Well I really want to be a writer so I wrote a deion for the Ardur. Here it is:

The Ardur is an extremly gental creatu. Unlike any other Reiflem creatu it is more like a puppy than a serpent. Living in the heart of active volcaneos, they can withstand temperatures well over 10,000 Degrees.  While living in these temperatures the crystals grow on there back and harden forming into formidable weapons. Yet you will never see them using it unless necessary preferring peace over violence. Finding an egg is lucky and you can be sure you will have a loving friend for life.

Mneh. I also don't appreciate numbers in the deion, You could say 'ten thousand' instead? It makes it look sloppy.

And yes, Riyo. I would prefer a literate deion of the Ardur.

Other than that, it's....creative.

Spelling mistakes can easily be fixed up using a spell-check, you should always run your writing past one - even the most careful writers make errors. Very creative, well done - write heaps, you'll get better and better.

Numbers only need to be written out if they are under 10.