is amazing.” Damon noticed her amazement and smiled.
- So you like thought of power? That’s good because you’ll need power. Now your mission is to kill half demon half angel named Lucas Cross. Gain as much power as you want but kill that guy. His jewel you will bring to me as trophy and if you refuse to do as I say I will kill you now. So what will it be, Agafi? Will you kill Lucas or die yourself? - He looked at Agafi with look which she could not understand. She didn’t think long and answered him with voice full of confidence.
- I’m going to kill him! – On these words Damon smiled and leaned closer to Agafi.
- Good decision. If you succeed I will reward you. But now go! Troll on exit will give you everything you need to survive. Only worry you have is to complete your mission. – After these words Damon stood up and walked out of door. Agafi took deep breath, stood up and started walking in this new, to her unknown world.
Ageha1304

9:49am Jan 29 2012

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Chapter 3

When she exited something that looked like a castle, creature that looks similar to one that served Damon, gave her big bag in which it said is everything she needs. Castle was high up in hill and from there she could all neighborhood. All around castle there’s a thick forest with four roads that lead each their own way. One on north leads to sea, on south to small village, on east to big city, but on west down to river. She didn’t know exactly were to go so she first checked what did Damon put in this bag.
When she opened it she saw that there were other small bags sorted inside big one. There were 7 of them total. In first one there was little bit food: fruits, meat and bread. In second there were 3 bottles of water. In third there was sleeping bag, in fourth medical supplies, in fifth things needed to get fireplace started. Sixth bag was full of money and a little note that explained how much worth is each piece. In seventh there was book in which all creatures of Abyss were described and also few notes. Agafi took one out and read it carefully. “Your house is in Elf city which you can see on east from castle, Moonshine street, house number 13. Before going in city put on robe. When you get in city go into first house on right. There you will meet old woman. Give her red note I wrapped with other ones. She will tell you what to do next.”
Agafi looked in bag to find the robe. It was in eighth bag which she didn’t notice before. It had few pieces of clothes and jewelry in it. Agafi ignored all the beautiful stones and put on black robe. She quickly packed all things back into bag and started walking towards Elf city. Going was easy but scary since road led through forest. Few times she thought that something was watching her from behind but when she turned back there was nothing.
After about 20 minutes of walking through forest, she finally reached Elf city. It was almost right next to forest. City looked very old fashioned but beautiful and somehow majestic. Agafi looked with amazement at castle like houses. She didn’t forget what Damon said in note and walked into first house to the right. It was small and different from all the other houses in city but she couldn’t say that it looked bad. Actually it was kind of comfortable and in nice warm colors. 
Agafi hesitated a little, but then took deep breath and knocked the door. Soon door was opened by small-sized old wrinkly woman. She looked kind of angry to be troubled and she asked Agafi in annoyed tone:
- What do you want? – Agafi didn’t like the tone of woman but she had to do as Damon said if she wanted to live. She took out red note and handed it to old woman.
- Please, read this! – granny at first looked at girl with  intense gaze, then took the note and quickly read it. After reading it her ex[injection]pression changed to shocked one. She quickly grabbed Agafi and tried to pull her inside.
- Come inside! Quick! – Agafi didn’t resist and soon she felt warm air of house. It was small and not too spacey inside but it sure was warm. Old granny looked at her with unbelieving look.
- Please, take off your robe. – Agafi did as she said. When she took robe down, granny’s eyes grew even bigger then they already were. She circled around Agafi and looked at her from all possible angles. After 5 minutes of investigating old woman finally spoke:
- Without a doubt you really are a human. What a lucky day I have! How interesting! I’m finally able to see a real human. Tell me, girl, how did you get to this world?
- Through wormhole. It sucked me and my classmates in.
- Wormhole you say? And classmates? Does that mean that there are more humans in this world now? – granny’s excitement grew with each second.
- Yes, I guess there are, but I don’t know were exactly are they, - for a while everything was silent. Granny looked like she was thinking about something hard. Then she jumped up so fast that Agafi almost fell on her back.
- Okay, I’m going to help you, but you will tell me everything you know about your world! – Agafi was shocked of granny’s requests. She knows quite a lot about Earth even though she is sure that’s not even one third of it all.
- Everything?! But that will take like forever! – granny didn’t mind Agafi’s shock and just continued peacefully.
- That’s okay, we got time. You will tell while I train you. But now I shall lead you to your house. It’s not too far from here, - Agafi only now realized that doesn’t know old woman’s name.
