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Abyss of Love (poem)


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f0rg0tt3n

11:31pm Dec 23 2008

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Posts: 18

~Abyss of Love~

I'm falling for you,

down && down,

waiting for you to catch me,

but you never do,

&& i will fall,

left unable to see.

Left in the Abyss of Love,

in which I can never leave,

not until you rescue me,

&& falling I'm a broken dove,

cuz you just can't love me.

I try to use my wings to fly,

but they just won't work,

And I can't figure out why,

covered in this dirt.

This filth is what Love's left me,

feeling like I do,

because of the person I am,

&& how I how I will never be good enough for you.

slowly as I fall and Fall,

into the bottompless pit,

My heart breaks all&&all,

and i lose it bit by bit.

It'll never whole again,

always in this state,

It was my hearts choice to let you win,

to fall for you all over again,

While I'd watch and wait.

&& so i fall and cry and cry,

and you don't even care,

you don't even notice,

that im not there.

Save me from who I am,

&& who I'll never be,

&& save me from the nothingness,

Where my heart should be.

 




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LostHope

1:29pm Dec 31 2008

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um...inatead of the && why don't you just say and?

Even though I think its quite nice, a bit emo

 I like




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f0rg0tt3n

8:00pm Dec 31 2008

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Posts: 18
thank you...I guess the && thing is just a bad habit.



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