Awesomesauce Excerpts


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WolfieBelle

3:58am Jan 1 2011

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Okeh. These are excerpts that randomly popped into my mind from nowhere.

1st Excerpt-

Three thumps woke me from my sleep. I couldn't quite get my eyes open until he actually knocked on my door. When his knuckles hit the door, I shot up like a rocket. Before I knew it, I was standing on the edge of my bed with my hairbrush in my hand, ready to attack him. Then, I noticed who he was.

He was the one who watched me. 

I was scared, scared yet happy. He stood there lingering in the hallway, like a puff of smoke. You could see him, smell him, but no matter what, you couldn't catch him. He was tall, about six feet tall. Of course that must not seem very tall to you, but it's very tall to me, given my short height.

"Are you alright?" His voice was like silver. Emanating a beautiful warmth from it. I couldn't choke out another word before he was gone, slipping away back into thin air.

That slippery puff of smoke.




Love is all we need~

housesangels

4:46pm Jan 1 2011

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Beautiful.... I like that random excerpt from nowhere. I have those sometimes too.

But still, I like that it's a mysterious, weird kinda story. Keep writing it! It would be a really cool story to read,



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WolfieBelle

10:22pm Jan 13 2011

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2nd Excerpt-

It's the small things that matter in life. Everything plays a part in what happens next, like dominoes.

Then, something shook me from my thoughts. She sat there on the edge of my bed.

"Zoria," she said. "I can't believe you didn't tell me about your first date! You turd!"

Yes, this girl is no ordinary girl. I can sort of see ghosts. They follow me, watch me, sometimes they even help me. But this ghost, Laura, was attached to my house. Laura looked at me and started laughing. Ghosts can interract with objects, but it takes alot of energy out of them. Due to them not being alive anymore, they are free to go between realms as they please.

I gave her a smile, and she laughed too. "So how was it?" Laura looked at me happily.

Yes, I'm gossiping with a dead girl, get over it.




Love is all we need~

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