- What’s your name, granma? – granny’s face got red and she yelled loud.
- Never call me granma again!!! I’m only 327 years young, - Agafi’s shock couldn’t be said in words. 
- 327?! How can someone even live that long?! – granny was confused about Agafi’s shock and just answered in light manner.
- That’s not long at all. Well, you are younger then me, but you are atleast 100 years old,- girl didn’t know how to take it, as compliment or insult.
- 100?! No, I’m 17 years old, - now faces switched owners, granny’s face was just as shocking as Agafi’s a second ago.
- 17?! No way! How can someone so young be so smart?! Humans sure are mysterious creatures. You’ll tell me everything later. And my name is Babilia, - Babilia quickly went into other room and returned with some little bottle that had something like powder in it.
- Please bend down a little! – Agafi did what Babilia said and then witch carefully opened bottle, took little bit of powder and rubbed some of it on each ear and the rest of it she blew in Agafi’s face and hair.
- Now, that’s much better. Take a look in mirror, Agafi, - Agafi looked in mirror and didn’t know should she be horrified or impressed. Her hair was now white, eyes were sky blue, skin was even paler then before but ears were pointy.
- What did you do with my hair?! I really liked my hair color you know! – Babilia just chuckled at Agafi’s comment.
- Don’t worry, effect will wear off after few hours and your hair will return to normal. But let us not waste more time. Follow me! – Agafi followed the Babilia further into city. She saw that city was full with human like creatures that had light hair and skin and pointy ears. “Those must be elfs. Babilia must have used the powder just to make me blend in with the crowd,” is what Agafi thought.
They didn’t walk too long, just about 8 minutes before they reached Moonshine street. All houses there looked really beautiful. They were light colored and with little towers on roofs. Soon she saw house number 13. It really wasn’t hard to spot it since it was bigger then all the other houses though it was also light colored. Just before entering gates Babilia turned to face Agafi. Agafi didn’t understand why did she stop.
- Why did you stop? 
- Why?! I don’t have the key to house. It must be with you, - “Now when I think about it, I did saw weird key at bottom of bag pack”. Agafi quickly opened her bag and after 5 minutes of digging in stuff, she finally found the key. She inserted key in gate and in easily opened up.
Babilia walked in first and as if she already knew the house, she headed to the backyard of it. Agafi silently followed. She was amazed by what she saw. Everything was so beautiful. There was beautiful fruit garden and lots of flowers and even a fountain at backyard. Agafi completely forgot were she was, threw of her bag and started running around the garden with dare feet. Grass was really soft as if it was a big, fluffy carpet. Agafi saw that all the trees had different kind of fruit in them but none of them were the ones from Earth. She carefully looked around to see at least one fruit similar to ones she knows.
Finally she noticed small tree which was full with plum-like fruit which somehow reminded her of feather. Agafi automatically looked at her palm which had mark of feather on it. But she didn’t think long before she took one of fruit and ate it. Fruit was delicious and the hunger even made it taste better. Babilia shocked yelled at Agafi.
- You crazy girl, do you want to die?! Some of those fruit are poisonous! – At that note Agafi almost chocked up.
- What?! Poisonous?! Who keeps poisonous fruits in their garden?! – Babilia just started at Agafi shocked and after a while sighed.
- I guess humans don’t do that. Luckily for you, fruit you just ate is not poisonous, but next time ask me before you put something in your mouth. Anyway, from tomorrow on I’m going to train you to fight with demons so today you should rest and enjoy yourself because you won’t be able to do that for a while, - this got Agafi curious.
- Why not? 
- Because you will have to train hard every day, - once again Agafi couldn’t help but wonder what will Babilia teach her.
- What exactly am I going to train? My mind to remember all monsters weakneses? 
- That will come later. At beginning you will train your body because in order to survive in this world you will have to have not only strong mind but also strong body, - Agafi couldn’t say anything before Babilia already walked away from her.
Agafi was good at many things but physical exercises aren’t one of them. She always had trouble at sports lesson which was just once a week. Now she will have to do training 10 times more intense then sports and every day. Agafi already thought that she won’t be able to make it.
All remaining day she explored her house. It was really warm and big. It had 15 bedrooms, giant libray, 2 kitchens, 2 small dining room and one big in which could fit at least 60 people. Agafi chose herself room at third floor. It was bit smaller then others but it was really beautiful. 
After washing up Agafi decided to put in wardrobe those few clothes she had with her. But when she opened wardrobe, she saw the most beautiful dresses she had ever seen. She looked over all of them and decided to put one on. It was green and slim with exposed shoulders and knees. Under the dress she noticed matching pair of shoes. Then Agafi looked in her back and took out one of necklaces Damon packed for her. It was silver chain with emerald feather on it. When she looked into mirror she couldn’t recognize herself, she looked like a princess.
Suddenly some voice from behind startled her.
- Wow, green definitely is your color! You even shocked me a little with your beauty! – Agafi turned around and saw Damon sitting in her bed with a smile on his face. Agafi instantly blushed at his comment.
- How…how did you get in here? – Damon laughed a little, stood up and walked really close to Agafi.
- This is my house you know and that dress you’re wearing is also mine…..
- I’m sorry…I’m going to put it right back, - Agafi already wanted to go and undress when Damon grabbed her arm and pulled her back.
- Don’t worry, you are mine as well, meaning you can have this dress and all the other dresses in this house, - Once again Agafi blushed but Damon doesn’t seem to have notice it.
- I hope you will succeed in your mission because it would be a shame to kill such beautiful creature as yourself, - his voice was completely different, it was scary again. After saying that he instantly disappeared but Agafi just stared at place he was second ago. Her face has never been so pale.
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11:28am Feb 7 2012

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Chapter 4

While Agafi has fallen into hands of demon prince Damon, others were scattered across whole Abyss. Each of them has fallen in hands of creatures that think of humans are nothing more but fighting tools. They were treated well but creatures of this world didn’t respect humans and Damon was no exception. And neither were leaders of those groups who got hold one of other teens.
Mary was lucky because she got in hands of kind monsters, to be exact fairies. They were smaller in size then humans, had butterfly-like wings and delicately built body. When Mary realized herself first at Abyss she thought it was all a dream. Only when leader of all fairies Queen Freya talked to her she finally understood the truth. She was crying a lot then but fairies were flying around her all the time bringing food, water, warmer clothes and new handkerchiefs.
After calming down Mary was once again visited by Queen Freya.
- Are you feeling better now, child? – Mary liked the soft-sounding queen’s voice. It was really calming and Mary believed that this voice didn’t know how to lie. She felt completely safe with Queen Freya around.
- Yes, thank you, Your Majesty! – Queen smiled and gently wrapped hands around Mary’s shoulders. 
- My dear child, I need your help! You see, right now in this world, war is going on between races and since fairies are the weakest race, we have big chance of being completely destroyed! – Mary gasped for air and almost started crying. Fairies have been so nice to her, she couldn’t believe someone would like to destroy such peaceful creatures.
- Oh my God, that’s awful! I wish I could do something to help! – Queen Freya secretly smiled because she has now heard what she wanted. Mary thought she smiled because she was happy to hear that.
- You would really help us?! That’s such a blessing! God has sent us human to save our race. Mary, are you ready to train and fight side by side with us? – Mary was shocked that she was asking that, but desperate look on queen’s face convinced her to fight.
- Yes, I will! I will do all I can to help fairies! – Every fairy now cheered up. Queen Freya secretly whispered some fairy in ear and she instantly left. That fairy went to get everything ready for Mary’s training.
Deep in forest were it was light, warm and really nice, Felicia wake up. She was really scared and didn’t know were to go. Even though forest was full of light, she was scared by sudden changes. Suddenly she heard whispers around her. 
- Is she human?
- She looks human…
- It cannot be…
- This must be a blessing…
Felicia couldn’t take it anymore and started running away as fast as she could. Then something grabbed her softly, yet she couldn’t move a muscle. Soft female voice whispered.
- Don’t be afraid. We won’t hurt you! – Felicia calmed down a little and strong hands let her go. She looked at one who grabbed her and saw a whole bunch of people that looked like trees. Or maybe those were trees that looked like people. She didn’t know.
- Who-who are you? – The closest standing creature smiled and said in soft voice.
- We all are dryads and you are human. I know this is very sudden for you, but just come with us we will explain everything to you. – Felicia wasn’t sure what to do at first but then she decided it’s for the best to go with dryads. Soon she will too begin her training.
Jack also got lucky. Get got teleported right in angel main castle. At beginning guards were confused how did Jack get in so suddenly and wanted to attack but eldest angel prince reorganized Jack to be a human. After that Jack was treated with respect. 
After a week of living in Main Castle, Jack was called to meet the Queen and the King. Queen Gladesia and King Chronos were respected by all angel race and not only them. They were respected so much because they were one of few pure-blooded six-wing angels. Six-wing angels are much stronger and faster then normal angels that’s why they are respected so much. Jack too felt deep respect for them. 
King and Queen didn’t try and get Jack’s respect by giving him food, they just told him everything that was happening in Abyss right now. Jack listened to royal couple and only sometimes threw in few questions.
- Right now, a war between races is taking place in Abyss. – Jack was amazed at how majestic King’s voice sounded.
- Has it always been like that?
- No, not at all. Abyss once was the most beautiful and peaceful place imaginable. It was ruled by 4 main queens and kings: 1 pair from fairies, 1 pair from dryads, 1 pair from angels and 1 pair from demons. It was a perfect harmony which was never ruined. Until demon king and queen changed. – Here Queen took over story to let King take a breath.
- At beginning it all seemed normal. Demon Queen soon gave birth to baby boy. He had very big potential and he was loved by parents very much. But then one day Demon King went to the Enchanted Forest in order to get special herb for his son. It is said that the one who eats this herb will be immortal. – King took over story this time and Queen took a sip of tea that was standing on table next to her throne.
- But something horrible happened! Dragon who was and is guarding the forest attacked Demon King and killed him. Demon Queen was broken by these news because she thought nothing could beat her beloved. Queen was crying for a very long time. Even her little son couldn’t cheer her up and soon she started avoiding him. When it was thought that Demon Queen has finally gotten over her husband’s death something shocking happened. Queen tried to kill herself and she would have done it if her son wouldn’t have stopped her. Since that day she hated her son and would yell at him whenever she saw him. – Jack was little confused of this story.
- This story is touching and all, but what does it has to do with war? – Queen laughed at human’s impatience.
- It will come. Anyway, since Queen’s relatives were worried about her and little boy they called an angel healer in order to help her. Oh, they later regretted they did that. Healer indeed helped her feel better but in what way? He made her a mother again!
- Oh my God! You’re saying that Demon Queen fell in love with angel?!
- Indeed! Soon a baby was born. It was half demon half angel. He was even stronger then his older half brother and that’s why was hated by him. Actually little boy was hated by everyone except for his parents. Demon royalty couldn’t take that some halfling could have possibility of becoming a king, that’s why he and his mother were thrown out of Demon Kingdom. The Demon Queen’s firstborn son became ruler of Demon Kingdom and for a while it seemed that it was the end of it. – King’s ex[injection]pression turned dark and serious.
- After bit less then twenty years a new country arose for the first time. It was called the Balance country and was ruled by old Demon Queen’s second son. He became ruler of country in which only halflings were living. Mostly those were half demons half angels as himself but there were other races mixed as well in it. New Demon Prince couldn’t take his half brother’s guts for daring to even show his face back in this world. Prince’s heart grew dark and evil and now he has started war not only against his brother but against all other races as well.
- But why? 
- Prince couldn’t stand the idea that more halflings could be born that’s why he decided to wipe out everyone that isn’t pure demon.
- That’s awful! – Jack was truly shocked by these events that few days ago would have been nothing more then a nightmare to him.
- Yes, indeed! That’s why we now ask you, human, to help us fight against Demon Prince. – King and Queen both looked at Jack with hope.
- Me? But how can I help you? I’m just a human! I have no such power as you do! 
- You have more power then all angels combined. You just need to unlock it. Please, help us! – Queen pleaded and Jack felt that he couldn’t say “no” to these people.
- Okay, if there is someway I can help you, then I will! – King and Queen cheered up and soon Jack’s training began. 
Mike had it worse then those three. He fell in hands of Lucas Cross. When Mike woke up first thing he saw was tall man with one eye green, other silver, long white hair and wings – one black, other white. Somehow this creature was scaring him.
- Who are you?! – At first Lucas seemed angry but then he calmed down and smiled.
- My name is Lucas Cross and I’m half demon half angel. – Mike couldn’t believe what he saw. He thought it was a nightmare.
- Demon?! Angel?! How is that possible?! They don’t exist! – Lucas laughed at Mike’s comment.
- I’m afraid they do and now you are going to be their puppet. From now on you serve me and only me! 
- What makes you think I will listen to you?! – Lucas with ease lifted Mike up and threw him against the wall. Mike now rolled on floor in pain.
- Because if you don’t, I will kill you! Listen now! From today you’re going to train to beat one certain person, you got it?! – Mike somehow managed to stand up.
- Yes! But who do I have to beat? – At this question Lucas smiled.
- You have to beat my brother Damon Heavenwing!

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